Malaal | Shivika SS[Updated on 30/11 Chp.2- Pg- 7]

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ShanÃ© Pillay

@MorningStar01

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Hello 😳 came across this tread just now && read all 3 parts in one go and OMW, Loved It. Loved It. Loved It. The subtle insight of Anika's past was heart wrenching 😭 && I can't wait for Daksh&his partner to be punished 😡

"I will come with you" Shivaay said, stern in his statements. He was no more trying to conceal his worries and apprehensions. He was scrapping his wedding with Tia, finally being able to figure out his priorities and everyone knew better than arguing with him at this point of time" 👏 finally he acted sensibly && I like that Anika is his 'priority'... I don't feel bad for Lady Baba 🤔 she deserves it.

Please pm when you update again 🤗

-Shan'e

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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+ 10

Posted: 8 years ago

#52

intriguing update..hope Shivaay finds Anika soon..👍🏼

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varala

@varala

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Awesome update👏👏 ...I just loved it ⭐️

Anika trapped inside the cupboard 😲

Shivaay couldn't stand with Tia for a short time how he thinks he can spend his whole life🤢

Shivaay feels restless and he knows that something is not right 😕. ...so he delayed his wedding with Tia...and rushed with Om to find her...I hope shivaay find her before its too late

Continue soon

If possible pm me plz . ...Thanks 😊

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ashwakes

@ashwakes

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Loved it.

Please continue soon⭐️

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#55

hey there
finally caught up with up these 2 chapters
poor anika, i felt terrible for her
Shivaay's restlessness and Om's frustration were aptly described⭐️
i love that you added a bit of darkness in here. the story is going great and im so excited about what's going to happen in the upcoming parts..😃
you're such an amazing and talented writer👏
do continue soon
take care

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everywednesday

@everywednesday

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: poemssyndrome
wow, this is really very interesting. The Shivaay we love, confused yet concern Ed for his Anika. Really wanna know what happens next!

Thank you so much!

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everywednesday

@everywednesday

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: rinku95
intersting
continue soon

Thank you! :D

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everywednesday

@everywednesday

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Rozy77
hey there
finally caught up with up these 2 chapters
poor anika, i felt terrible for her
Shivaay's restlessness and Om's frustration were aptly described⭐️
i love that you added a bit of darkness in here. the story is going great and im so excited about what's going to happen in the upcoming parts..😃
you're such an amazing and talented writer👏
do continue soon
take care

Heyy thank you so much! I'll update as soon as I can. :)

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Areeba

@Areebaa

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Wow you're such a beautiful writer. Read all the parts in one go, thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
They were beautifully written and story title is good too, Malaal; something I have never heard before.

Looking forward to read further. 😳 Don't worry I'll stop by. 😉