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sharmi

@lucky_princess

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#161

Harshuu🤗...

U made me cry...cry bitterly 😭😭

Shivaay had such a horrrible and terrible past... maine nahi socha tha...

He smiled only occasionally... nd cried within his heart oftenly... how can someone be soo heartless...

They never saw his pain... that he needed them and not their money... He was robbed of their love and affection.

I could feel his pain... all thanks to your writing skills Harshu.

This update was... i dont have wrds to describe it! I am speechless...

Beautifully expressed emotions. It was heart breaking and poignant. Nothing could have been more painful than getting our trust broken each and everytime...especially when it is done by our loved ones...

Prinku is no more...😭 she was murdered... that was even more hurting.

Its very hard to control emotions... i know how it feels when we lose someone close to our heart... someone who plays an important role in our life... someone who was always there for us...in our good and bad. And one day when u r need of their love and support...they r not by ur side...

Its damn difficult... this update of yours had freshened some dark memories...

Srry... thoda zyaada hogaya right!!

Fabulous... Painful... hurting... nd above all... AWESOME!!!!

Anika's emotions... her pain when she heared about the happenings in his past was well written.

A writer is best, whe he or she can make the reader what is actually happening... the reader can imagine all that... smile when the story turns happy... nd cries when it takes painful turns. Nd u have done it... u made me cry...

U r awesome Harshu👏... keep doing this wonderful job👍🏼👏

Continue sooon dear..

Love Sharmi..

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NONIE

@Nonie12345

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#162

Amazing parts Harshada

Shivaay's past made me cry😭

you portrayed anika's emotions so beatifully while listening to shave's past

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Nidhi Pillai

@AnShi_LoVe

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#163

I cried along with Shivaay...the words u chose, the way u summed them up, everything was like beyond my imagination. 👏👏

I never even dreamed of this kind of Shivaay's past..😒

Yeah u r right at first even i thought that he got betrayed by a girl..coz of which he hates love..but this is heart wrenching..his whole life is PAIN..gifted by none other than his own Parents.

His parents separation at the age of 10 caused him to hate relations...

Any child will be broken beyond repair to see his/her parents walk away from each other that too leaving him/her as an unwanted thing...

The physical wounds which u get while playing nd all...more than any medicine only mom's love and care will heal THAT quickly giving the child a hearty content..but here in Shivaay's life her mom never cared for him hmm...now i get why u mentioned in one of the prev chapter that he himself dresses his wounds,...and this made him believe that there is no love in this world...

I felt somewhat okay that God was not very cruel with his life...God did give him someone to love him unconditionally in the form of his sister Prinku...but i broke down with the fact that was also snatched from him by his wonderful Mother...i feel like strangling her to death😡😡...This made him to even erase the tiny belief he had on the word MAA...

When he started to feel for someone..overcoming all his pain...again he received only betrayal...which shattered the very base of everything to an extent that he started hating everything...

I cried and still crying 😭😭...this revelation is something Ani din expect..even i din expect...

This Chap is just not confined to the box of Shivaay's past life...it's a social message...what a child actually wants from his/her parents and how parents should treat their children..for every child their parents are the one's who not only give him/her the much needed care but also a child grows looking at them..their behaviour, language, everything...create a strong impact in his/her life...luv u luv u to the power of infinity..i ll give u bone crushing Hug if u were infront of me now... for this wonderful Chapter...🤗🤗

Love u loads...❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Awesome as always...

Loved this...Thnx for the PM dear...Continue Soon :)

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floral

@floral

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#164

omg harshu i don't have words to appreciate this piece of work

its outstanding ,mind blowing

u just portrayed shivaays pain all emotions awesomely

i really hope anika become his ray of light his happiness his love

iam really impatient now

plzzz do continue soon

thanks for the pm dear

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#165

It was painful to know how much shivay suffered all along

His so called parents never love or care abt him

His own so called mom killed his sister

That wasn't enough that bitch Tia cheated on him with her boyfriend

No wonder why shivay is so bitter & full of hate

Anika was so broken hearing shivay painful past

She understood very well now why shivay was so rude to her

Continue plz

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ArhiIPKKND

@ArhiIPKKND

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#166

What a past...she killed his sis???!!!! Omg...

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#167

wow dont know what to say about shivaay pain

i dont know what will do if i find someone like him but yeah i know one thing i will give one tight slap to TIA and definitely spoil shivaay dad and mom life pakka.

please do continue

bye sumi

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#168

its so painful... didnt expect this much ...may be the medicine of all his pain is anika...

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wafa.M

@wafa.M

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#169

Both the updates were beautifully written... Shivays emotions were well expressed... YOU ARE AN AWESOME WRITER... 😊

It made me emotional... well Anika will definitely make him believe in Love again...

Do continue Soon... Will be waiting😉

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Riddhima

@Khushi_Dillse

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#170

Jeene k liye socha hi nahi dard sambhalne honge,

Muskuraye to muskurane k karz utarane honge,

Muskurao kabhi to lagta hai jaise hotho pe karz rakha hai...

Tujse naraaz nahi zindgi hairan hu main...hairan hu main

Tere maasoom sawalo se pareshan hu main...pareshan hu main...

😭😭😭

Tumhare paas tissue paper hai kya, paper chodo box hi de do...because I'm badly wanted...no wonder why shivaay so rude and bitter...now I understood why he behaving like this..poor fellow or karta bhi kya, his parents they are good for nothing, useless huhhh...jab shivaay ko sabse zyada unki zarurat thi kaha the wo...his only happiness his sister priyanka she is also not with him...how cruel his mother she killed priyanka...hey bhagvan aisa kon karta hai...life main na ignorance and betrayal is wrost things ever or shivaay ko to dono hi mili...ek uske parents se or ek uski so called girlfriend se...Anika feel his pain, she is broken inside but no girl you have to handle shivaay with love jiss se wo bhagata raha hai...I'm waiting for this and I know tum uska saath kabhi nahi chodogi...

Chaand bhi jhankta hai khidkio se,,

Meri tanhaiyo ki charcha ab aasmano main hai...

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