Two Parallel Lines_A ShivIka FF_Chapter 8 (18.11.16) Page 31 - Page 22

Originally posted by: ArhiIPKKND

Hmmm...revenge...this is not going to be good for om...but loved shivaay n mum scene...glad he didnt do anything in his drunken state ...awww loved to see him taking care of annika...just lovethem together...no offence...i am definitely a shivika shipper😳

Originally posted by: chaturchipkali

ohh my god so it's ishana's sis who has returned for revenge.. wonder what is gonna happen to om.
and the way om reacted,he has not really moved on i think.. anika is not comfi with om's touching well she don't love him romantically..
shivaay 's pain was so beautifully portayed..poor him ..love jhanvi for consoling n giving him strength..
wonderful update prietu ❤️👏

Bu ❤️ I'm missing ur and Ketu's chat fight 😉😛

Originally posted by: priyanvs

I just feel in love with your story dear

Loving it

I love you so much for falling in love with my baby ! Thanks a lot love ! ❤️ 😳

Originally posted by: Lesy

interesting and brilliant update. continue soon

Thanks Lesy 😳

Originally posted by: ehmmbhluvr

beautiful one...

Thank You 😳

Loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved the way shivaay took care of anika i have been in lala land today mostly today reading the spoiler and watching the segments and now ur update😳

Originally posted by: Kry_an

Can't wait for next update...

Sorry for keeping you wait sweetheart. The next one is on its way ! 😳

Originally posted by: ISensedYou

Loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved the way shivaay took care of anika i have been in lala land today mostly today reading the spoiler and watching the segments and now ur update😳

Ishanas sister???? So ishana is dead?😲

Are u pairing ishanas sister and om here?

Loved the mother and son bonding❤️

Update soon

My God, Kamala me to next update leke bhi pohuch gai, aur tum pichli wali pe comment 😆

Originally posted by: KrUtI97

amazing update...👏so this story is developing into a perfect love triangle...

i thought shivaay would do something wrong in the party but he behaved maturely...

the end part was so cute...

please PM me the future parts...

Will surely try to PM you 😳 Keep showering love to my baby with your comment always 😳

Originally posted by: ...Angels...

Now this is what I would call perfection👏 Within this chapter you portrayed Shivaay' s feelings; whilst, staying true to his character! Only a true writer can pull this off and you have dear👏 Your writing is so AMAZING that I can't find the words to describe it without repeating myself four or five times! The love story is forming beautifully! It doesn't feel forced at all! I feel like I am just standing with the characters and going through everything with them because of the deep connection you have created between the characters and the readers. I ADORED it!!!!

Thank you for always sending me a pm Preity🤗

Love Angel❤️

Your comments are always makes my day, night, evening, morning. I am so touched that I could make you feel so much with this story, really an achievement and if I can make you feel that you are actually with the characters watching them standing beside them then I really feel I have made it. a single Thank you is never enough to thank you. 🤗