ShivIka SS: Avoidance Waltz PART 8 (22.5.17) pg 40*new* Index pg1 - Page 14

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Posted: 8 years ago
Uh oh. Shivaay is going to suffer a lot due to this. 🤪
It's going to be hard for anika to overcome the humiliation that she faced in this chapter.
From not even being at fault to not getting answers and on top of that the throwing out thing, anika might now think that she doesn't hold much importance in his life and also that she is a toy for him, whenever he wants he will talk whenever he wants he will just not bother...
Shivaay ur so dead. Now u will know what it is to mess up with anika😆
I can't wait to read the next chapter. Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Heart touching update.
It was a painful one.Both are burning in this fire.The misunderstanding of Shivaay?
But Rohit is not a imaginary character,but what was that documents which was uncompleted.
The last part made me cry😭.poor Anika.The pain she is facing now is killing her.She never expected a cold response from Shivaay.she was missing him and she wanted to know what happened to him?Is he is angry with me?but for what?what was her fault?
So many questions were revolving in her mind.
And pinky's entry put salt in her wounds...
Shivaay is facing the same pain.He was missing her badly,when he reached her house she was happy ,this sight was painful for him.If she was going away from him?the thought killed him thousand times.
He is punishing her.But it is painful for him to see her in pain.Her tears...he can't bear it.He is punishing himself too in this way.one part of Shivaay wanted to go with her.But the other part is stopping him from that.
The Gifs gave a visual effect.
Eagerly waiting for your next update
Edited by Sakkiyah - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey Anisa,
Hope you are doing well. I have been following this SS since the starting and not only this SS for that matter, I have read all your One Shots and the Daily Analysis as well. Well I really haven't been able to comment till now partly due to my own laziness and partly due to my unwell desktop ( which is well now , by the way). I just wanted to say that whatever you write is so beautiful ❤️ First of all , you have an amazing grip on the English Language which makes quite a difference regardless of the plot. Whether be the daily analysis or the stories , you have an perfect English with no grammatical mistakes or typos which really attracts the readers. Second, is your portrayal of feelings, your insight to the characters is just beyond *Speechless here for a second* any adjective I can think of. You have an ability to give a life to even a pen ( ahem, sorry for the stupid analogy but pen was the only thing I could think of) I mean to say is any lifeless thing . I watch the episode only after your daily updates and sometimes when I couldn't see the episode your updates make me feel I gained a lot more in your updates than the episodes. Third is your loyalty I have been a silent member in this forum from almost the starting of the serial and as long as I can remember your posts have always been there. You made it a ritual to make a post on the episode daily and I know how tough it is to make a post ( Read : Fantastic) every day and I am really awestruck by your loyalty to Shivika. You even manage to include everyone's point of view without being biased towards any particular character ( Shivaay or Annika). Forth... Honestly the list could go on and on. Since the list will be never ending , I just want to say you are a talented and one of the most truly heart touching writers I have ever encountered in this forum. You and many of the people present here make this forum, the best. Thank you so much and because of people like you , the forum is such a stress buster and many people's favorite haven. Mine for example, it literally feels like home to me now and even though I don't really know anybody , it feels I am connected to each one of you.
Regarding the SS, I have no more words to say particularly except that you showed them exactly according to their characters , the way she said I love you and then I hate you , Shivaay is like You just said you love me , it made laugh out so loud and I was like typical Shivaay . And the short story about the temple and the blind ( If I am not wrong ?) teacher was so heart touchingly beautiful. It literally melted my heart , I had an acute pain in my chest due to the poignancy. This update was freaking awesome as usual but when Pinky entered, I thought " Don't we get her enough already ?" But then she was required so I am fine with it. Well I already have said as much my vocabulary could allow me. I really really appreciate the fact that you take out time and write for us. Thank you so much.
P.S: Can I mention how much I love your Gif's ! I absolutely adore them. I have even many of them saved in my phone 😆 And I also your like in my OS I was beyond happy. I literally did a happy dance. Thank you once again that you took out time and read a amateur's work like mine.
Please continue making the forum a lovely place like you do. Applauds 👏 and takes a bow.

Lots of love
Lisa 😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
This is heartbreaking:(
Waiting for the next chapter eagerly!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing Update !!!
The story is superb and I am quite liking the Jealous Singh Oberoi, though I am feeling bad for Annika. Poor girl, she doesn't have a whiff of what has gotten into her husband. Hope she finds out soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh man what an update!! Absolutely Khirkitor!!
Shivaay thinks with his EGO first, his brain second and his heart last.
Can't wait for him to grovel!!

Please update real soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Seriously Shivay is an idiot jerk and moron
What he want Anika to pay for
He's the one who's always wrong
Poor Anika
Please please update next part soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
I guess I should start commenting now that I'm pestering you for updates 😆

Loved it! This is exactly what my ShivIka-starved heart needs. I hope they show Jealous Shivaay in the show again

Update soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Good god Anisa...what was that😲
SSO is back...ishq insaan ko nikamma kardete hai...yeh to shivaay singh oberoi hai😆...Sab kuch extreme mein karta hai. Jumping to conclusions ki bimari nahin gaye abhi...Tsk tsk

Wonderful update. ..just loved it...waiting for next one
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Posted: 8 years ago
Can you please update next part right now???
It's a humble request

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