Chance Encounter ( PriVeer SS) Completed

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SRKian

@SRKian

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#101

yaar twer u r making me luv dis acp more nd more nt complaining dow😉

dat knight in shining armor nd damsel in distress th was 😆😆

nd wts wid her pineapples counting🤣 gosh dis O-siblings:obros 've th 4 cushions nd sis has th 4 pineapple🤣

tnq 4 da pm😛

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bworm

@bworm

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#102

Fantastic. Can't wait for more.

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#103

How did I miss this OS/SS? Ran into it today...and gotta say i'm loving it. This ACP is a character...young, committed to his job, and looking to make his way in the world, while doing good as well. He seems like a normal guy...good in some ways, and flawed in other ways. I love how you are building his character...a bit short tempered, committed to his job. And now, his interaction with Prianlka...and his prejudice agains rich kids...Can't wait to see all that he is in store for him!😉 Great start...looking forward to more!👏

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reeeh

@reeeh

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#104

Counting pineapples... 🤣

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reeeh

@reeeh

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#105

ACP is getting distracted huh... he will left with imaginary pineapples... Pawar tho underground hi chala jayega...

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Manayasun

@Manayasun

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#106

This is so refreshing and amezing!
Loved it so much!
Pls update soon..

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jarir2010

@jarir2010

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#107

Nice update.
ACP is a tough guy .want to know what back he will take for this situation,when its clear priyanka didnt want to go.home in this cobdition.
Continue soon.
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Priya.

@Priya.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#108

Loved, loved , loved this update . Are you sure that the next one is going to be the last part? Can we please have a lil more of this guy?😳😆

I can so imagine his face when he finds her counting pineapples 🤣 What has this man gotten himself into .More adventures for these two before they finally land up at OM?😆

Waiting for the next part (im) patiently...sure it will be amazing.

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#109

The line about the pineapples cracked me up...you have an amazing sense of humor!

Waiting eagerly for the next! :)

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twerping

@twerping

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: smitar
I love pineapples. And apparently so does Prinku baby. LOL! Poor Randhawa. He will have to lose all his prejudices against rich brats soon. Phir kya karega bechara?

hehe! I was drinking pineapple juice as I wrote it. The silliest of things that make us put in these details in stories.

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