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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AnShi_LoVe

One half of the Chap is jus cuteness overloaded and the other half is jus pain cum care overloaded.

Nidhi, my dearest🤗
Thank you so much for this ever so amazing feedback😳
Yayy...I love sweet, cute and chessy stuffs☺️ more than anything else.
Next half part this is the start of the painful revelations.😕



I was smiling like a maniac jus before the phone call...With all his Gestures, hair tugging, Anarkali gifting (not literally but still), Anika's stammering ...more than Anika i was blushing hard...😳


☺️ 😳🤗☺️
Glad you liked those sweet little moments of Shivika.



Then came the BOOM...
Why his mother called......like seriously her 4th marriage..😲🤢

All i want to tell her is this "U r getting married to ur love/watever...y ruining my Shivika moment"😡 ...Poor Ani she was damn hungry and here this lady did not even let Ani as well her ONLY Son to finish off their dinner..😒


Boom😆😆 Shivaay ne gaadi uda di aur uski mom ne uske hosh🤣
Yeah fourth marriage
Here dinner went in vain and neither of them would care for now as things are more complicated now.



Poor Kaka i feel really really bad for him as well...he must have prepared all the dishes with happiness overloaded coz Shivaay was all normal normal today...alas 😭

Don worry Kaka nd Anika next time if that lady ever calls Shivaay na that to during his breakfast/lunch/dinner time and disturb my Shivika moment...i ll break the mobile in SSO style😆


Leave food for some time and get ready for some major revelations



Okay now coming back to the other part, after that phone call...it was...beyond description...
Him hurting her and caring her..and she trying to reduce his guilty feeling..u nailed it dear...luv u for this ❤️ ❤️


Thank you so much Nidhi😳 Glad you liked Shivaay's care and Anika's understanding ❤️
I love you more🤗



Shivaay will share his pain in the next Chap. ..now more than Anika i m hell scared...

Obviously he ll be shattered while narrating all those..but our super caring Anika will be there to pull him back together...yay!!!!

Awesome as always...👏
Loved this one to the core!!!!! ❤️
Thnx for the PM dear...Continue Soonish :)



Right. Shivaay is finally going to open up wholly in front of anika.
Don't be. But that of course will be painful.

Anika is there to hold him.

Your confidence on me is a great motivation my dear. Keep your reviews coming. I always await for them


Loads of love
-Harshada




Dearest Nidhi,

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky_princess

Harshuuu🤗

Srry yaar..pichle update pe comment nahi kiya...

Ab 4th aur 5th update keliye saath comment kar rahi hun..



Sharmi dear🤗 Don't bother, I understand.
I am just so very happy to have you here. Sooner or later doesn't matter.



Superb updates!!
Lovely...and painful.
I knew...Shivaay can never see his Anika in pain. U ve written his care..concern and guilt for her.
Her care...her selflessness... had finally made them friends. Shivaay hugging her was nyc.


Thank you so much dear. Glad you liked the updates.
Indeed, he can never bear her pain. This story comprises many emotions and different shades within a person which we generally don't get to see.
Finally a friendship is stared. Glad you liked it.



Both eating together at the canteen was so good.
Not Bad Harshu...kya plan banaliya... she forgot her keys... nd Shivaay offering her to stay at his house...and ahem...ahem...😳😳


Glad you liked that canteen scene😳
😆🤣 Abhi kuch to karna hi padega na😉




Shivaay mesmerized by her was awesome... she could have been looking incredibly beautiful😳... nd his jaw would have been hitting the floor😆.
His proximity... nd his compliment... OMG!!! i am blushing☺️☺️.



A quick attempt to show they getting attracted towards each other☺️
Of course...as beautiful as goddess
I am as well☺️



Nd then comes the painful part... he hurt her again😭... but he was equally guilty...
He attending to her wound... nd she understood his pain...
Oh godd!! he is going to reveal his painful past...
She will handle him... his heartbreak... nd she will heal his pain... his wounds..😳😊
Superbly written..
Love u dear...😃

Love Sharmi



This is a start to his revelations.
He did...but not intetinally...the moment he realized what he did, he immediately rectified it. Yeah he is
Thanks a ton dear.

Love you loads
-Harshada





Dearest Sharmi,
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rinku95

fabulous

thanks for pm
continue soon


Thank you so much rinku.

Updating in a while
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: kusharberry

amazing update harshu
i loved it very much
omg i really loved it
shivaay is sucha a sweet heart aww anika is cute
oh no shivaay is having a bad past i guess
plzzz do continue soon
and thanks for the pm dear



Thank you so very much lina🤗
Super happy to know you liked this update so much.
He indeed is❤️
Yes he does have one
Will update soonish.

love
-Harshada
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Aparikshita

hi,harshada...

Don't mind,Dear...I'm having a wish...i wanna call u by one of ur nick names...as i consider u as my lil sister...pls,don't mind...


My dearest Sanju🤗🤗

Of course you can my dear. Pick up Harshu or any else name you wish.😳 I of course will never mind.😊




Love u so much dear for this amazingly written update...trust me or not,dear...u r making me fall in love with this ss so much that when i was starting to read this update i was literally praying...for it to last long n never end...but it ended...n now i'm upset...all credit goes to ur brilliant writing skills...

U asked me about my studies...well,dear,i'm a psychology student...right now...but am a isqbazian also...


And I love you for this beautiful and lovely feedback😳
I can't get more happy than hearing that you are falling for this story.
Aww😳 That was sweety sweet. You are a sweetheart.

Great to know you are pursuing psychology. Psychology has always been a interest for me😳



Dear,todays update was_______
I can't explain...so,i'm not gonna fill that blank...as i feel i don't have the capacity to appreciate u n ur update...


I love you zillion times for this. But trust me, don't ever feel that your words are inadequate in any way. Please feel free to write what you want to😳



Today...Shiv was so different...Ani was shocked just like me by seeing his gestures...he was so adorable n cute...n Ani u r right...yes,he is cute...shiv tugged her hair strands behind her ears...n eye lock...awe...he also opened the car door...yes,ani u r right...he will definitely drive u crazy but in love only...so,don't worry...he also gave that dress...n after seeing her in that dress he was mesmerized...wow...he was super cute today...n also falling for ani's cuteness...wow...she stammering...i think shiv understood the main reason behind her stammering...oops,she almost confessed...loved the whole update...
Shiv's mom...she is just horrible...4th marriage...disgusting...shiv really endured so much...
Ani injured...oh...n Shiv was so guilty...as he injured her...but ani was so engrossed in him n wanted to reduce his pain...wow...

Upcoming Revelation...yahooo...waiting for it...continue soon,dear...love u.


He is a person with numerous shades. I love adorably cute people☺️

Somewhere he did get the reason behind her stammering, who would not get?😉😆

Glad you liked the whole part my dear.

She is more horrible than how much your are imagining now.

finally revelations are on their way.

Updating in a while.

Love you loads'
-Harshadaa






Dearest sanju,

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Imashkara

First Thank you for pm me...

And second...love your update 🤗

You are always welcome for pms Khushi🤗 and I again apologize for missing out some pms to you
Thank you so much😳 Super glad to know you liked it.




I'm literally blushing on first part and I love my shivaay's smile...anikas stammering, fumbling and nervousness worth watching...you are in love anika...😳 yaar ye Shivaay ki mom ka kya funda hai...she is crazy...my shivika's moment koi spoil kare I don't like it...yesss shivaay open up slowly slowly but he again hurt anika and she never mind this...wow...I want to know what shivaay saying about his bitter past...Please update soon...
And biggg hug for your sister who like my shayari as well...And yess of course you use it if you want I don't mind in fact it will be honoured...Thanks...and you deserve more than I say 😉



Aww...great to know you liked it so much😳 Most of the people liked the first half. Even I am fan of such writeups- cute and sweet enough to make you smile.
Yes she definitely is in❤️

Uski mom hi villian hai uske life ki
I am just updating in a while. I know all are waiting to know about his bitter past.

A big hug to you in return from her and me as well🥳🤗🤗
We both love your works...A LOT MORE THAN A LOT😳
Yayy...I definitely will

Thank you so very much Khushi sweetheart.




Wo mohobbate jo tumhare dill main hai,
Use zubaa pe lao or bayaa kar do...

Aaj bas tum kaho or kehte hi jao,
Hum bas sune aise ki Be zubaa kar do...

Apne dill main iss tarah chupalo mujko,
Rahu humesha iss main, ise mera jahaa kar do..


No words for this one Beautiful

.
Loads of love
-Harshada




Dearest Khushi,

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ArhiIPKKND

Things r getting intense...nice


Thank you so much dear
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteariya

Nice update

Continue plz


Thanks dear.

Will do
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey dearies,
I have updated the next chapter of this story...Update of revelations.

Have a look and I am eagerly waiting for the feedbacks..

*Nervous*

-Harshada
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Posted: 8 years ago
superb
shivaay went through a lot
continue soon
thanks for pm

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