Rathore scene with jealous shivaay - description- complete

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Posted: 8 years ago
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I was just thinking how I wanted Rathore scene to turn out and I thought I'd write my thoughts. This is not an OS. Just wishful thinking

Location: Jail

2 am. One police officer sitting on a desk and another one is standing behind him yawning. Shivaay behind the bars and OmRu standing there

Police 1: You need to leave. This is a police station not a railway station that you stand here giving your brother company

Rudra and Om argue when there is some sound behind. Enters Anika

Anika: I can prove that he is innocent.

Rathore's voice: I'm handling the case and whatever your so called "proof" is. It will be I who will decide if this oberoy gets out of the jail

Shivaay shocked, looks at her from behind the bars. Remembers all the harsh words he said. He is shocked and yet hopeful. She walks near another table which is at the far end of the room. A person is sitting with his chair facing the wall. She cant see his face.

Anika: There is an bunglow opposite the building Gayatri was found dead and they have security cameras that face the far end of the road. The murder is said to have taken place between 1.pm to 2.pm. Oberoy mansion security cameras can prove that he was home during that time and the recording that I found is one shady person dressed in black entering the building during that time.

The police tales the recording and plays it on the laptop, Rathore doesn't turn around

Rathore: HOW CAN u be so sure it is not Shivaay? He could dress that way, tamper his security tape to show that he was home.

Anika: This guy seems to be very tall. The top of his head touches the electrical meter there. I was there and I measured the height. He must be 6'3". And SSO is -well- short."

Omkara and Rudra are snickering, but happy. Shivaay looks at her with pride. Anika turns around and looks at Shivaay. Shivika eyelock. Rathore stands up and looks at Anika

Rathore: (Angrily) I cannot understand whether you are extremely smart or incredibly stupid.

Anika turns and there is a pause. Then recognition

Anika: Ranveer?

Rudra Om Shivaay shocked

Rathore: Yes. Your Ranveer. I cannot believe you risked your life for this man who wouldn't care if you lived or died,

Shivaay (furious): Watch what you are saying rathore. How do you know Anika?.

Anika (ignorimg him): What are you doing here and you are not even surprised to see me.

Rathore; I saw a Miss Anika on his payrole and I thought of you. Your voice cleared the other lingering doubrs

Omkara: Y do you think she risked her life?

Rathore: Anika if he didn't kill Gayatri, the killer is there. He will know that you managed to save him once again. That will make you on his target .

Shivaay is considering this. Suddenly worried for Anika's safety

Anika: Ranveer I don't think"

Ranveer: That's the problem with you Anika. You never think. At least not with your head when it comes to someone you care about. And this SSO doesn't deserve your concern. You are far too innocent for people like him Anika

Shivaay connecting this with Prinku's incident- remembering that Anika's heart was at the right place when she let dev in the house.

Ranveer keeps his hand on Anika's shoulders

Shivaay suddenly angry. He catches the bars tightly. His fingers white. His face is murderous

Anika: He hasn't killed Gayatri. That is all I know

Ranveer: You are letting your emotions cloud your judgement

Anika: You are letting your prejudice cloud yours

Anika is holding his hands now- both with their hands around each other. OmRu looking with mouths open. Shivaay is beyond angry. He doesnt understnd his need to beat this guy to a pulp

Anika: Ranveer, your dad was falsely convicted because of a rich person. But that doesn't mean every rich person is wrong and every poor is innocent. History doesn't repeat itself every time. You know Shivaay is innocent. Let him go. I know being right and being just matters more to you than your prejudices."

Shivaay looking angrily at them. Rudra points that out to Om. Ranveer Anika eyelock . Shivaay walks and stands between them.


The lock up is opened and Shivaay is let out.

ShivOmRu Hug

Shivaay( looks at Anika) Anika---

Anika(cutting him off and looking at Ranveer) I've got to go. Its late and Sahil will be alone at home

Ranveer: What about buaji?

Anika: you know how she is

Police calls Ranveer for some formalities

Shivaay: Anika I'll drop you home

Anika: No thank you. I will manage

Shivaay: You have two options Anika. You walk in willingly in the car or I'll lift you up and take you against your will

Anika: If you think you can do that with Ranveer around you don't know him.

Shivaay holding Anika the way Ranveer held her

Shivaay: Ranveer doesn't have a right to interfere in my life. If he tries I'll..(lost for words) How do you know him?

Anika: We were friends as kids. He knows Prinku as well.

Shivaay: That didn't stop him from using his power on Prinkus brother unnecessarily

Ranveer (from behind): I know your sister but I don't care for a rich princess. Anika, I'll drop you home.

Shivaay: No need. I'll be dropping her home

Ranveer doesn't say anything. He holds Anika's hand

Shivaay stops them by putting his hand on Anika's wrist.

OmRu shocked

Shivaay: I'm not allowing her to leave with you

Anika: Shivaay singh oberoy, you have no rights over me.

Shivaay: And he does?

Anika: Yes

Shocked- followed by Anger. OmRu pull him behind. Ranveer and Anika leave

SCENE: POLICE STATION PARKING LOT

Ranveer and Anika get in an open jeep and leave

Shivaay gets in his car and follows them

Om: Why are you following them?

Shivaay: I don't trust him

Rudra: Bhaiyya is jealous. Villain ki entry in the love story. Like lady baba wasn't enough

Shivaay: Shut Up Rudra

Stops at a distance watching Ranveer drop Anika to the door. His hands are clenched in fists.

One they leave, he angrily starts the car and drives home at a fast speed with rudra muttering prayers in the background

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Posted: 8 years ago
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If this really happens...🥳
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if this really happens,i am so in.
i m loving this a lot.
continue sooonish.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update
I'm loving when you guys write a jealousy story which we're craving for so long

Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow nicee. i will love it if similar happens in show too .. though hona nahi h kyok acp prinku ke lie aaya h .. jealous Shivaay would be a treat to watch .. plj write next update as soon as possible thnku.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aaahh omg A jealous shivaay!... This is a treat for me 🥳
Continue continue continue 🤪
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Posted: 8 years ago
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badly in need of this..thank you so much for writting this..plz do write more..i m too thinking bout a new men n he is known to anika earlier n want jealous shivay thats wt i get here..
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amazing
can't wait for next part continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hayeee jealous shivu
Awesome 👏 please continue.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Excellent, i couldn't stop laughing

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