Shivaay TS - Naam (Completed Page 1) 1/4/2017

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Rida Sadaqat

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Beautiful update part two..loved it too much all the emotions and Shivaay's vulnerability.. keep writing thanks for the PM..much love, Rida ❤️

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ArhiIPKKND

@ArhiIPKKND

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Interesting twist esp d other child dying...lot of drama...interesting

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Archie

@_SilverLining_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Wow this is so awesome!!👏

I really love your way of writing - I could really feel the emotions that you wanted to portray, I could imagine the scenes easily in my mind.

This is a great plot. There are so many beautiful ways the story can proceed and it's a pity that the makers are wasting time on these stupid NB stuff. They should take some ideas from the talented writers in the forum!

Loved it. Continue soon :)

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Sanskruti

@Sanskruti164

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Very emotional

Very well penned..

Vulnerability of Shivay Helpness of Anika very well written...

Every emotion is feeling real...

Curious for next update

Thanks for PM

Take Care...

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

interesting story

please do continue

bye sumi

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Fariba

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

I honestly believe this is the exact ib story if any of the child is actually illegitimate! It can be shivaay only, and pinky doesnt know, something like that! But yeah he is shaktis son. Not sure if tej knows, but yes yes, if any is illegitimate,its SHIVAAY ONLYYY!

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poemssyndrome

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Posted: 8 years ago

#57

This is so touching! The second chapter is amazing!
Shivaay & Pinky both have been people who have a strong belief about their inheritance. And to see their reason for pride, the beliefs that drive them is painful.
Shivaay's frustration & pain touches you!
This is epic!
Update soon!