ShivIka FF: An Ishqbaaaz Rising *3.7 Updated* (2nd July, Page 82)

-JollyJabeen-JB

@-JollyJabeen-JB

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Posted: 8 years ago

#521

Lilly. My god, this was a short but intricate and important update. I don't know where to start tbh.. i'm just speechless.

I love the way you write, I really do. I love how you explain Shivaay, he is such a beautiful and complex character which makes reading him and his descriptions even more alluring. Ahhh, sad. This update makes me feel really sad. It's as if he has realised in a more obvious way that he really does not deserve her.. and thats breaks my heart. He has to repent.. and him saving her from the bullet is only the beginning. This reminded me of the Lohri track and a vulnerable Shivaay 😔 I'm really excited to see how you continue this.. and hopefully the police force will be much more useful in this FIC and not casually release Daksh after a while.🥱

Yayyy Rudy is here, Ruuudy meri jaan ❤️😆

Hopefully we will have an O'bro moment soon.. 😉😳 Also I forgot to mention.. I loveee how you introduced these chapters with the O'Jaana lyrics.. seriously. Absolute love !! And thank you for the speedy updates😎

Edited by -JollyJabeen-JB - 8 years ago

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cestlavie

@cestlavie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#522

All three parts were amazing!! Can't wait for the next...please update soon!

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

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Posted: 8 years ago

#523

Hi Lily, 😊
Its so beautiful dear! 👏 Anika's breakdown at him not trusting her, Shivay's guilt n apology, then the fear in his eyes of loosing Anika, each n everything was written so perfectly!!!!! 👏 👏 👏 Loved reading it! 😃 Can't wait to read the next phase of their life. 😳 Update soon n thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#524

brilliantly expressed in words..well written...👏

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#525

wow this was so beautifully written

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sky-if

@sky-if

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Posted: 8 years ago

#526

No words! Beautiful!

But I see what you did there! He was just apologizing but gets shot saving her.. can't wait to see how Annika handles this.. she loves him, but enough to compromise and stick around inspite of his NKK fixation?! Hmm.. :)

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Abhilasha Sharma

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Posted: 8 years ago

#527

I swear I was not expecting this. Only question - why?

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WittyFlair

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Posted: 8 years ago

#528

Been silently following along but marking the updates with the "likes". I appreciate that you've actually continued on with this story because this is the track that I wanted to happen back in December-January. It's such a more logical progression of Shivika's relationship and you've done a great job at showing the various depths of all the different characters. Keep updating, this is one of my favorite FFs in the forum!

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