Shivaay TS - Naam (Completed Page 1) 1/4/2017

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Krishi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: .rumki.
different concept
do con soon

The part is up!

Thanks :)

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Krishi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Dnyanu16
it's fantastic, emotional
ohh shivaay 😭 😭

Thanks :) Glad you like it

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Ashidua

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Seriously amazing!!!

Update super soon 👏😃

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Krishi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: sam16
I so wanted this track to be real . your update totally reached the expectations and thanks for pm😃

Thanks for this super sweet comment.. The next part is up hope you like it. :D

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Krishi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: itzanya32
Hey krishi...😃
it was an Awsm starting...
Very well written..❤️
I was really waiting for someone to write this...and you were the one to write it...So thank you very much!
shivaay being the illegimate child..!as Diamaa just said that the elder son of mr.Oberoi is illegimate and she hadn't took Om's name and Tej's name so it can be either shivaay or om..
It will be really interesting to see shivaay like this...bcoz the one thing he was the most proud for was not his..!"THE OBEROI NAME"
do update it soon...
and thankx for the pm...!

Love you,
Anya😳

Hey dude!

I am happy it was something that you were looking forward to

The next one is up, though a little late :P

Do tell me how it suits you :)

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Krishi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: kusharberry
its just awesome krishi
really loved it
so here sso is illegitimate son of shakti
poor anika she is scared sso is broken
plzz do continue soon
thanks for the pm dear

Thanks Lina Di ❤️

Well, it is 🥺

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Krishi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: varala
Awesome update
So Shivaay is an illegitimate son ...and he has broken when he came to know😭😭
Anikaa worried about him😕
Continue soon
Thanks for pm 😊
Sorry for the delay comments 😕

You can take you own time just the way the writers do😉

I hope the next part satisfies you :)

Thanks for taking time and commenting😳

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Krishi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Ashidua
Seriously amazing!!!
Update super soon 👏😃

Thanks, I'll try :)

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 8 years ago

#49

This is amazing, I loved how you handled Shiv's reaction to the revelation.

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Anya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#50

Hey Krishi..😳

Do you know what I'm at loss of words...at this very moment..

I really don't know what to say...

this was fantasticly Awsm...👏

Pure family ki tarah mein bhi abhi shock mein hoon..😆

The way you join the dotes of Mr.kapoor's death to shivaay being the illegitimate child and his real mother was her sister...😲

it was fabulous...👏

And the way you show shivaay's vulnerability was perfect...there was not a point were I thought that his reaction to this revalation was not fully conviced...

And the way Omru are supporting him was heart touching...This is called true love..❤️ and I know that all the people will accept shivaay...It will be really hard for shivaay to go through this phase but he will be able to survive it with the help of his lovely family Omru and Annika...

just egerly waiting for pinky's reaction...

Do update it soonish...!

Love you loads,

Anya😳

Edited by itzanya32 - 8 years ago