Shivika OS: Kill Me - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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I loved the intrigue.. your plot is very plausible and nicely crafted. 👏 .. And of course the fussy helicopter Shivaay...
Loved it!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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loved ur work.. buddy..
nd Os was ossawm.. would love c agr asa kuch serial main ho.😊
well good job..👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ayeen! I want to read more.😳 that was really nice, totally enjoyed reading it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Sarcy-

Res!

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Aashti, let me first tell you that I absolutely love your writing. It's simple and flows so effortlessly, it's beautiful! I recently caught up with the Three Months Later fic and totally enjoyed reading it. I'm yet to leave a comment there and was a little sad to see it end. But hopefully, you will continue to write these random one-shots for us.

Coming to this piece, there's a strong possibility that this is where the Kapoor sisters are headed with the recent series of attacks - if not to harm her, then to frame her. Because Tia is quite persistent about her views that Anika is their biggest roadblock and it would be unlike Svetlana to completely brush it off. So while Anika's destruction is not the end goal, it is one step to it.

Loved ShivIka conversation and considering their characters, it felt very real because Shivaay has always been fussing over his brothers so it comes naturally to him. Whereas Anika has always been the one to look after herself because she never had anyone else - so there's that possibility that she may be annoyed with the mollycoddling at some point. 😆

And of course, OmRu with ShivIka is an absolute favourite with me because where else do we get to see Rudy teasing the Great Wall of Shivaay and him being embarrassed.

Enjoyed this! :)


Thank you Sarcy. . I wrote this because I was hoping to see this in the show. After yesterdays episode, its obvious that Shivaay doesnt trust Tia the same way either. He obviously believed Anika's words when she told him that Tia might be behind the attacks. I think its high time dat d cvs go ahead with d Tia track. I mean at least bring some proof of her deception in front of Shivaay. As it is Shivaay cannot throw Tia out because of Mrs Kapoors blackmailing tactics. So Tia's truth will not really make much difference other than open Shivaay's eyes.

But yea Anika might soon become a thorn for Svetlana as well. And then she might agree to end Anika.
Your comment made my day.. Thanks again😳😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: poemssyndrome

First of all buddy, a part two pls. Second all of your theoriesc are so on point & I get Anika's frustrations. Anyone who is being protected by SSO will want to be killed instead of being held captive like this.
This is so much interesting & fun to read!
Loved it!


Thank you

I wish we got to see Shivaay going overboard in his concern for her in d serial as well
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: itzanya32

First of all I'm a big fan of your story...you write awsmly..the Os was just amazing...Shivavy is soo much protective about annika that he didn't left annika's side for a single minute and annika is being irritated by it.
Shivaay is one such person who would not leave a single minute for the protection of his loved one...he would do anything for it...And after knowing that the target was annika he would not make her spare a single second alone...It was fun to read this...
do write more...


love you,
Anya 😳


Thank you Anya..
u r one of my favourite readers
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: pritzz

Buddy.. you are marvellous

Every fiction you are writing I am just loving it❤️
Well I don't know when will he reach this stage but... you just set a level for the stone singh oberoi... at this moment

Lovely 👏


Pritzzzyyy

Thank u thank u
I jz hope we get here someday
But u know whatever we hope never happens sopp
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
I loved this, esp. the characterization, and the ending punch line...and all the little details like Rudy closing Anika's ears when SSO lets out profanities...Please do keep writing!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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haha last KILL Me was so hilarious
hehe
anika ka reaction serial main isse bhi bhayanak hoga haha
still cant stop laughing
please do write more
bye sumi
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Posted: 8 years ago
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You know, i totally love this idea. Its such a genius idea to get Shivaay on board with this whole Tia being negative thing. He wont care for himself really but if you plant in his mind that OmRu or Anika are targets he will become far more resourceful and careful.
Your writing, as usual my dear is just lovely. I loved this OS

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