The Beginning - An Omkara OS - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome.
You just nailed it😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lachu this girl is so scary ...I like it...I want it's next part ...I want to see if this girl fall in love with om then how this equation turn out to be...
Edited by Tunasnah - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome... i dnt even imagine it will end like this...



Thank you 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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That legit gave me chills! Outstanding OS! 👏 The idea of something like this for Omkara makes me want to jump with joy and simultaneously dread it. I can totally see the appeal of this thought/idea. Any chance this might turn into an SS or FF? Would love to read more.

Brilliantly written! My eyes widened in horror when the knife plunged in (the way you penned this was fab!) and that dialogue at the end was WOW! Kudos!
Keep writing!

Cheers,
V😊
Edited by BookWormV - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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OMG !!! Lichi, u are too good.. Too too too good.. I could imagine each and every word of it as it paved way to the next line. The party,. the music, the dance.. It was WOW !!! And man !!! That sexy siren... The Mystery Angel. The Angel who brought near death to Omkara.. The way you explained her actions and the way her physical appearance was described, I could imagine only to people.. You-Know-Them Lichi..
And please if you are gonna continue this, please do...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lachu!!!
Amazing!! Oh my goodness that girl is a bad***
And i love her already!!!
The best part about her is her eyes and i love her tattoo
Rev's dream finally came true hahaha
If you continue, please please do!!
This is amazing!👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res 🤣

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Finally read it! Intriguing and chilling in equal parts. So dear Omkara is not immune to carnal temptations and unfortunately for him, the wicked witch brought him down. 😆 What a spell she wove to entice him and then strike when he was most vulnerable and least suspected it! Sheer ruthlessness!

Do you plan to keep the mysterious lady a mystery or do you plan to unravel the mysteries around her secret being? 😉
Edited by -Sarcy- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yo I like it dude!
The dance was awesomeee! <3
Didn't think she'll actually use the knife and bleed him! Why angry with Om
He's a sweet heart! <3
Lach I really love the way u wrote the story!!! As always very intriguing! <3 😆
Rev your idea was good good!! I love the way that meeting took place!!
Great job u girls! 🥳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lachu one hug🤗 to you and great job. What a girl😳. I have imagine different types of girl for Om. But never thought about this kind of girl 😆 but now i am caving for such girl. Kiss bhi kiya and stab bhi. Ladki me baat tho hai. Sexy angle😳 Poor om but wanted to know more about her please please write FF 😃
Edited by Unisha123 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is wonderful! I'm not good at words Lachu. It's just Awesome! Beautifully written!
Mujhe aage jaana hai kya hoga?!!

Rev 🤗 for the idea and Lachu for penning it down 🤗


You girls Rock!! Love ❤️

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