Ishkara SS: Rewarding Sacrifice (Completed)

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Neet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: ErisedWitch45
(Doing a small happy dance :D)
Truly love your work, Neet.

The scenes, dialogues especially the emotions are so well portrayed. One can actually get in the head of your characters. Not to mention, I love how you venture in to grey areas/themes with your characters (Dangerous Liaisons of SwaRon is one of my fav FF's)

I wish you would write more - another part or two perhaps. Really want to know what happens next. A full fledged FF by you would be awesome! :)

I am so excited that you commented! I love your work so you know how much this means to me. And yes I will definitely try and write a part two to this, the response has been so great! And so glad you enjoyed Dangerous Liaisons, I hope I only improve from here onwards. :D

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Neet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: thefangirllife
Ah, this was amazing. So intense and I could see the scenes play out in front of me, great job, I hope to read more from you :)

Thank you! I am glad you could relate to it and image it happening. :D

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Neet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: --lavanya--
What an aweosome OS Neet !
Just loved it !! 😃

I'm so used to reading your stories , i just love them !
pls pls pls write more !

You r amazing !

Lavanya ❤️

Thank you so much for being such a loyal reader! I am so happy that you enjoyed this! :D

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Neet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: cuteariya
Awesome OS

Thank you :D

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ISensedYou

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

This was an awesome piece of writing.

Loved the way the emotions were protrayed. Would love to read more of your work😊

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Neet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: kamalapushpa
This was an awesome piece of writing.
Loved the way the emotions were protrayed. Would love to read more of your work😊

Thank you so much! Hopefully I'll write the next part very soon! :D

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Shreya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Neet!! Its so good to see you back, this time with Ishkara ^_^ !

Firstly, a very well thought concept ,considering the storyline of Ishana and Omkara. I am repeatedly saying this, but angst /dark themes is something what you master writing on!

I loved the helpless ,yet bold and unapologetic Ishana.Honestly, her circumstances were so cruel that had she been weak ,she would have died of guilt. Your writing brings out the darker shades of her character so well in terms of emotions ,at times I flinched. Aah, I feel so bad for her! :(

You potrayed Om's intensity perfectly here in the form of both hurt and anger. Watching Ishana resorting to such means for earning money must have been too heart breaking and shattering for him, he still loves her with all his heart and I can't imagine the pain he must have felt at that moment :(

Most of them have said it already, and I feel the same ,you have to continue this, specially after leaving it at the much needed but abrupt confrontation.

As always, amazing piece Neet! I am looking forward to an ff coming from you ,but for now would love to read the second chapter asap :)

Shreya <3

P.S. It's so good to read something from you after soo long ! 😃

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Muse1000

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

I rely rely enjoyed this os. please write the second part as soon as possible...kal se wait kar rahi hoon

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Neet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Spark.Shreya
Neet!! Its so good to see you back, this time with Ishkara ^_^ !
Firstly, a very well thought concept ,considering the storyline of Ishana and Omkara. I am repeatedly saying this, but angst /dark themes is something what you master writing on!

I loved the helpless ,yet bold and unapologetic Ishana.Honestly, her circumstances were so cruel that had she been weak ,she would have died of guilt. Your writing brings out the darker shades of her character so well in terms of emotions ,at times I flinched. Aah, I feel so bad for her! :(

You potrayed Om's intensity perfectly here in the form of both hurt and anger. Watching Ishana resorting to such means for earning money must have been too heart breaking and shattering for him, he still loves her with all his heart and I can't imagine the pain he must have felt at that moment :(

Most of them have said it already, and I feel the same ,you have to continue this, specially after leaving it at the much needed but abrupt confrontation.

As always, amazing piece Neet! I am looking forward to an ff coming from you ,but for now would love to read the second chapter asap :)

Shreya <3
P.S. It's so good to read something from you after soo long ! 😃

I am so glad to hear from you! You are one my oldest readers and such an encouraging one too, thank you fo such a beautiful comment and I only hope that you will continue to read my work. I am glad you liked the dark and angst shades in this story, and i hope the next part will be also to your liking. A huge Thank you Shreya! And I cannot wait to hear from you every time i write something, your support means so much.

Neet

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Neet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: Muse1000
I rely rely enjoyed this os. please write the second part as soon as possible...kal se wait kar rahi hoon

Aww! Thank you so much for enjoying this, and yes I will upload the next part but I do need a little time to sketch it out perfectly. I hope that's okay ?

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