Shivika/Ishkara/Rumya FF (ch-9 on pg-16)

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Charcters---
Same as show...
New ones are given below...

Divyam Dama- As Ansh... Shivaaye & Anika son... He is full too copy of his mom... 5 yrs old... Twin bro of Shivam. Loves his Mother alot... Shivaaye does not know abt them.

Vishesh Bansal - As Shivam... Shivaaye & Anika's son... He is full too copy of his Dad... loves his Mom alot... 5 yrs old... twin bro of Ansh. Shivaaye does not know abt them.

Eklavya Ahir-- As Ishaan.. Son of Ishaana & Omkara... Loves his parents alot... 5 yrs old...

Amrita Mukherjee - As Roumya... Daughter of Rudra & Soumya... Copy of her dad... Funloving... But is intelligent like her mom... Loves them alot...

Jay Shree T-- As Kaushalya Mehra... Anika lives with her only... Calls her Dadi...

Shaleen Malhotra- Aryan Mehra... Like a bro to Anika... Mama to Ansh & Shivam... ... MD of mehra groups... Calls Anika as Ani/Anu.. while she calls him chhote.. Ansh & Shivam calls him devil... He loves them alot...

Prolouge--

Shivaaye-Anika...

Anika was only one to whom it did not matter whether he is Shivaaye or Shivaaye Singh Oberoi. It wld irk Shivaaye. He always show girls without surname as gold diggers. He thought that he will throw money anything he can buy. But Anika was not like that. She wld always clash with him, unknowily hurting his ego. So shivaaye thinking of taking revenge. He played a gave of Love with her. He helped Anika in many ways. One day he took her to a resort & proposed her. Anika happily excepted his proposal. Same night they made love. But Anika did not knew that which she is feeling love is just revenge for Shivaaye. They spent the night together. When Anika woke up in morning she did not find Shivaaye. She thought he wld be coming. She went to get fresh & came out.
After Shivaaye came... Anika hugged him...

Anika- Shivaaye u dont know how happy i am... When are u talking to ur parents abt our wedding.
Shivaaye smriks & pushes her away. Anika is shocked.

Anika- Shivaaye...

Shivaaye- Whattt????? Haa u thought i will ever love a low class girl lky u... No never... U know i just wanted to spend a night with u & i did it... He throws bundle of money on her . Take it & go away...

Anika (In tears) goes to him. She touches his cheeks & says- Shivaaye u are joking na... Haa... See if i did anything wrong tell me... But dont say our love as fake... Dont give such a bigg gaali to our love...

Shivaaye (laughs)- Stops... It was not love... Kk & i gave u amt for yesterday's night okk... So go to hell... He leaves...

Anika breaks down. She cries her heart out. She came happily to Resort but leaving it as dead.

Om- Ishaana--

Ishaana tried to bring Riddhima 's truth infront of Om. But she cld not. It was Om & Riddhima's wedding day. Ishanna knew that riddhima is doing this marriage just for money. She went & tied Riddhima on a chair & herself sat with Om. She knew she was wrong but she does not want to riddhima to hurt Om. And some where she too fell in love with him. After completion of rituals all were shocked to see Ishaana as Om's wife. Om said that he cannot except this relation. But due to family pressure he agreed. Days passed. One night Om was drunk. He went to Ishaana.

Om- Toh tum khud ko merri patni kahti ho naa... Main batata hu Pati kya hota.

He hold Ishaana & kissed her on lips.

Ishaana- Om ... Chhodo mujhe... tum hoss mein nahi ho ...

But he did not stopped... He started kissing her on neck. Ishana melted & they conssumated there marriage.

In the morning when Om was back in senses he was shocked seeing what happened in night. He blamed Ishaana.

Om- Tum yehi chahti thhi na... Mill gaya tumhe... Ab yaad rakhna duniya ke saamne tum merri patni hogi lekin iss room mein merri koi bhi nahi... Main abb kabhi tumhe chu wo gaa bhi nahi...

He walks out.. Ishaana cries..

Rudra - Soumya---

Rudra & Soumya were shocked to find themselves married when they woke in morning. They were shocked. They tried to hide it from family. But family got to knew abt it. They got them married. Rudra started loving Soumya & they connsumated there marriage. Romi gotta know abt there marriage, she was jealous. One night she called them for party in her house. She called Rudra earlier saying she waana surprise Soumya. When Rudra went to her house she made him drink a medicine by which he lost his senses. She smriked & make him sleep beside her. Soumya arrived at Romi house as she called her to talk. Soumya found the gate opened & entered. She was shocked to see Romi & Rudra sleeping together. Till that time rudra also came to senses. He was shocked at his situation. He looked at soumya. Soumya lefta Romis flat & goes. Rudra runs behind her. They reach Oberoi mansion. Soumya runs to her rooom. Rudra to goes.

Rudra (with teary eyes)- Sumo... Woh...

Soumya (angrily)- Kya safai hai tumhaare paas Mr Rudra singh Oberoi... bollo naa...

Rudra- Sumo yeh... main nahi jaanta ki yeh...
Soumya- Kya nahi jaante Rudra... Haa .. She helds his collar... Kuy kiya tum ne aisa kuy... She cries...

Rudra- Sumo woh... main sirf tumse pyaar karta hu... main sach mucch nahi jaanta ki ...

Soumya- Bass Rudra bass... band karro yeh sab... Abb main tumhare saath nahi rahe sakti...

She was abt to go but faiths
. Rudra calls doctor. Doctor informs Oberois that Soumya is pregnant. All were delighted. Soumya looks at Rudra.
After all left, Rudra comes to Soumya & says..
Rudra- Sumo u dont know how happy i am.. he hugs her but she pushes him away...
He was shocked.

Soumya- Dont even try to touch me... Yes i will live with u, bcz i dont wanna my chil to grow without his/her father's love. But i will never accept / forgive u .. Never ever...

She was abt to go when Rudra pulls her.
Rudra- Fine if u think i am wrong... I will not explain now... Bcz i just love u... But u dont trust me... Okk i promise i will not touch u till u urself want it... i will wait.. even my whole life...

He leaves... Soumya Cries...

Precap -- 5 yrs leap...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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INDEX--
PROLOUGE-- PG--1😊
CH--1 ON pg--2😊
CH--2 ON pg--3😃
CH--3 ON PG-5😃
CH--4 ON PG-7😊
CH--5 ON PG-9😊
CH-6 ON PG-10😊
CH-7 ON PG--12😃
CH-8 ON PG-14😊
CH-9 ON PG--16😃

Edited by ck1234 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I loved it
I can totally imagine Shivaay doing this for revenge
And I can also understand Omkara's reaction as he does not know the truth and thinks he has been betrayed
And you Romi is a total psychopath and ruined a perfectly good relationship but I can understand Soumya's reaction after seeing them in bed together
So yup your storyline is amazing and I am eagerly waiting for first part
Please can we have an update today itself
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing..
Its really very interesting concept...
U know what i just wanted someone to write on a concept like this.. nd here is it..thank u soo much
Try to Cont as soon possible ,eager to read more
nd plz pm me...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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thanks...😊
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CH--1

After 5 yrs---

Scene starts with Oberoi Mansion--

A voice over says 5 saal, Logg kahte hai 5 saalo mein bahut kucch badalta hai, aur badla bhi. Aayie dekhte hai kaise zindagi hai inn loggo ki 5 saal baad.

A room is shown. Its Dadi's room. She is doing pooja. Two pairs of little legs walk towards her. One is of a boy & another of a girl. They both suddenly backhug Dadi.

Dadi open her eyes & smiles.

Dadi- Utth gaye merre shaitanno...

Boy- Haa... Badi Dadi...

Girl- Good Morning Badi Dadi.

Dadi- Good morning merre baccho... Ishan & Roumya did u both brush ur teeth.

Ishaan & Roumya -- Yes Baddi Dadi...

Just then a servent brought tea for dadi & milk for kids. Dadi takes it & give milk to kids.

Scene shifts to Rudra & Soumya ---

Rudra came after doing his gym excersises. He saw no one in his room. He took off his vests which was full of sweat. He started doing some work on his lappy. Just then the washroom door opens & Soumya came out after having bath. She did not noticed Rudra. As she brushed her hairs, water drops fall on Rudra's face. He looks up & finds Soumya. He gets mesmerized. He keeps on looking at her . Soumya felt his gaze on her.

Soumya- Rudra.. Tumhe toh adaat hogi roz alag alag larkiyo ke saath sone kii ... aur unn sabko bhi aise hii dekte hogey...hai na she taunted him...

Rudra was shocked ... No he was hurt by her taunt. He stood up & went towards his wadrobe to take clothes.

Soumya- Kuy koi jawab nahi hai...

Rudra was trying to control his anger. But he cld not. He went to Soumya & pinned her in wall.

He looked in Soumya's eyes.

Soumya- Rudra leave me... What are u doing?

Rudra- First look at me.

Soumya looked at him. She cld see tears, hurt & anger in his eyes.

She knew he loves her but she cant forget the scene which she saw at romi's house.

Soumya did not answered & tried to get out of his hold.

Rudra- Answer me Sumo... Haa... Do u really think that i can cheat you? Why are u punishing me from last 5 yrs... Why??? U are staying near me but i cant touch u , i cant love you, Why... Tell me damm.. He shouted on her...

Soumya has tears in her eyes.

Soumya- Rudra plz leave me... U are hurting me...

Rudra- And what abt me... Haa... What abt the pain i am bearing from last 5 yrs & that too without any mistake... Why cant u understand Sumo... Why??

He bursts out in tears. Soumya to feels his pain. She was abt to say something but Rudra leaves from there & goes to take bath.
Soumya removes her tears & goes from there...

Screen freezes...

Precap-- Ishaana-Omkara...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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I can actually imagine Rudra's face when he says all that
Good one
Thanks for the pm
Eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Okay Another twins kid story I liked it... continue 😊
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Nice one...loved it..
Cont soon..ll be waiting.
Nd thank u soo much. for d pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: MeetPremeer

I loved it

I can totally imagine Shivaay doing this for revenge
And I can also understand Omkara's reaction as he does not know the truth and thinks he has been betrayed
And you Romi is a total psychopath and ruined a perfectly good relationship but I can understand Soumya's reaction after seeing them in bed together
So yup your storyline is amazing and I am eagerly waiting for first part
Please can we have an update today itself

thanks... glad u liked it...

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