Shivika/Ishkara/Rumya FF (ch-9 on pg-16) - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
very interesting concept...
Loved the character sketch...
Prologue was brilliantly written...

Shiv did a huge sin...by breaking ani's heart n trust...i want him to pay n that too very badly...
Ishkara part was also amazing...poor ishu...but she suffered enough...at least now she should try to prove her inncence in front of om...
Rumya part was really good...rudy was innocent...but still our dumbell rudy had to suffer so much...

1st chappy was too good...rudra was so hurt...poor baby wanted his sumo back...but sumo can't forgive him as she thinks rudy betrayed her...
Awesome...loved their part...
&i'm already waiting for the next one...so,continue soon...
Edited by Aparikshita - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
love it
but make parts big
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Posted: 8 years ago
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CH--2
Scene starts with Soumya leaving her room. Rudra goes to take hot Shower. His sadness show how much he loves her & how he was hurt by her accusations.

Scene shifts to Dadi & kids---

Ishaan has almost finished his milk but Roumya was making faces at it. She was thinking how she can get away without drinking it. Dadi looks at her & says

Dadi- Roumya main jaanti hu tu kya sochh rahi hai... Bilcul apne Dad parr gayi hai, woh bhi bacchpan mein aise hii doodh dekh karr muh banata thha.

Soumya who was paasing by heard it & smiles. She enters the room.

Soumya - Kya ho raha hai yaha... haa (She said lovingly)

Roumya & Ishaan goes to her.

Roumya (with her chripy voice)- Good Morning Mumma...

Ishaan (With a cute smile)- Good Morning Chachi...

Soumya wishes both of them & kisses there forhead.

Soumya- So doodh pee liya aap donno ne...

Ishaan- Yes Chachi...

Soumya looks at Roumya who made a baby pout face.

Soumya- Aurr aap madam...

Roumya- Mamma.. i dont like milk...

Soumya- Okk then i will give this chocolate to Ishaan only...

Roumya- Mumma... She drinks milk in one go...

Soumya gives both of them a chocolate & goes from there.

Scene shifts to another room---

It was Omkara's room--

Ishaana came & look around. She sees Om making a painting.

Ishaana - Om...

Om (without turning to her)- Yes , Ishaana... say...

Ishaana- Om plzzz... Ek baar merri taraf dekho toh ... She said with tears...

Om- Plzzz Ishaana.. Maine tumhe pahele hii bol diyaa thha ki mujhe tum se koi lenna denna nahhi hai. Aur tum chahati kya ho, apne saare farz nibhaa raha hu na main.. Ishaan ke prati... He loved his son very much... Aur hamari jo deal hui thhi 5 saal pahele woh matt bhulna...

Ishaana goes in flashback---

It was few days after the night when Ishaana & Om conssumated. And after waking up Om blamed Ishaana & said that from nowonwards he will not touch her. And he never touched her. That day Ishaana was talking to Soumya when suddenly she fainted. Doctor was called & he informed family that she was pregnant. Ishaana was happy. She thought may be now her & Om relation wld change for better. But alas!!!!!! She was wrong. After everybody left Om came to Ishaana & said,

Om- Ishaana i am happy that i am going to be dad. Its my mistake of that night.

Ishana was shocked hearing him. She did not thought that Om will call that night which was pure love for her as mistake.

Om- But dont worry i will make sure that this kid will not be having any problem. I will fulfill all my responsibility towards him. I will love him more then anything... But u dont think that i will ever forgive u... Never...

He walks away...

Ishaana- Its ok Om... I am happy as u care abt our child...

Flashback ends..

Ishaana was in tears. She says,

Ishaana- I remember Om, i remember everything... In these 5 yrs i have not forgotten anything... But it hurts me Om... For how long will u punish me. Haa... Yes i married u in wrong way but i really loved u Om... And today too , i love u alot... U dont talk to me its okk, u dont touch me its kk... But dont hate me so much that u cant even look at me once... Plzz Om... Dont hate me so much... She runs away from there...

Om closes his eyes in pain. A tear roll down his cheeks.

Om- I am sorry ishaana ... But i cant forgive u... I know u love me alot... But the way u married & tried to show Riddhimma in bad light... i am hurt...

(Yes, Riddhimma 's truth is still not out, Om has relation with her but just as frnd... bUt tries to take as much advantage from Om's friendship on name of social work.)

Screen freezes on his face...

Precap--- Shivaaye...


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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Oh! Its very emotional.
So much misundetstanding.
Plz reunite them.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
Just read all the parts...
I love how there are kids in the story...
They r so tiny and cute😆
Honestly i dont want rudra ishana and anika to forgive their partners so easily...
It must have been hell to go through so much pain for 5 years...
Looking forward to how the story goes...
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
thanx for the pm dear.

such a nice part i loved it..

waiting for shivika story...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Amazing
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
aww everyone is living in constant pain
please make it alright
i am waiting for shivaay anika story
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Awesome as always...eagerly waiting for the next part...
Thnx for the PM...Continue Soon :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
How can Omkara be so naive?
I want to know what will happen when he comes to know so many truths.
Update was really nice. Please fast forward this story.

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