Chance Encounter ( PriVeer SS) Completed - Page 12

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-

Have been for this update with bated breath! Thank you! 😳

The last line cracked me up - Prinku counting pineapples. 🤣

I've become a PriVeer fan in a really short amount of time and the ACP has a lot of credit to take for it. 😆 I'm loving how you're taking this ahead. Randhawa's reaction to and assumptions about Prinku's state were quite harsh - but couldn't blame him because in his line of work, that is the truth and Peinku, an exception. Despite not wanting to get involved, he managed to let his considerate side gale over and help Prinku, but now that he needs to go after his original target, I'm eager to ser what happens of Prinku. Is the next update really going to be the last? 😲


Sarcy! 🤗
Updating soon and you were right.. i am horrible at judging how a story of mine might go and so this next update is NOT the last part. I have got the plot cleared up now and so in total, the story will have 6 parts OR 5 parts and an epilogue.

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AnShi_LoVe

Awesome update...Loved it to the core...

especially this one * Randhawa turned to the backseat where the woman now sat counting invisible pineapples on the floor of the car.*🤣🤣
Continue Soon :)


haha! Glad you liked that bit. It's fun to have Prinku behave in a way that is not her usual staid self.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: SRKian

yaar twer u r making me luv dis acp more nd more nt complaining dow😉

dat knight in shining armor nd damsel in distress th was 😆😆
nd wts wid her pineapples counting🤣 gosh dis O-siblings:obros 've th 4 cushions nd sis has th 4 pineapple🤣
tnq 4 da pm😛


Ani, tu bilkuli hi mat bol! You were supposed to write on the guy as well! Abhi tak OS nahi ayi!

ok, gussa over and yes, these Oberois and their pyaar bhari nasha sessions...😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: bworm

Fantastic. Can't wait for more.


Glad you liked it! 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

How did I miss this OS/SS? Ran into it today...and gotta say i'm loving it. This ACP is a character...young, committed to his job, and looking to make his way in the world, while doing good as well. He seems like a normal guy...good in some ways, and flawed in other ways. I love how you are building his character...a bit short tempered, committed to his job. And now, his interaction with Prianlka...and his prejudice agains rich kids...Can't wait to see all that he is in store for him!😉 Great start...looking forward to more!👏


This wasn't on ShivIka, so I didn't send out PMs since wasn't sure if people would like it or want to read it..
This is a very short story. Should have been an OS but kind of became slightly longer.
Am so happy to hear that you enjoyed it!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: reeeh

Counting pineapples... 🤣


Originally posted by: reeeh

ACP is getting distracted huh... he will left with imaginary pineapples... Pawar tho underground hi chala jayega...


We are trying to get the AT started. Mods have been contacted. Let's all hope that we'll soon have a place to discuss this guy!
And glad to know you liked that bit! 😉 The ACP seriously has no idea what he has gotten himself into!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: psychoruchi

This is so refreshing and amezing!
Loved it so much!
Pls update soon..


Thank you!! It's very encouraging to hear this!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: jarir2010

Nice update.
ACP is a tough guy .want to know what back he will take for this situation,when its clear priyanka didnt want to go.home in this cobdition.
Continue soon.
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Wait and watch! Update coming right up! 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
haha last line was funny
oh pryinku
she is too naive
and innocent
hope this randhawa got distracted
please do continue
bye sumi

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