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Posted: 8 years ago
The Update was Fantastic...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸΌ
Ishana is too good with her plans...at right time she gestures Rudy...& Rudy too understood...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ƒ
Robin totally hated the Oberois & may be mostly Shivaay...but that's so natural...πŸ˜›πŸ˜†
('What a pleasant surprise! I should have guessed! Tia Kapoor- Robin Kapoor- Mrs. Kapoor's son and Mrs. Kapoor's daughter. And for your question Hriday, Sareens have launched three new businesses today. Important day it is. Of course we have an after party.'

For once, the hatred Robin had for that place seemed to have lessened. There was someone who could divert his mind and that someone exactly wanted that.

Om found the female weird. Sometimes she felt soothing, sometimes arrogant and sometimes plain rich spoilt brat.

'Hi Ishana, it's a pleasure meeting you again'

As they did a handshake; quite a few people except the two who knew what was going on, became uncomfortable. Abhijeet, because he very well knew his daughter. Om, without knowing the reason once more. Tia, because it was long Robin had seen a girl like that and this girl was beauty wit brains which scared her the most plus Robin had all reasons to move away from her.)--------- Ishana wanted to divert Robin's mind...& was successful...πŸ˜‰ Om was uncomfortable with IshBin's handshake (someone's getting jealous)πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†...& Tia was half-scared to loose Robin...πŸ˜›πŸ˜†
So Robin is practically loving Ishana's company & he was even glancing at Tia to make sure that she is tasting her own bitter medicine...πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰
Abhijeet staying back to keep an eye on Ishana...so father like...😊😊
Tia irked on seeing IshBin dancing & Om was clearly jealous...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜›
Om left out of jealousy...he can't see his woman dancing with someone else...πŸ˜³πŸ˜‰
Shivaay didn't get to drive Anika home...true!! The night was not in favour of ShivKara...πŸ˜†πŸ˜›
AnIshRu was such a great team...plan successful hone k process mein hai...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Rudra noticed the stalker...but he ignored it bcoz he was too caught up worrying about IshKara's silent fight...& some else too noticed the stalker, it's Ishana, i guess...
Pinky & her never-ending worries for Shivaay...
Rudra reached college without Saumya & that made Saumya mad...πŸ˜›πŸ˜’
Anika signed the papers for hew new management company...& the first contract is the one which is breaking ShivIka instead of making them happy...πŸ˜”πŸ˜”
That Daksh is back again...😑😑😑...Appy, please just make him disappear...
(As he was giving finishing touches to his latest piece of sculpture to be used for his art workshop which was Ishana's first step to popularise the art; he mocked himself for momentarily thinking of her as his new muse. She was all what he could have hated in someone, yet he felt peace near her. Such an irony it was. This way he never felt when he was near Ridhimma.

She had come sometime ago to have a look at what he had been preparing for the workshop, to get some ideas about how to publicise it or perhaps, to see whether he was okay. Publicity- one thing he had hated and she had sugar-coated with words as necessity for everyone to know, yet he had agreed to it as he had uncharacteristically been to a lot of other things. He could trust her.

But why should she even think he wouldn't be fine? He didn't have any say in her life. He was just an artist in her company and maybe, a friend. He had talked to her in a hurried manner not even properly looking at her. And he was irascible. Because, of her show-off' after party? Or because Ishana was so lost in Robin that she didn't even look at him leaving? But he explained himself that she had the right to make her choices and nothing was between them; for him to think of anything.)----------- This portion was so needed...Om's POV...he is really in the denial stage...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³
The Obros are busy thinking about their respective leads...that's kinda cute...πŸ˜ƒ
Tia is suddenly the victim...I am feeling sad for her now...she is realising her mistake...& Robin ignored her for a week, that's long enough to provoke her feelings...πŸ˜”

Keep going...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Roselind

The Update was Fantastic...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸΌ

Ishana is too good with her plans...at right time she gestures Rudy...& Rudy too understood...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ƒ
Robin totally hated the Oberois & may be mostly Shivaay...but that's so natural...πŸ˜›πŸ˜†
('What a pleasant surprise! I should have guessed! Tia Kapoor- Robin Kapoor- Mrs. Kapoor's son and Mrs. Kapoor's daughter. And for your question Hriday, Sareens have launched three new businesses today. Important day it is. Of course we have an after party.'

For once, the hatred Robin had for that place seemed to have lessened. There was someone who could divert his mind and that someone exactly wanted that.

Om found the female weird. Sometimes she felt soothing, sometimes arrogant and sometimes plain rich spoilt brat.

'Hi Ishana, it's a pleasure meeting you again'

As they did a handshake; quite a few people except the two who knew what was going on, became uncomfortable. Abhijeet, because he very well knew his daughter. Om, without knowing the reason once more. Tia, because it was long Robin had seen a girl like that and this girl was beauty wit brains which scared her the most plus Robin had all reasons to move away from her.)--------- Ishana wanted to divert Robin's mind...& was successful...πŸ˜‰ Om was uncomfortable with IshBin's handshake (someone's getting jealous)πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†...& Tia was half-scared to loose Robin...πŸ˜›πŸ˜†
So Robin is practically loving Ishana's company & he was even glancing at Tia to make sure that she is tasting her own bitter medicine...πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰
Abhijeet staying back to keep an eye on Ishana...so father like...😊😊
Tia irked on seeing
Shivaay didn't get to drive Anika home IshBin dancing & Om was clearly jealous...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜›
Om left out of jealousy...he can't see his woman dancing with someone else...πŸ˜³πŸ˜‰...true!! The night was not in favour of ShivKara...πŸ˜†πŸ˜›
AnIshRu was such a great team...plan successful hone k process mein hai...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Rudra noticed the stalker...but he ignored it bcoz he was too caught up worrying about IshKara's silent fight...& some else too noticed the stalker, it's Ishana, i guess...
Pinky & her never-ending worries for Shivaay...
Rudra reached college without Saumya & that made Saumya mad...πŸ˜›πŸ˜’
Anika signed the papers for hew new management company...& the first contract is the one which is breaking ShivIka instead of making them happy...πŸ˜”πŸ˜”
That Daksh is back again...😑😑😑...Appy, please just make him disappear...
(As he was giving finishing touches to his latest piece of sculpture to be used for his art workshop which was Ishana's first step to popularise the art; he mocked himself for momentarily thinking of her as his new muse. She was all what he could have hated in someone, yet he felt peace near her. Such an irony it was. This way he never felt when he was near Ridhimma.

She had come sometime ago to have a look at what he had been preparing for the workshop, to get some ideas about how to publicise it or perhaps, to see whether he was okay. Publicity- one thing he had hated and she had sugar-coated with words as necessity for everyone to know, yet he had agreed to it as he had uncharacteristically been to a lot of other things. He could trust her.

But why should she even think he wouldn't be fine? He didn't have any say in her life. He was just an artist in her company and maybe, a friend. He had talked to her in a hurried manner not even properly looking at her. And he was irascible. Because, of her show-off' after party? Or because Ishana was so lost in Robin that she didn't even look at him leaving? But he explained himself that she had the right to make her choices and nothing was between them; for him to think of anything.)----------- This portion was so needed...Om's POV...he is really in the denial stage...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³
The Obros are busy thinking about their respective leads...that's kinda cute...πŸ˜ƒ
Tia is suddenly the victim...I am feeling sad for her now...she is realising her mistake...& Robin ignored her for a week, that's long enough to provoke her feelings...πŸ˜”

Keep going...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ


Ofcourse!!! Ishana the masterexecuter πŸ˜‰
Yeah!! For Robin its convienient to blame Oberois😳
Well you have to wait for who is the other person who noticed πŸ˜‰
Pls bardashtofy Daksh for sometime, I promise he'll pay for whatever he does and thinks. M not gonna levave him that easy😳
I have pretty much changed Tia's character. As she reveals, I would like to what your thoughts.
Stay tuned ❀️
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi guys,
so sorry for being too late again. Life strikes me once again πŸ˜›. Lol, i am just a dramatic person!! Will be updating probably day after (atleast a part of the chapter).

So, stay tuned!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi peeps!!!

A very big sorry for again being late! Here is part 1 because I am still not done with writing and would need some more time. But hope that the writing makes up for it. Rest you know what you have to do. So enjoy!

Recap: Ishana is asked about afterparty plans. In afterparty Ishana remains very close to Robin and Om feels weirdly bad seeing them together. Ishana felt worried abou Om going away from the party. Someone stalks Anika and another person notices it. Pinky worried about shivaay because Om joined the business. Soumya got angry because Rufdra went to college without her. Anika went with Daksh for lunch against Shivaay's wishes. Om confused about his feelings. Rudra and Soumya having a cold war. One week passes by; Tia anxious about Robin

Chapter 14: Kabhi bada vikat vo (part 1)

(The dining hall, morning)

The Oberois had started pouring in. Everyone was getting ready to get in groove. Om's workshop was hardly in a day or two. Shivaay had to constantly be in touch with Anika for walking her throught the wedding expectations. The elder male Oberois were busy with someimportat projects and the female ones were again after Anika for giving her the instructions. Sincem the event management company had come, everything had to go through a formal process. Tej had managed to hold Abhijeet back till Shivaay's wedding.

As the youngest Oberois entered, the two brothers sensed coldness in their behaviour. Till now however they might tease each other, they would always sit together during meals and today, they were sitting at the opposite ends, not even looking at each other.

He had noticed that she lied to him that day but because of the case he couldn't ask her further. Perhaps, he should do it today whenever he gets chance to speak to her. After all, Om had called Soumya as his sister, he could hep her out and if Rudra was her cause of worry, he should double interevene and sort things out.

Even Shivaay had his typical frown and why shoud it not be there? He had called that girl n times since morning to first have breakfast with them and then work. But only if she would listen. Perhaps, he was getting even more annoyed at the fact that she was so keen for the marriage to happen. Also, he had to do something with Daksh. He had been finding oneway or another to at least spend one hour with Anika everyday. He knew Anika wouldn't refuse in politeness and that guy won't stop. He needed to solve this.

'WHAT THE HELL!'

It was as if a sudden tornado had come in a place which was pindrop silent up until now. She looked at him with huge eyes as if he had commited a crime. His eyes grew bigger with surprise.

It didn't register to anyone at first. She wore a harempant with a printed dark top. Ishana, who had been themost well-dressed and classy in her attire seemed ompletely offbeat today. He admired how she could look beautiful even in that attire- wasn't this one of the ways he always wanted to see her? And the father was loving the way how his daughter was changing slowly. Ishq does that to everyone.

'What?'

"My mistake. I should have thought you are not that active onwhatsapp. I told you to be ready by 8. There is an international workshop going in Andheri East andmany famous sculptors are coming. Food can wait. We have to be there.'

'But we are going, like this?'

' And I thought you were the artist and me the businesswoman but it seems, we are playing a role change. Mr. OSO, we are not going for a business deal but a sculpture workshop. Sculptors go like this, right.'

And whatever had happened last night was forgotten in a moment. She was notonly ambitious but passionate. She didn't want just money but actualy come out with the bestest of the works. Omkara had always poured emotions in his work, perhaps, it was time that he started to play around with technique too.

She almost started pulling him from the chair as everyone watched them in a shock.

Bye guys, see you later.'

'This was our Ishana only right, Pihu?'

To this question, she simply smiled.

Ishana was sure on a high today. She was pulling Om as if they had to catch a train throught he crowd. As they ra through the local train station; Ishana mercilessly pushed people here and there pulling om. Om gestured sorry to atleast twenty people before getting to the train.

They smiled as they got to stand near the door in a heavily full compartment.

Ishana Sareen ka yeh bhi ek andaaz hai. Dekh kar acha laga.'

She smiled at him.

Ye tera rang naya hai, roop alag hai

Dil mein aj ek ehsaas naya hai

Nai chahte hai nayi umange hai

Mann mein ek khwaab naya hai

http://www.sheroshayari.net/ghazals-and-lyrics-poetry-on-ghazals/hai-rang-naya-sa-roop-naya-sa.html

Ishana's cheeks went red. She knew Om's eyes were on her even if he was looking outside. So, the last night was forgotten. She was the happiest to know that.

(https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qVHaXD7zHDQ; phir kabhi, MS dhoni)

Yeh lamha jo tehra hai
Mera hai yeh tera hai
Yeh lamha main jee loon zara

Tujhme khoya rahun main
Mujhme khoyi rahe tu
Khud ko dhoond lenge phir kabhi

Tujhse milta rahoon main
Mujhse milti rahe tu
Khud se hum milenge phir kabhi
Haan aa phir kabhi

Ishana animatedly discussed each and every interesting sculpture that they saw. The technicalities and the thought behind every creation. He had never explained his interests and how he saw each piece of art in that detail before. And she saw and excitedkara and talkingkara for the first time- his eyes glowed like that of an innocent child's when he shows his new toy.

After the workshop, they walked through the marine drive discussing what is thought behind the sculptures he has done for the workshop; Ishana loved the gleam in his eyes as he described those. Also she wanted to theme the upcoming workshop around Om's thought process so that it doesn't become mechanical.

(Oberoi mansion, main hall)

Shivay was immersed in his work on the dining table when he heard two people laughing very loudly.

'Rud...'

But then, he saw Rudra coming from the opposite side alone. Rudra gestured a-what-happened look to him when they both looked towards the door.

(Music after first para, phir kabhi, MS Dhoni)

They both were shocked to the core. It was IshKara laughing; to the extent that tears appeared in their eyes - it was very rare for them to see them, especially Om, laughing so badly. Pm seemed different, a happier version, high-fiving with Ishana.

Dil pe taras aa rahan hain
Pagal kahi ho na jaayein
Woh bhi main sun ne laga hoon
Jo tum kabhi kehna paaye
Lyrics at lyricsted.com
Ye subha phir aayegi
Ye shaamein phir aayengi
Ye nazdeekiyan phir kahaan

Tujhme khoya rahun main
Mujhme khoyi rahe tu
Khud ko dhoond lenge phir kabhi

Tujhse milta rahoon main
Mujhse milti rahe tu
Khud se hum milenge phir kabhi
Haan aa phir kabhi

O bhaiya, chalo na Anika Bhabhi baar baar engagement ke dress ke liye puch rahi hai.'

He knew that the marriage was not going to happen as they would expose RoTia before but till then, they had to act normal.

'Sorry Rudra, Om and me have to discuss about the workshop.it's immediately after the marriage noe.'

'Yeah, you know what I like so bta dena.'

Shivaay decided to tease Om a bit. He winked at Rudra.

'Kyu Om, tere liye kaam bhai se important kab se hogya?'

'Actually Shivaay it's my fault. Maine hi board members ko workshop ka synopsis dene ke liye jaldi date di. It's not Om's fault.'

'Tum log fikar mat karo. Mai aj raat se pehle Anika se baat karlunga.'

They both ran towards Om's art room even before the two Obros could reply.

'Ishana se baat krne se fursat hogi tab anika se baat karega' he smiled and with his trademark act to move his hand through hair, he left for office.

(Evening, corridor outside Om's room)

He walked to stop her as she as passing through the corridor still lost in her thoughts.

'Soumya?'

Her fears came back as she saw him. She wouldn't be able to lie to him again; at least not to him. She had to think of something and that too fast.

'Jee...jee majhle bhaiya'

Tum busy ho ya thoda time hai?'

She nodded in a yes. They went to his room. He made her sit on the chair near the window.

'Bolo, kya hua hai?'

'Na...'

He interrupted before she could complete.

'Soumya, uss din maine tumse dobara nahi pucha, kyuki mai apni hi uljhano mei khoya hua tha magar aj jaanna chahta hunk i aisa kya hai jo tumko pareshan kar raha hai. Bhai kehti ho na mujhe?'

Shit! This was what she was scared of. Now, there was no way she coud hide anything from him. But, she thought of something and became calmer.

'Bhaiya.. wo Rudra, I mean ajkal samajh hi nahi ata kaha rehta hai. Uss din bhi maine usko bola tha ki mere sath college jana bt pehle hi nikal gaya. Aur 5 minute late class pahucha.Chubby told em ki ajkal jyada parties bhi nahi attend krta hai.'

'That's weird. Rudy college na aaye wo main maan skta hun but parties bhi nahi; wo bhi ab jabki sab thik hai'

'Aur bhaiya, pehle toh who ghar pe hi rehta tha agar party nahi krta that oh. Ajkal...ajkal puri puri raat gayab rehta hai. Aur mujhe toh darr hi ki...'

'Darr hai ki?'

And she told him everything about Romi. Om felt terribly guilty of making joke out of the whole Romi episode. He knew that Rudy dated a lot of girls but he had never hurt anyone. He would talk to Shivaay and that too now.

(Few minutes later)

'Tune bulaya Om?'

Soumya was truly scared. She knew howmuch Shivaay bhaiya protected his younger siblings. What if he were to do something really bad to Romi? And if Rudra blamed her? Well, he was very much capable of doing the same.

Om told him whatever Soumya had said. She kept looking down out of the guilt of not warning Rudra beforehand.

'I...am...sorry'

'Its okay Soumya mujhe pta hai tumne bhi nahi socha hoga ki Romi kisi ko itna torcher kar skti hai'

'Cut it Om, this is not important for now. More important is, to know all about her, and to talk to Rudra.'

Shivaay called Khanna asking him to get all details about the girl from wherever possible. (Shivaay BG tune)

(Night, Garden near the guest house)

Anika hurried through her way, she had already got very late for discussion;thanks to Tia's speciications for her dress- shadi dress se karni hai ya Shivaay se, she thought in exasperation.

Ishana, Rudra and Soumya were already there, waiting for her.

'Yaar tum log iss Tia ka band jldi bjao, nahi toh who mujhe dhol ki tarah bajati rahegi'

Ishana gave a small laugh hearing this.

'Rudra, explain the plan to Soumya and Anika. After all we need them now.'

'Haan, toh we have managed to annoy Tia to an extent ki ab wo kabhi bhi blast kr skti hai.'

'And we need her not to do any emotional drama. Rudra aur mai isliye chahte hai ki Soumya tum Tia pe nazar rakho. Especially read her emotions. She needs to burt out the truth but blaming only Robin and no one else.'

Soumya was still lost in thinking about what ShivKara were going to do with Romi. She wished she could have talked to Rudra first.

'Okay, Soumya???'

Seeing Rudra raising his voice on her, she absent-mindedly agreed that she had listened.

'Par agar usne emotional drama kia toh?'

'Isliye Anika di, we need Sumo to keep loking at Tia. Nahi toh who galat hote hue bhi sabko sahi lgegi. Aur apko isliye nai keh rahe taaki ap par kisi ko shak na ho.'

And they all high fived after the plan got finalled. Tia's truth would soon come out now.

(Next day, morning, main hall)

All the Oberois and Sareens along with the kapoors, Robin, Anika and soumya were present. Today the Kapoors were to finalise the logistics of the wedding after discussing with the Oberois. And since the Kapoors were coming, Ishana didn't want to leave a chance to add salt to Tia's wounds as she hadn't in just in one week.

And he saw it again, Robin and Ishana totally into each other. No, he needed to take his steps back, when you do not feel you can ever understand a person, when you see different faces of them, is when you must back out- for you never know what that person turns out to be. His mom had made the same mistake years ago with Mr. Oberoi and he shouldn't repeat the same. He had heard Kabir jiju talking about Ishana's prospect with Robin a few days ago. He needed to step back.

She got the text saying work done. She knew what she had done would hurt herself as well. But, anyway, she cared much more for her relationship than anything else in the world. And she had to let the world know the truth through an indirect way. She sat composed and waitd for the action to happen.

'TAAAD'

Before anyone could have understood anything; a loud noise came of the slap that Robin had just received from Kabir.

'Kabir?'

Kabir was generally a calm person. But today, his face had become red with anger. Robin looked up, astonished and scared.

'Kyun.. Robin, btao maine kyun thappad maara tumhe.. BTAO ROBIN SAXENA!!'

Ishana looked at Rudra not knowing how to control the situation. She couldn't even think if this was happening for good or bad. They needed Soumya to divert Tia so that she doesn't make herself appear as the one on the receiving end.

The Oberois were shocked to the core- Saxena/Kapoor- what the heck was happening!!

Kabir was about to hit Robin once again when Tia came in between.

'Galti meri hai. It's my fault. Mere Naam, Khoon aur Khandan ki'

She knew she had hit the bull's eye. Rudra moved wishing to stop Tia but Ishana gestured him not to.

'Main bahut pyar karti hun Robin se, apne pati se. But unfortunately paisa nahi hai uske paas. Kuch nai hai. Hai toh ek acha dil jo duniya samajhti nai hai. Isliye mom apna business bachane ke liye meri aur Shivay ki shadi krwana chahti thi.'

Pati she said. Did she?

Then she moved towards Anika, she had to make sure all the sympathies were in her favour, whether the marriage happened or not. She had to take her last chance

'Tumhe pta hai, Anika, I've always been jealous of you. Atleast tum apni man ki zindagi apni marzi se jee toh skti ho. Kisi family name ka stress toh nahi hai tum par.'

And then, kabir once again.

Please Kabir, shayad main hi layak nahi hun, na Shivaay ke aur na Robin ke. He is a good guy.'

'What the hell is happening, koi samjhaega?' He had lost all control by then.

'Shivaay, I, Tia Kapoor, have been married to Robin. Kapoor industries ko bachane ke liye main tumse shadi krne wali thi.'

Tomatoes/chappals/Criticism/Appreciation all welcome/awaited


Edited by appynehra - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome appy ...

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Abhi ek question hai... why did kabir slap Robin????
Edited by Mahira_khan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb
Finally it's out
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
The update was Superb...πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ
Anika is super busy is Shivaay's wedding preps...ohh kitne kaam hai...bichari ka bura haal hoga...🀒
So Ishana is staying back until Shivaay's wedding...chalo wedding mein IshKara k scenes honge...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ƒ
Om will confront Sumo & also Rudy if needed...that's like a big brother...😊😊
Shivaay is irked with Daksh & jealous that Anika has to pay him attention...he care for Anika..sirf use hi Anika naashta ki ya nhi iss baat ki chinta hogi...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜›
('WHAT THE HELL!'

It was as if a sudden tornado had come in a place which was pindrop silent up until now. She looked at him with huge eyes as if he had commited a crime. His eyes grew bigger with surprise.

It didn't register to anyone at first. She wore a harempant with a printed dark top. Ishana, who had been themost well-dressed and classy in her attire seemed ompletely offbeat today. He admired how she could look beautiful even in that attire- wasn't this one of the ways he always wanted to see her? And the father was loving the way how his daughter was changing slowly. Ishq does that to everyone.

'What?'

"My mistake. I should have thought you are not that active onwhatsapp. I told you to be ready by 8. There is an international workshop going in Andheri East andmany famous sculptors are coming. Food can wait. We have to be there.'

'But we are going, like this?'

' And I thought you were the artist and me the businesswoman but it seems, we are playing a role change. Mr. OSO, we are not going for a business deal but a sculpture workshop. Sculptors go like this, right.'

And whatever had happened last night was forgotten in a moment. She was notonly ambitious but passionate. She didn't want just money but actualy come out with the bestest of the works. Omkara had always poured emotions in his work, perhaps, it was time that he started to play around with technique too.

She almost started pulling him from the chair as everyone watched them in a shock.

Bye guys, see you later.'

'This was our Ishana only right, Pihu?')-------- Ishana's sudden changed colour...& Om is impressed actually...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜Š.& Ishu's father couldn't believe it was his daughter...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

(She was pulling Om as if they had to catch a train throught he crowd. As they ra through the local train station; Ishana mercilessly pushed people here and there pulling om. Om gestured sorry to atleast twenty people before getting to the train.

They smiled as they got to stand near the door in a heavily full compartment.

Ishana Sareen ka yeh bhi ek andaaz hai. Dekh kar acha laga.'

She smiled at him.

Ye tera rang naya hai, roop alag hai

Dil mein aj ek ehsaas naya hai

Nai chahte hai nayi umange hai

Mann mein ek khwaab naya hai

http://www.sheroshayari.net/ghazals-and-lyrics-poetry-on-ghazals/hai-rang-naya-sa-roop-naya-sa.html

Ishana's cheeks went red. She knew Om's eyes were on her even if he was looking outside. So, the last night was forgotten. She was the happiest to know that.)-------- Om has to apologise to people since ishana pushed them...πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Then Om's shayari for Ishu was awesome...😳😳

The song & Om being excited & all talking with Ishana scene was great...she wanted to theme the art business on Om's thoughts, that's so Ishana like...she really cares for Om...😊

IshKara happy & laughing & hi-fi-ing each other...& ShivRu were surprised at this...πŸ˜›πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜†

(O bhaiya, chalo na Anika Bhabhi baar baar engagement ke dress ke liye puch rahi hai.')-------- Appy edit that 'Bhabhi' word...you forgot, in your story Anika is still not Rudy's bhabhi...she is still the wedding planner of Shivaay...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

('Sorry Rudra, Om and me have to discuss about the workshop.it's immediately after the marriage noe.'

'Yeah, you know what I like so bta dena.'

Shivaay decided to tease Om a bit. He winked at Rudra.

'Kyu Om, tere liye kaam bhai se important kab se hogya?'

'Actually Shivaay it's my fault. Maine hi board members ko workshop ka synopsis dene ke liye jaldi date di. It's not Om's fault.'

'Tum log fikar mat karo. Mai aj raat se pehle Anika se baat karlunga.'

They both ran towards Om's art room even before the two Obros could reply.

'Ishana se baat krne se fursat hogi tab anika se baat karega' he smiled and with his trademark act to move his hand through hair, he left for office.)------- IshKara so much engrossed in each other that they didn't even get Shivaay teasing Om & the last statement of Shivaay...LOL...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Finally, Om talked to Saumya...& she told about Rudra's weird behaviour & about Romi as well...πŸ‘πŸΌ

Shivaay back in his protective shield mode...😊😊

AnIshRuMya plan to expose Tia...😎😊

Om was hurt seeing Ishu with Robin again...πŸ˜”πŸ˜”

I didn't understood the part of Kabir slapping Robin & suddenly blurting out his real name...πŸ˜•πŸ€” Please explain a bit, Appy...

But ya, i totally liked how Kabir's blurting out Robin's real name helped in Tia's exposure...πŸ‘πŸ˜ƒ

At last Tia accepted that she was marrying Shivaay for money & she is already married to Robin...yay!!! πŸ˜ƒ

I liked the line Tia said to Anika...it was so true...πŸ‘πŸΌ


Keep going...😊😊

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Waiting for the next part... update soon...finally tia is exposed...
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Hi guys,
I am out of station so would be replying and updating once I am back!!!

Cheers!
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Originally posted by: bworm

Wah..kya twist hai.

Maza agaya.


Hahaha!! Tnx :)

Originally posted by: Mahira_khan

Awesome appy ...


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Abhi ek question hai... why did kabir slap Robin????


Ye jaan ne ke liye padhe agla update !!! πŸ˜‰

Originally posted by: rinku95

Superb
Finally it's out
Continue soon
Thanks for pm


Glad that u liked it :)

Originally posted by: shwetaphadke

Waiting for the next part... update soon...finally tia is exposed...


Yay! Stay tuned :)

Originally posted by: __shibani__

Awesome! continue ASAP!


Sure! Stay tuned! :)

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