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FoundLife

@FoundLife

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#91

This was love my dear...real love, I can starve for this!!

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Posted: 8 years ago

#92

Hey innika!
I have read your previous works here. I don't comment very often , so yeah I'm kinda silent reader. But after reading another of your wonderful shot,I couldn't help myself but comment on it. Such a beautiful portrayal of each characters.
I was hooked up until it came to the end. And I was like,, Ow boy, ! why did it end so soon:...:(
Girl, you manage to keep your readers awed.
Well, would love to read more from ya:)

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#93

lovely this update

hehe

haha they both had awesome timings

haha what a style to wake up their husbands.

please do continue

bye sumi

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mina

@minamma

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#94

Take a bow over hear u young writer

Just love reading ur stories

Luvd obros FTW

Eager to knw what happens next

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Anu

@chottekikhushi

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#95

Innika love,

I simply adore the way you write!!! Your detailed descriptions make the scenes come alive literally!! I could visualise everything, from the beauty of the villa to the flight conversations to even Khanna looking away as Ani and Soumya asking him why they weren't dropped off at the hotel.

I love the way you have shown the friendship/sisterly bond between Ani and Soumya and how they are attached and yet give each other space!! I loved the way Ani called her a sister, albeit in her head.They are sister in laws and Ani for one doesn't even know it!!

I felt so bad for Ani and Shivaay and the way you said how she will forgive him after one sincere apology!! That's so Anika of her and the reason why I am so so partial to her, but surprisingly for once I felt a tiny bit more bad for Shivaay here. So waiting for them to make up.

Especially after yesterday's epi, I really want Shivaay teasing Ru and their respective wives doing the same to each other!! But in your story as it looks like that will only happen after a good number of updates , but I will be happy to wait for it!!

The last part had me loling!! Water and a thappad!! What a way to wake their respective husbands!!

Loving this!! How I wish Om had a heroine and could be here too to make up!! Sigh!!!

Do continue and thank you for updating on this epi less Sunday!!