Ishqbaaz FF: Consequences. Chapter 15 on Page 39 (02/08/17) - Page 7

I read this days ago and the writing was phenomenal but I refused to comment because I wanted to ignore this story!!I really did.But today you posted another chapter and I just had to read it!

Fabulous Update I don't know what to type the father & Son convo beautifully written. oh I'm feeling so bad for my shivaay 😭 I wish he gets his happy ending but idk if it's possible or not At previous chappy I'm okay with Annikara but now I afaird I might gonna hate em Coz I love Shivaay that much
Hope everything gonna be fine. Have ever tell you You're an amazing Writer and I'm your huge Fan 😉 😉

Any way waiting for next chappy and Surprise me with your words

Such an interesting update. Inreally wish i could be someone who gushes at how wonderful an update is (because i personally love to read those kinds of comments) but i unfortunately am typically of few words.

Wow...

Nice update.
Though i enjoyed the conversation,but my question to shakti is why didnt he talk with him that time when he was doing tht mistake.usually parents did tht when they feel their children is doing a mistake.they warn ,they try their best to pretect them from any harm.
So why now shakti?
I dont know what is there for us in future.
Shivaay will go to london and visit annikara.
Though im angry with him,but i dont think he deserve this blow in his gut.in my pov its a betrayal of a person(brother)he loved most.

Ps- may be thats why i loved ur the details the most.sensible omkara.

wow! shakti and Shivaye talk was very interesting and I wish it would have happened soon. I didn't knew Shakti and Pinki have such a strong relationship, Shakti is smart and a chupa rustom.

God dammit!!!! Why must you make Shivaay Singh Oberoi suffer so?! I just read both chapters three and four in one go, and I have to start off with how happy I am that Prinku is getting her opinion voiced. You feel for your characters, and its shown in every single word, sentence, phrase, and chapter you write. You know exactly how these characters are feeling, and which direction you want to take them in, and that makes me so happy as a reader (subconsciously nudging the Ishqbaaz CVs and their absolutely wonderful {sarcasm intended} representation of Ishaana and IshKara). But coming back to your wonderfully gut-wrenching story, giving us some insight on Shakti was the best thing you could've done because like the angsty side of Rudra, the slightly one-tracked Saumya, the ever-quiet Priyanka, the loud Pinky, the drunk and depressed Jhanvi, and the ever-crass Tej, Shakti's character is very much left unexplored, giving you a lot of scope for development in his track. Also, I love that you addressed the fact that Jhanvi is evidently from an well-off household and Pinky is not, and that should've given Shivaay the lineage is not everything perspective, instead of vice-versa. Moving on the Priyanka, I'm going to assume that she isn't going to London to meet her brother, and the woman she wishes would become her bhabhi, but to meet the man that has been paying very close attention to her blog, and I'm very much excited to see more of a rebellious Prinku in the future. Last but not least, getting to the arc that you teased in the prologue, RumYa in a hotel, in London, and finally kind of, sort of accepting their feelings for one another, and acting on them in the most drunk fashion. It shall be interesting to see their dynamic slightly shift, as it often does, and to see how they act upon that.

This is fantastic...now I really want some "Talk" happen b/w shakti and Shivay...
Absolutely loved and Loved the update...though Shivay's misery is painful he deserves it..hope His dad's words work on him and he ends his facade of a relationship with Tia...I really hope you will have a bit of Anikara in next part.

~Maha~

LOVED IT