The Beginning - An Omkara OS

Lakshmi G Reghunath

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: neeme
Where is the next part girl ? 😉 it can't be and OS.. i want a complete FF.. bcz i really like this girl 😈
Only u can write like this.. great job Lachu.. great idea Rev.
But yap Unfinished type feelings coming for me. Can i demand for further story ??

Ha ha neeme, so much demand for the rest. But I thought some unfinished stories have more beauty and power because you make your own ending of it. But dekhte hai, agar fursat mile toh zaroor ek aur part karenge

Thank you for reading it though

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Lakshmi G Reghunath

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: chottekikhushi
Wow...that was amazing!! A vengeful heroine for Om is a great idea! And I want someone quite ruthless as well who falls head over heels in love with Om's goodness and saves him in the end because she just cant hurt him any more!!

Ikr! Someone who is ziddi in hate as well as love. Ruthless. Junooniyat honi chahiye kahani mei. Should match Omkara's intensity.

Thank you for reading

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Lakshmi G Reghunath

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: falala333
I can't explain to you how good this is and how much I love it ❤️❤️❤️

aww thats so sweet of you. Thanks😃

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Lakshmi G Reghunath

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: diksha0102
Awesome.
You just nailed it😊

Thank you 😃

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Lakshmi G Reghunath

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Tunasnah
Lachu this girl is so scary ...I like it...I want it's next part ...I want to see if this girl fall in love with om then how this equation turn out to be...

I will try to write Tuna can't promise anything. But thanks for reading

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shanry

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

you've got good writing skills but...

why can't Om have a normal romantic OS, without all the dark and macabre crowding it? 😔

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Lakshmi G Reghunath

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: BookWormV
That legit gave me chills! Outstanding OS! 👏 The idea of something like this for Omkara makes me want to jump with joy and simultaneously dread it. I can totally see the appeal of this thought/idea. Any chance this might turn into an SS or FF? Would love to read more.

Brilliantly written! My eyes widened in horror when the knife plunged in (the way you penned this was fab!) and that dialogue at the end was WOW! Kudos!
Keep writing!

Cheers,
V😊

Thank you for the kind words 😳

I'll try continuing this if I have time.

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Abhiya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Unresd it on first page finally 😆

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Lakshmi G Reghunath

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: AngelicTomboy
OMG !!! Lichi, u are too good.. Too too too good.. I could imagine each and every word of it as it paved way to the next line. The party,. the music, the dance.. It was WOW !!! And man !!! That sexy siren... The Mystery Angel. The Angel who brought near death to Omkara.. The way you explained her actions and the way her physical appearance was described, I could imagine only to people.. You-Know-Them Lichi..
And please if you are gonna continue this, please do...

Thank you deepu😳

We all love a mystery girl for Om and I understand whom you meant lol

Let's see if I can continue

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Lakshmi G Reghunath

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Aphrodite88
Lachu!!!
Amazing!! Oh my goodness that girl is a bad***
And i love her already!!!
The best part about her is her eyes and i love her tattoo
Rev's dream finally came true hahaha
If you continue, please please do!!
This is amazing!👏

Thanks Jay..Hmm I love the tattoo too

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