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Riddhima

@Khushi_Dillse

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#131

Teri har ek burai pe daante

wo dost,

gum ki ho dhoop to saaya bane

tera wo dost,

naache bhi wo teri khushi main...

yaaro dosti badi hi haseen hai...,

Ye naa ho to kya fir ye

zindgi hai ..

Harshada I love you...no really...you are a fabulous writer, how can you get this idea...?? I'll read lots of ff, Ss, os on shivika but never ever read like this...on there frdship...speechless...shivaay for me like Delhi's weather...Some times cold some times hot...or kabhi to samaj main hi nahi aata...But my anika is angel she find out his pain...she want to remove from him...so sweet she is...is she has soft corner for him in her heart anywhere...may be...main kuch zyada hi sochti hu shayad...and I want to say something hmmm, i hate love triangles yaar...Please yaha aisa kuch mat karna jaise ki shivaay ki ex ya anika ka bf 😕...now talk about ishkaara there are adorable and true frd of shivaay they know his bitter past...I love there bonding and yess rudy is also there...Lovely waise main bhi hu 😉

Shikayato ki pai pai jodkar rakhi thi maine,

usne gale lagakar sara hisaab bigaad dia...!!!!!

-Khushi...

Edited by Imashkara - 9 years ago

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: MorningStar01

🤣 I'll save you the confusion, you can just call me whichever is easier to say...yes please, i'd like to read your other work 😳 i'll be waiting for the links 😛

Alright I am picking Shane😳

Sure I'll drop you links

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: Imashkara
Teri har ek burai pe daante
wo dost,
gum ki ho dhoop to saaya bane
tera wo dost,
naache bhi wo teri khushi main...
yaaro dosti badi hi haseen hai...,
Ye naa ho to kya fir ye
zindgi hai ..

Harshada I love you...no really...you are a fabulous writer, how can you get this idea...?? I'll read lots of ff, Ss, os on shivika but never ever read like this...on there frdship...speechless...shivaay for me like Delhi's weather...Some times cold some times hot...or kabhi to samaj main hi nahi aata...But my anika is angel she find out his pain...she want to remove from him...so sweet she is...is she has soft corner for him in her heart anywhere...may be...main kuch zyada hi sochti hu shayad...and I want to say something hmmm, i hate love triangles yaar...Please yaha aisa kuch mat karna jaise ki shivaay ki ex ya anika ka bf 😕...now talk about ishkaara there are adorable and true frd of shivaay they know his bitter past...I love there bonding and yess rudy is also there...Lovely waise main bhi hu 😉

Shikayato ki pai pai jodkar rakhi thi maine,

usne gale lagakar sara hisaab bigaad dia...!!!!!

-Khushi...

My dearest Khushi🤗🤗

I am super glad to have your feedback on this fic...this is my very first SS I ever attempted in writing🤗

Aww...I love you too ❤️

That's a super big complement😳 which I don't think I deserve😆 But thank you so much😳

I am glad that this is something different and not common for you. I feel if people are taking out their precious time to read then it must be worth doing so.

Well, I don't know. It just came along. I have had planned a basic storyline, then this story just happened.

Shivaay in this fic, has different shades.

Anika is indeed no less than an angel here.

No yar...past love interest can be a case but I won't show any love triangles in present as I hate them as well😉

Of course, you are also lovely🤗❤️

Can I use this one please??❤️ Pretty please🤗

Loved loved loved this one.

My sister asked me to let you know that she is a fan of your shayries👏 just like I am fan of you

Loads of love

-Harshada

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#134

I have updated the next chapter of this fic guys,

Only few chapters are remained and then this will end.

Do share your view<3

love

-Harshada

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KRUTI PASAD

@KrUtI97

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#135

god..god...god...god...this was the best part...i loved this one...seriously you re an amazing writer...post the next part soon...will be waiting...

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thisissmansi

@thisissmansi

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#136

Uff...can't wait for the next one..pls tell when will u post the next one???

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psdraval

@psdraval

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#137

As I am a silent reader of this forum I never commented on any story but your story made me or I can say forced me to do so I am surprised that how simply you make some story beautiful I mean superb excited for the next part ...'

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Nidhi Pillai

@AnShi_LoVe

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#138

One half of the Chap is jus cuteness overloaded and the other half is jus pain cum care overloaded.

I was smiling like a maniac jus before the phone call...With all his Gestures, hair tugging, Anarkali gifting (not literally but still), Anika's stammering ...more than Anika i was blushing hard...😳

Then came the BOOM...

Why his mother called......like seriously her 4th marriage..😲🤢

All i want to tell her is this "U r getting married to ur love/watever...y ruining my Shivika moment"😡 ...Poor Ani she was damn hungry and here this lady did not even let Ani as well her ONLY Son to finish off their dinner..😒

Poor Kaka i feel really really bad for him as well...he must have prepared all the dishes with happiness overloaded coz Shivaay was all normal normal today...alas 😭

Don worry Kaka nd Anika next time if that lady ever calls Shivaay na that to during his breakfast/lunch/dinner time and disturb my Shivika moment...i ll break the mobile in SSO style😆

Okay now coming back to the other part, after that phone call...it was...beyond description...

Him hurting her and caring her..and she trying to reduce his guilty feeling..u nailed it dear...luv u for this ❤️ ❤️

Shivaay will share his pain in the next Chap. ..now more than Anika i m hell scared...

Obviously he ll be shattered while narrating all those..but our super caring Anika will be there to pull him back together...yay!!!!

Awesome as always...👏

Loved this one to the core!!!!! ❤️

Thnx for the PM dear...Continue Soonish :)