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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
Wow ...this is so creative my dear...u managed to infuse humour in such a sad predicament...my pyaari dramabaaz rudy is back...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
Hahaha. ..this was awesome
Rudy save your brother.

Ab Robin entry marega...Anika ko Dhaka lagega, she will hit her head and memory wapas.

The Robin and anika respective parmashwari, parmashwari ko shadi ke mandal se utha lenge.

This is going to be so much fun...


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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
Amazing work dear 👏. Can't wait to read the next part. Rudy ke dialogues were too good 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
Awesome. Why shivay himself can't stop the wedding??? According to him, anika ki memory gayi hai uski nahin. Damn you shivay.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
It's awesome..
Don't stop, please continue..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
Anni another awesome story by you🤗 I can really imagine this happening in the show...Rudra ke dialogues🤣
Ekdum khidki tod dialogue bola usne...SRK style🤣

PM me the 2nd part please!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37

TS-"Shaadi...Ek Baar Phir..!"

Shot 2:(Last)

The panditjii asks them to stand up. Shivaay gulps giving a terrorized expression. Tia reflects the same expression. The pandit jii gives Shivaay a few flowers to hold. Shivaay blankly stares at the door. Remembering how the first time he was about to get married to Tia, Anika had ran in through the door and stopped the wedding.

That now seemed a distant dream. How he wanted her to do the same thing yet again!

As his eyes looked up at the door, he saw a figure running in. "Phat the wuck!" is this a time to daydream he cursed himself. He blinked a few times. Yes a figure was running inside." Yeh ho kya raha hain!" he whispered to himself.

He hands over the flowers to his mother who stood beside him " Mom isse pakdiye ek minute!" he rubs his eyes and opens. Yes. There was a girl running in. He turned to see where Anika had been standing she was still their rooted to the same spot. He turned his gaze to the door" Ab Yeh Kaun Hain?"

All looked towards the door at the running girl. She stops by the mandap trying to catch her breath. As her breathing normalises she sees the mandap "...Shaadi ...phirse...Nahi..!"

Shivaay was beyond shocked-"Excuse me! Tum ho kaun!"

All look shocked at the girl dressed in bridal attire.

"Hum... Gaur Kumari Sharma...!"

Rudra-"Bahiyaaa...Gauri Kumari Sarma..!!" he screams excitedly.

Anika-"Gaur Kumari Sharma!"

Shivaay-"Kaun Gaaauri...!"

Rudra-"Are bhaiya wahi.."

Daadi-"Kaun wahi..?"

Rudra "Arey Bhaiya rukiye main samjata hoon...

He wears his shades

"Gauri kumara Sharma Wo Kanya Hai,
Jo Bulldozer Chadaa de Car pe,
He fumbles for the next words.

Gauri excitedly-"Arey Dushman uska ek Jhaap mein satyaai jaabe Deewar pe!"

All look at the wall she just indicated.

Rudra -"Haan haan wahi Saturday ko Jaave Dewar Pe!"

Gauri-"Tum Rudyyy!" she asks excitedly.

Rudra's happiness knew no bounds-"haan Haan main wahi...Kam Akal Waala Chirota!"

Shivaay-"Oh okay...she is chironti womaniya! Wahi pagli!"

Rudra nods in a yes."haan Haan Bhaiya Wahi pagli..!"

Anika-"Oh Bete Ki...tum ho wo badi badi baatein...kya thaa haan... hirhiraaye!"

Gauri turning to her-"Aap...

Rudra-"Anika Bhaaabhi!" he says with ascent.

Gauri-"Namaste Bhaujaai Jii !"

Anika-"Namaste."

Gauri looks about her. To her left, to her right.

Anika confused-"Kise dhoond rahi ho??"

Gauri-"Bade Bhaiya ko...wo kahin nazar nahi aa rahe..!"

Shivaay almost instantaneously raises his hand-"Main Yahan Hoon!"

Gauri tries looking behind Anika to find the source of the voice.

Shivaay-"Wahan nahi Yahan iss taraf!"

Gauri turns and sees him at the mandap she quickly goes there..!

"Pai Lagu Bade Bhaiya!"

Shivaay folds his hand nodding his head, trying to keep her away.

"Lekin aap yahan kya kar rahe hain?" she asks confused.

Pinky-"Oh My Mata ...yeh toh hume poochna chaiye ...aur who ares you!?"

Rudra-"Kya choti maa maine abhi toh intro diya thaa! Yeh Hai Gauri Kumari Sharma!"

Gauri-"Bareli Se. Namste!"

Shivaay places his hand at his ear at her squeaky voice.

Pinky-"Namaste..par aap yahan kya karte?"

Gauri-"Wo Badi Lambi Kahani hain...!"

Rudra-"I love stories...Baad mein suna naa...popcorn ke saath enjoy karenge!"

Gauri-"Haan theek hain toh... hum kahan the..!"

Shivaay-"Mujh Pe..!"

Gauri-"Haan bade bhaiya..toh ...o teri...!"

Shivaay taken a back at the way she stared at his face-"Kya...kya hua?"

Gauri-"Aapki aankhein...hari hai..."

Tia-"Its Kanji!"

All turn to Tia-"Tiaaa?" in unison.

Tia-"Wo Aap sab hi kehte hain naa Kanji...!"

Gauri-"haan toh kanji aankhon waale, chup-chaap rahene waale chirote, ab aap batayenge aap yahan kyun hai...?"

Shivaay-"Chi...chi..chi..what...don't call me that..! Yeh Meri shaadi hai!"

Gauri smiling -"Acha...acha..!" She suddenly looks shocked-"Kya...!"

Shivaay takes a step behind and holds his mom's hands at her scary shout.

"Aap Shaadi kar rahe hain Ek Baar Phir!"

Shivaay-"Yes.! "

Gauri-"Insee..!" she says pointing to Tia!

Tia-"Precisely.!"

Gauri-"Kyaa piss ke?" Kher wo sab hi chodiye...Lekin aap aise kaise kar sakte hain...Bhaujai ke hote huye doosri shaadi! Matlab ki Shaadi Ek Baar Phir!"

Shivaay-"Yeh Kya Ek Baar Phir Ek Baar Phir laga rakha hai! So what agar main Shaadi kar raha honn EK bAAR PHIR!!"

Gauri-"Aap Bhaujai se pyaar nahi karte kya!!??"

Shivaay and Anika look at each other. She looks the other way.

Gauri-"Bhaujaai aap ko ...michmichi nahi ho rahi...yeh sab dehke..?"

Shivaay-"Nahi ho rahi...cause she has lost her memory. Michmichi bhi kya hota hai wo nahi jaanti!"

Gauri-"Arey...aap naa bhole hain...wo jaanti hai...unhone ne hi toh mujhe Mich-michi shabd shikhaya..! Aur ye jo yaadash gayi hain naa wo naatak hai! "

Anika widens her eyes."Oh bete ki"

She turns to Rudra with a stern face. Rudra fakes an innocent face like he dint know anything.

Gauri turning to Tia-"Aur aap...aapko Sharam nahi aati! Phirse shaadi kar rahi hain."

Shivaay-"Ek minute, Anika ki memory aa gayi hai!

Rudra-"Bhaiya agar jaati toh phir aat ti naa...jo gaya hi nahi wo aayega kaise...Logic!"

Anika smacks her head.

Rudra realises what he just said and covers his face.

Shivaay gives a "Okay...all right" expression, to Anika. She stares back at him.

Tia-"Main kya karoon mere paas option nahi hai, mom yahi chathi hain, lekin tumhe kaise pata kii meri shaadi ho chuki hai!"

All looked shocked.

Gauri-"Kya aapki bhi shaadi ho chuki hain!"

Anika overjoyed-"Dekha Shivaay maine kaha thaa naa...Tia aapka popu bana rahi hai...uska pati Dushyant hai! Jo abhi Gulmohar road ke bungalow 65 mein band pada hai!"

Tia-"What!"

Anika-"Haan...Shwetlana aur Aunty Kapoor ne tumhe bhi popu banaya!"

Tia-"Shwetlana dii...How could you!"

All look shocked at the revelation.

Tia turning to Shivaay-"I m sorry Shivaay...maine ye shaadi nahi kar sakti..!" She lifts her lehengaa and runs.

Rudra-"Bhaiya aapki dulhan bhaag gayi ek baar phir!"

Anika-"Tia sambhal ke jaana..!" she shouts behind her. "Aur haan Dushyant ko mera Hi kehna!"

Tia-"Yes Anika thank u!" She comes back hugs Anika and leaves.

Pinky blinks-"Oh my mata ..yeh ho kya raha hai! Kiss ne kis kis ko popu baya!"

Shivaay's SSO rises-"Khaana!" he indicates him.

At once Khanna's lady security team take control of The Kapoors, and take them away into custody until the police can arrive.

Shivaay-"Khanna tum yahan kya khade ho tum bhi jao!"

Khanna-"Wo...main chale gaya to recording...!"

Shivaay-"Just shut up and leave."

He makes a puppy face and leaves.

Shivaay walks with attitude towards Anika."Naatak..! Yeh sab Naatak thaa!"

"Anika, I dint expect this from you..! And Rudra...tum bhi yeh sab jaante thee...and whats more Iss Gauri ko bhi pata tha...!"

Anika-"Toh tadi kyun maar rahe hain aap!"

Shivaay-"Main tumhara pati hoon Anika! You should have told me!"

Anika-"Lekin main aapki patni nahi hoon...jab aa piss shaadi ko nahi maante toh main...

Shivaay-"Just shut up! Maanta hoon main humari shaadi ko, tum mere liye important ho.! Main tumse...!"

Rudra-"Bhaiya bol dijiye aaj!"

Dadi-"Haan billu..!"

Prinku -"Bol dijiye Bhaiya!"

Anika looks away knowing he would never say it!

Gauri-"Arey Bol di jiye naa bae bhaiya!

Pinky-"Ab bol bhi de Billu! "

All look shocked at her.

"Arey jab mia biwi raazi toh kya kare gaa kaazi!"

The family starts cheering Shivaay.

Anika was still looking the other way.

"Anika...idhar dehko..!"

Anika turns. He gives her the attitude look, like he was going to do something really bad.

The next moment he was on his knees. She looks beyond shocked.

"Main tumse..." He clears his throat.

She rolls her eyes."Aap rehne dijiye aapse nahi hoga.

"I am trying...can u wait.!

Clears his throat.

"Main tumse..."

Rudra looks exasperated. "Kya bhaiya..Hum sab ko baith jaana chaiye...time lage ga.!"

All sit.

Gauri-"Yeh sab aap logon ki galti hai...bade bhaiya ko picture nahi dikhate kaa?"

Pinky-"Sach much thodi si dharmendar ki picture dehkte naa..tyoh itna samay nahi lagta!"

Daadi-"Nahi...Raj Kapoor ki dehkni chaiye thi!" All go "ooo" at Daadi's blushing face.

Prinku-"Nahi..Ranbir..Ki..!"

Anika-"Mujhe kuch Ranveer sa sunai dia!" Prinklu blushes.

Gauri-"Arey humre Chulbul paandey kea age yeh sab fail hai!"

Rudra-"Nahi...king of romance toh SRK hain..SSO ko SRK ki films dehkni chaiye thii!"

Shivaay loses his patience and calm-"Can you all please keep quiet, I m trying something really hard, mere knees main dard ho raha hai so please let mee speak!"

Gauri-"haan sab chup ab bas chup chaap rehene waala chirota bolega...aur koi nahi...hum background music de kya bade bhaiya...kaunsi picture ka...!"

Pinky-"Oh my mata tu chup rahegi toh wo bolega naa..!"

Gauri-"Arey haan wo bhi hai...wo kya hai naa jab flims ki baatein hoti hai naa..toh hum bhi thode filmi ho jaate hain!"

Daadi-"Ab Sab Chup Mera Billu Bolega Bol Billu Bol!"

Shivaay turning to Anika.

Before he could yet again se main tumse...she says it.."Main tumse ...aage kya..?"

Shivaay gulps.

"Main tumse..."

Anika makes him stand. "Shivaay its okay...aap se nahi hoga!" She turns.

"Anika I love you...Main tumse Pyaar karta hoon..Kya tum humesha ke liye meri wife rahogi!"

He says it in 3.5 seconds.

Anika turns shocked."Kya!"

Gauri-"Itna hirhiraaiye kar kaun Propse karta hai.."

Rudra-"Proposal karta nahi phekta hai!"

Shivaay-"Tumhaare kaan kharab hain kya abhi toh sab bola.!"

Anika-"Aapke shabd rajdhaani se bhi Tej nikle..! Waise to bail gaadi ke speed pe nikalte hai ludak ludak ke aaj seedha Bullet Train!"

Shivaay-"Tumne sunaa nahi sunaa who tumhaari problem hai! Maine keh diya that's it!" he folds his hands and looks ahead.

Anika breaks into a wide grin" Maine sunaa!"

Shivaay-"So ...

Anika nods in a yes blushing.

He turns to see her all pink and smiles like a Cheshire cat blushing himself.

Rudra-"Yeh...Bhaiya hum sab aakhein band kar rahe hain..!" he winks at Shivaay.

Everyone shuts their eyes, Anika turs beet red. Shivaay takes the chance and hugs her"You are Blushing." He whispers huskily in his ears.

Suddenly there is a sound of a pot breaking.

All look at the door and Shivaay instantly takes a step behind breaking the hug.

"YEH HO KYA RAHA HAI?"

Om says his eyes wide open and his jaw dropped.

Anika turns a beet red if it was still possible. All laugh. She hides her fac over Shivaay's shoulder.

Rudra walking upto-"Aapne iss generation ka sabse awaited proposal miss kar diaa O!"

A voice from behind.

"Nahi maine sab record kiya hai! "

All look at the man dressed in the security dress.

Shivaay-"Ab tum kaun ho!"

Man-"Main...Khanna786, Khaana no.1 ka mamera bhai!"

All look dumbfounded.

Shivaay-"Now whats mamera..! And 786..koi aisa naam rakhta hai kya."

"Arey mamera..." two voices say in unison.(Anika & Gauri)

Shivaay point his hands in the two directions-"No..its okay..I am good I don't want to know!

Om-"Phat the wuck. TUM?"

Gauri-"Haa hum...Tum Jhataadaari Chirote yahan kya kar rahe ho!" she says walking up to him.

Om-"Wow mere hi garh mein tum mujhse hi pooch rahi ho!"

They start arguing with big words. Rudra comes and stands between Shivaay and Anika, and looks on at Rikara. He nudges Anika instead of Shivaay" Bhaiya...kya aap bhi wahi dehk rahe hain jo main dek raha hoon."

Shivaay turns and sees that Rudra was looking ahead and nudging Anika's elbow instead of his.

"O hello..Main yahan hoon!" he says turning Rudra.

"Aur iss mein kya hai." He looks confused.

Anika rolls her eyes at Shivaay's naivety -"Rudra Main Wahi Dehkh Rahi hoon" They high-5 much to Shivaay's annoyance.

Daadi steps forward excitedly her eyes glittering with enthusiasm

"Jo bhi hai takkar ka hai!"

*The End*

P.S

No chamelis please.😛
Hope you liked it.😃
Do leave your comments and review.😊
Waiting.⭐️

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Posted: 8 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: _SilverLining_

Anni another awesome story by you🤗 I can really imagine this happening in the show...Rudra ke dialogues🤣

Ekdum khidki tod dialogue bola usne...SRK style🤣

PM me the 2nd part please!


Thanku Archu🤗
Pm Sent.😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
Oh my god Anika.. that was awesome 🤣
Gauri, Anika, SSO, rudy they were all just🤣

Amazing 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Shivikaishkara

Oh my god Anika.. that was awesome 🤣

Gauri, Anika, SSO, rudy they were all just🤣

Amazing 👏


Thanks..!⭐️
I was expecting well..ahh...anyway..!
I m so happy I dint get tomatoes..!😊

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