NEW DARK OMKARA OS- Invisible Scars - Page 3

I'm so sorry for the late read and comment, I saw the PM, but I had a bit of work to do, so I read this at the first chance I got. Now, coming to the story, this is so great! Omkara is always a wonderful character to explore and read about, so seeing this side of him, trying to get a perspective of why he once upon a time turned dark, is just phenomenal! I love how you explain his trauma wonderfully, and the fact that you made this version of him explore the ruthless side of the world as a child really makes the impact even more grand! You are a wonderful writer, and bring me some more Omkara stories, because I would love to read them!

Originally posted by: Briyanikidaig

Please cont.i m in..👍🏼

Will do😊

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

this one was awesome
u should continue it
poor om ...hope show main bhi will get his past..though now i least expected from cvs
loved it

Thank u so much dear...I am glad you liked it this much..Yes I too hope they show Om's past... I will try and update as soon as possible😃

Originally posted by: mistofshadows

I loved it.

There was a startling transition.

Starting with the scene between Jhanvi and Om and finally to Om being admitted.

A full cycle!

It was a brilliant representation of the past.

I am waiting for the next potential one. Always love the idea of a business tycoon opposite Om.

Niki

thank you for much dear for your support and appreciation means a lot.. I m glad u liked this one I hope I do justice to the plot I envisaged for Om and his half😳

Originally posted by: jassu7

I'm so sorry for the late read and comment, I saw the PM, but I had a bit of work to do, so I read this at the first chance I got. Now, coming to the story, this is so great! Omkara is always a wonderful character to explore and read about, so seeing this side of him, trying to get a perspective of why he once upon a time turned dark, is just phenomenal! I love how you explain his trauma wonderfully, and the fact that you made this version of him explore the ruthless side of the world as a child really makes the impact even more grand! You are a wonderful writer, and bring me some more Omkara stories, because I would love to read them!

Are baba it's okay...I know the feeling as I too am going very busy these days so thanking you for taking out time and writing such long comment..I m so glad u liked this one... Just Omkara and I m glad u connected with him here in this story n don't mention the pm yaar😊

Originally posted by: .Poorva.

Amazing

Thank u so much dear😃

Originally posted by: ishra-rocks

Nice one

Thank u so much dear😃