Shivaay TS - Naam (Completed Page 1) 1/4/2017 - Page 8

Originally posted by: YeHoKyaRahaHai

This is amazing, I loved how you handled Shiv's reaction to the revelation.

Originally posted by: itzanya32

Hey Krishi..😳

Do you know what I'm at loss of words...at this very moment..

I really don't know what to say...

this was fantasticly Awsm...👏

Pure family ki tarah mein bhi abhi shock mein hoon..😆

The way you join the dotes of Mr.kapoor's death to shivaay being the illegitimate child and his real mother was her sister...😲

it was fabulous...👏

And the way you show shivaay's vulnerability was perfect...there was not a point were I thought that his reaction to this revalation was not fully conviced...

And the way Omru are supporting him was heart touching...This is called true love..❤️ and I know that all the people will accept shivaay...It will be really hard for shivaay to go through this phase but he will be able to survive it with the help of his lovely family Omru and Annika...

just egerly waiting for pinky's reaction...

Do update it soonish...!

Love you loads,

Anya😳

Originally posted by: ridz13sdqt

Beautiful update part two..loved it too much all the emotions and Shivaay's vulnerability.. keep writing thanks for the PM..much love, Rida ❤️

Originally posted by: ArhiIPKKND

Interesting twist esp d other child dying...lot of drama...interesting

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

very well written..

Originally posted by: _SilverLining_

Wow this is so awesome!!👏

I really love your way of writing - I could really feel the emotions that you wanted to portray, I could imagine the scenes easily in my mind.

This is a great plot. There are so many beautiful ways the story can proceed and it's a pity that the makers are wasting time on these stupid NB stuff. They should take some ideas from the talented writers in the forum!

Loved it. Continue soon :)