ShivIka FF: An Ishqbaaaz Rising *3.7 Updated* (2nd July, Page 82)

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#81

awesome dear..

i really wanted the relavation to be like this...

because if it happens like this...shivvay will be so much hurt...and he dnt have the guts to apoligize...

then the daksh entry will happen...then he wants to protect her.. but anika wnt believe him...then only he will go through the same pain anika had suffered

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Gurveen

@Gurveen

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#82

Finally shivaay knows the truth
Shivaay deserves to die in guilt
Continue soon

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ISensedYou

@ISensedYou

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#83

I absolutely love the fact that the ONS MU is cleared first...

I love your dadi in this story...did he think that his family would appreciate the way he did things? He is in for big shock then...

Wondering if shivaay will ask tia to go away now...

Sahil❤️ he rocked in this chapter🤣 wish he had given 2 more😆

Pinky seriously? U ask why the kid is behaving like that? Cant u see that anika is not happy with this wedding?🤔

Waiting to see what happens next❤️

Update soon!

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Sam98

@Sam98

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#84

HOW CUTE😆, Gosh I know you just updated but please update soon☺️, I love Shivaay's turn in character, much needed after the current track😆 LOVED IT!

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twerping

@twerping

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#85

Brilliant update!! Loved the way you broke the news of the loan before Shivay.. this is such an enjoyable read considering the circumstances.

Thank you for keeping the events in your story so grounded.

Really enjoying it!

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Anya

@elysianights

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#86

Lovely update...

Just loved it...thank god the MU at last cleared between them...I just love sahil..his scene was the best part of this update and I injoyed it a lot...I was just laughing at that time when he was beating him with his clutch... 😆

Shivaay was mesmerized by her eyes...

I just love this story...I are an awsm writer...

The way you expressed shivaay turmoil after he found the truth was very well written and I can literally imagine him..looking guilty...with a puppy face...

Waiting for the next part... eagerly...way will be shivaay's reaction...?

Do update it soon...

Luv u,

Anya😳

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aamirkhanfan

@aamirkhanfan

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#87

Wow! What an amazing update..

Loved it

The cvs should now clear the mu...it has been stretched too long and Anika has suffered enough.

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#88

Oh wow, this was such an incredible part👏
I think my fav so far😃
Enjoyed the humor and Shivaay's frustration was a treat👍🏼
Saahil knocking and mocking him was too good⭐️
And ofcourse the revelations one by one and the ultimate blow to Shivaay was superbly written👏
I love how you describe Anika's eyes in Shivaay's perspective
Really excited for the next and all upcoming parts😃
You have an absolutely thrilling and addictive story going on here👏
Take care n do continue soon😊

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varala

@varala

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#89

Wow superb

Shivaay came to know Sahil😕

The way u resolved the ONS wow superb👏

Update ur next part soon

Thanks for pm 😊

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pinguunique

@pinguunique

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#90

Just finished reading your FF! Amazing, absolutely love it! Such a joy to read such well written FFs. I love how you didn't drag the story and cleared up the misunderstanding so quickly! Please do continue :)