ShivIka FF: An Ishqbaaaz Rising *3.7 Updated* (2nd July, Page 82)

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LilyJames0194

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Posted: 8 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: ISensedYou
Very well written...
Its heartbreaking to see how anika is trying to convince herself about being fine...
Im glad anika dint go to the reception...did dadi call her and she dint go? Or dint dadi call her for the reception?
Really curious to see how the story goes from here

Hi! I am sorry I am replying a little late to you... so anyway the way I picture it, everyone is both too shocked and too confused to actually decided how to proceed.

And before anyone can actually make any decisions, they have to deal with the whole reception that has already been so well planned by Anika.

Not just that, even while they are processing all this - especially Tia's return... Shivaay goes and introduces Tia to the media and world as the new Mrs. SSO.

So in very real life manner I just don't see either side of the people actually making an effort to bridge the gap that day.

Hope that answers your question?

Or the next 2 chapters have at least tried and made that scenario become a little clearer?

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bworm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#72

Nice...good going

Was wondering how the ONS will be resolved.

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LilyJames0194

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Posted: 8 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Roseymi
Please just make him bleed ...i love this...i want to see him break his own image in his mind...
ur update is fabulous please continue...

Hahah! That small part where I used 'bleed' in the last part was just for you! Thank you for always being so encouraging.. hope you like the new update?

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noor

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Posted: 8 years ago

#74

This was so perfect it brought tears to my eyes.. This was genuinely vrry well written and very very well worded and well thought of. Love your writing !!

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LilyJames0194

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Posted: 8 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: Rozy77
Finally caught up with the last 4 parts
Absolutely loved and enjoyed them😃
This is such a beautifully put-together story⭐️. Wonderfully penned👏.

Anika's pain is heart-breaking but I love her fighting spirit❤️
That small moment with Om was so touching❤️.
It was good to read Shivaay's frustration. Is he goin to regret terribly or what?! I'm eagerly waiting for that bit
Looking forward to the next part😃
Take care

Hi!! Thank you so much!

I was hoping someone would love that Om-Anika moment as much as I loved writing it! ❤️

Because I really love these two together - and there is just TOO much potential there for a beautiful friendship based more on altering life stories, understanding and just mutual respect.

And I hope this update throws a little more light into Shivaay's inner turmoil?

Thank you again for the wonderful reply.. hope you like this update too?

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Posted: 8 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: itzanya32
AWSM UPDATE AS ALWAYS...👏
i just love rudy baby..❤️ he always used to suprise us wid his behaviour..
as everyone was arguing on the matter he come in the front and drop the bomb and all went silent...he is just adorable...cute childish but also intelligent...mature but sometimes immature..he is a perfect blend of all the things...
shivaay is always impulsive and always listen to his brain...but he couldn't resist his heart when it comes to annika...but that horrible MU comes in his way and make all the things more complicated..
he called annika but she didn't pick it up he tried 2-3 times but she didn't budge from her place and at last he throw the phone being furious and the phone shattered into pieces..all because of our stubborn annika...she must be like this...but at last she came to OM..and all will dicuss about the matter wid her as she is also a part of this family now... weather anyone will beleive it or not...it was the truth...and they have to accept this...and I'm eagerly waiting for the argument to take place...so plzz update it soon.. 😳😳

love u,
anya😃

Hi!

I LOVE RUDY BABY TOO!!

I think he is probably my favourite character on the show. Not just because he is so adorably sensitive as well as playful - but I think he is much more observant than he is given credit for. And to be honest I don't think he is given enough screen space to fully develop into the different facets of his character. But again I don't really blame the PH for THAT, because honestly its a HUGE cast...so obviously there is going to be a little imbalance in screen space. So I really couldn't help making him much stronger here.

I think Rudra is going to be even more important in the next 2 or 3 chapters because of the way the story progresses.

Anyway, hope you have liked the new updates too?

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Posted: 8 years ago

#77

Superb. The thing I love the most about this is, we hear so many praises for Shivaay's green eyes( thanks to Nakuul Of course) but the way you make Shivaay mesmerized by Anika's honey colored eyes is just beautiful & unique.
Waiting...

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Posted: 8 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: LilyJames0194

Hahah! That small part where I used 'bleed' in the last part was just for you! Thank you for always being so encouraging.. hope you like the new update?

aww...😳 Thank you so much...right now seeing all the SBS segments i have gone mad...and your update is a blessing in disguise...

please continue...

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: noor j
This was so perfect it brought tears to my eyes.. This was genuinely vrry well written and very very well worded and well thought of. Love your writing !!

Thank you so much Noor! Honestly thats the best compliment ever... because I really wanted to express so many emotions in this one. Especially heart break on both sides of the ShivIka story. But these are such complex characters that its honestly difficult to pen down the emotions because of the constant fear that you are not doing them justice.

So thank you for making my day!