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Posted: 8 years ago
Bahahahaha! Shivay deprived of coffee reminded me of that vampire in Terry Pratchett's Discworld novel who had transferred his penchant for warm blood to fresh coffee. Cravings, eh?
Loved Saumya and Rudra's confrontation and conversation. I have not read too many stories on the pair and so am really enjoying this uncovering of the layers in Saumya's character. Can't wait for you to really delve into those two souls.

Wonder who the eavesdropper was... Anika?

Pinky Aunty's hand in packing Anika's case makes its presence felt once again. So Shivay has gone all proprietorial on Anika now. Wonder what will happen to put him in his place. He really needs to be taught a lesson.

Thank you so much for the wonderful update. Your note at the end of the update has got me really excited though. The promise of a dark angsty take on these characters will be fantastic! Desperately want to see Shivay's arrogance hit the dust.

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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb
Soo now rumya are cupid for our shivika but in ur first post who heard their whole convo
I hope its shivaay nd not anika
Post two was way too hot and hilarious
DONT USE PROTECTION
Lolzz i literally tumbled over my bed readung that line
And yeah handcuffs are too sexy
I wish i got same MIL like pinky
Haaye so thoughtful
Hehe
Lovely uodate
Do update next part soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Shivaay without coffee is me without Tea. What a clever way to irritate a person! Witty Saumya!
I love the first half for the sheer innocence of RuMya's relationship. Even if she is angry with him, the fear of losing his faith kills Saumya from inside. Such a beautiful relationship. They I feel are more complicated bcoz none of them wants to admit their feelings & none have a strong set of principles to hold them back. It's just their will stoping them.
Wondering who the third person is. I bet it's Shivaay.
The bathroom scene was HOT! No words because I still need some time to formulate thoughts about it.Awestruck.
I have read it in many fanfictions about said thoughts of Anika that Shivaay had that kept him awake for weeks. And trust me Innika noone could have described those as well as you did.

Oh my god! Pinky really wants a grandchild ASAP. That bit was really funny!
I would really like Anika to accuse Shivaay for his baseless NKK theories. We have never seen her challenge him effectively about it. So it would be really fun to read. And I am excited that you are going to write about it.
Eagerly waiting dear!
Update soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loving d way this is progressing...earnest tries on shivaays part when he follows his instincts n hilarious when its rudy or sumo doing d thinking...such childish pranks...lol...but so adorable...
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Posted: 8 years ago
I totally loved it. Keep writing and updating. Absolutely enjoy reading them.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ArhiIPKKND

Ok...things r getting intense...cant wait...


Hope you liked Part IV!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

awesome update...good going..


Thanks ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: chottekikhushi

Innika love,

Thank you so much for giving us this beautiful update inspite of your internet issues!! I kind of thought that the update was pretty amazing!!
The main reason why I love reading stories on the forum (or in general ) is because of the insight they give into the characters, what they actually think, and how they really feel which we will never get to 'see' on screen!! So I loved the way you gave an insight into everyone's mind, but mostly Ani and Ru.
If you dont know it yet, I am very very partial to Ani. I just love her, inspite of her imperfections. I so got her when she said that she had forgiven but not forgotten part. Doesn't it all happen to us sometimes?? Even after a fight with a loved one is over, sometimes, a random phrase or when similar fight ensues, some of that old hurt resurfaces!! Or maybe is just me! LOL!
And that wedding was heartbreaking on so many levels and yet somehow Ani understood Shivaay and even forgave him for it but didn't forget!! Shivaay broke her trust on so many levels that day, its not even funny and its no wonder that she fears trusting him again!! I feel he has to work on gaining that trust back first , and I doubt Ru is going to tell him to do that!! He has to figure that part out all by himself!!
Also, I am a bit confused about him here, does he still believe in his principles of NKK here too? Or is he now willing to accept Ani inspite of her lack of it??
And loved the Rumya bits. That couple has so much potential, they can be cute and sometimes so intense.
So the girls have decided to go ahead with their plan to teach the guys a lesson while Shivaay is following his Baby brother's advice to woo his wife...I sense potential fireworks!!
Eagerly waiting for the next update!!


Thanks so much, Anu ❤️
I'm glad that writing helps you gain more of an insight into characters. I couldn't agree more - I honestly feel like some of the writers of our forum could give the CVs a run for their money! Sometimes, I'm absolutely left floored by the depth in people's writing, especially Ayesha, Twerps, and Richa's! I wish the writers of the show put half the thought that they do.
And trust me, I'm well aware of your lean towards Annika. i relate to a certain extent, but my relation with character is long and winded. So, I used to watch QH Season 2, because I loved Asad and Zoya, and I was living that same equation (or trying to, at least) through Sanam and Aahil. Anyhow, things got too brutal at one point, and I stopped watching the show. But during that, I saw Surbhi for the first time, playing Haya. While I did think the acting was good, for some reason, Surbhi just didn't leave an impact on me. In fact, I think the brutality of her specific sub-plot put me off the show the most. Fast forward a few years, and she's on Ishqbaaaz. Now, I started watching IB after my sister did (who started for Vrushika), because I love ensemble cast productions.
TBH, the first time I saw Annika as a character, I just thought she was really mismatched to Shivaay. I honestly found Annika too wild, and annoying at times, and original Shivaay annoyed me with NKK crap too. Somehow, ShivIka stuck though, and I kept watching for their chemistry, and Rudra (of course!). However, I think that after the Janmastami episodes, something changed in my eyes. For ShivIka, and Annika. She's only grown on me more after that, to the extent that, tied with Rudra, she is my favourite character. I'm become a diehard Surbhi fan, and I think that just goes to show that some actors are just better suited to certain characters. In fact, I can't think of anyone better to play Annika than Surbhi.

And yes, the basis of ShivIka's relationship is faith, and trust. They need to regain that, and as Shivaay will realise in this story, Annika is much more likely to forgive him when that is regained, rather than with him seducing her. As for the NKK thing, I think I originally intended to make this happy and light as a temporary reprieve from all the weird Nafratbaaaz crap on the show, but I understand that people do want to see more of a redemption. Thus, I am writing that whole bit, but to answer your question, yes he does still believe in NKK. It's a thirty-two year old belief system, so even though DakTia's truth has shaken it up a bit, it still hasn't diminished. Rather, like he is on the show, Shivaay is just ignoring that all in the face of falling in love with Annika, right now - it will come back to haunt them both. I think that no amount of anyone's betrayal will help him get rid of NKK, but rather, he needs to open his eyes to everything Annika stands for, and how he feels about her.

RumYa are love, aren't they? They will get more scenes in this story, in fact, I think there's an update coming up soon that's completely them.

Hope you liked Part IV! Part V should be up soonish!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: zeherili

I'm all caught up! I'm so glad chapter 3 was so lengthy, thank you for spoiling us. It was wonderfully written

I'm excited to see Ani and Somu's plan!



Glad you liked it ❤️ Thank you again, for the kind comment!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: minamma

Sexual tension in the air

Luvd shivika and rumya throughout the whole chappy
Want to know what their plan is actually..


Thank you! Hope you liked Part IV!

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