PriVeer SS: Little World (Chapter 10 updated on page 16) - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's very emotional Tahiti 😭 I had tears and smile both when I finished reading 😃. It's so nice to read about his feelings via letter. Now like Annika_ishqbaaz I too want to have someone like him 😕. It's lovely dear. I thought of responding on the first update,but then forgot,now today the first thing I did was first to respond and then like 😃. Update soon. Imagining him hugging her from behind is so cozy and at the same time it showed how he knew in his sleep that she isn't there on the bed. Tahiti! You are making me fall harder for this couple like I said earlier abb toh raatein bhi PriVeer k aur din bhi. Thanks Tahiti!!! 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: dimaag

It's very emotional Tahiti 😭 I had tears and smile both when I finished reading 😃. It's so nice to read about his feelings via letter. Now like Annika_ishqbaaz I too want to have someone like him 😕. It's lovely dear. I thought of responding on the first update,but then forgot,now today the first thing I did was first to respond and then like 😃. Update soon. Imagining him hugging her from behind is so cozy and at the same time it showed how he knew in his sleep that she isn't there on the bed. Tahiti! You are making me fall harder for this couple like I said earlier abb toh raatein bhi PriVeer k aur din bhi. Thanks Tahiti!!! 😳


Awww!!!! 😊
I am SUPER GLAD you like it!!!! Thank you SOOO much for this BEAUTIFUL comment!!!!
Good morning dimaag!!! (I am sorry I didn't say that in the msg)
❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: emerald39

Res!!

-Unres-

Tahiti, this tugged at my heartstrings hard. I knew the letter was going to be a rather poignant one, and it really was. I could feel the ACP's love for Prinku pouring through the words. That man just pretends to have a tough surface😆😆😆And how much Prinku has grown in this one chapter, where she decides that she will go on no matter what happens, as opposed to the vulnerable and fragile Prinku we know now.

Beautiful, beautiful chapter. Thank you for deciding to write this!!😳😳



Awww!!!!
Em!!!!!!!
😊
Thank you so much for this BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL comment!!!!!
Thank YOU for giving me this AMAZING idea!!!! ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: emerald39

Unres'd on page 3. ^_^



I just noticed it!!
❤️ ❤️ 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25
Tahitiii! You need a hug for this! 🤗

I feel like gushing like the PriVeer fangirl that I am, right now. 😆 This was so aww-dorably cute, I can't even begin to describe. First, the way Prinku was worried for Ranveer's safety, her fears, concerns and the way she was holding strong and soothing Ayaan's worries, all went on to show how much Ranveer had come to matter to her and how she had become a little stronger with him by her side. Then the whole scene of when Ranveer finally returned and united with his family, left me thinking how much he has changed after Prinku entering his life. And you portrayed this brilliantly in the letter. The way Ranveer knew that Prinku would be hurt and broken but he didn't want her to cry showed you how perfectly he knew his girl. Also, Priyanka realising that Ranveer's job was dangerous but she would never ask him to give it up because it meant so much to him shows how much she had grown from the timid little Oberoi girl that she was.

Absolutely loved it! ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-

Tahitiii! You need a hug for this! 🤗

I feel like gushing like the PriVeer fangirl that I am, right now. 😆 This was so aww-dorably cute, I can't even begin to describe. First, the way Prinku was worried for Ranveer's safety, her fears, concerns and the way she was holding strong and soothing Ayaan's worries, all went on to show how much Ranveer had come to matter to her and how she had become a little stronger with him by her side. Then the whole scene of when Ranveer finally returned and united with his family, left me thinking how much he has changed after Prinku entering his life. And you portrayed this brilliantly in the letter. The way Ranveer knew that Prinku would be hurt and broken but he didn't want her to cry showed you how perfectly he knew his girl. Also, Priyanka realising that Ranveer's job was dangerous but she would never ask him to give it up because it meant so much to him shows how much she had grown from the timid little Oberoi girl that she was.

Absolutely loved it! ❤️



Sarce!!!!
I am glad you loved it!
Thank you for the beautiful comment! 🥱 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27
When are you updating Chapter 3? 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#28
Waiting for your next update..
Please pm me
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Sarcy-

When are you updating Chapter 3? 😉


Soon! 😉
Looking for an inspiration currently. 😆
I do have one idea on mind, I have to weave it pretty enough to be updated now 😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Waiting for your next update..
Please pm me



For suure!!! 😆

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