Ishkara SS: Rewarding Sacrifice (Completed)

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Neet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: sneharay
Well written.. Thanks for pm 😊

Thankyou so much :D

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Neet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: arohiarsh16
woow...its sach a AWESOME ff...AMAZING...

Thank you :D I am glad you enjoyed it!

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Neet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: MahaSrilu
This is just AMAZING...
Hands down the best Ishkara ss I've read.

~Maha~

Thank you :D That's a huge compliment!

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Neet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: ishra-rocks
Awesome.. 👏
Loved it

Thank you so much guys :D

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ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 9 years ago

#125

Sorry for the delay, Neet. I took my own sweet time to read it and I am glad I did.

This piece is beautiful. I like how the characters in your story portray everything thought expressions and actions with so few words. Like in the 3rd part when Om sees his family. So much is happening yet so little is said.

You have Om and Ishana's character down to a T but I enjoyed the way you have etched the others characters as well - especially Jahnvi. Given what I have seen in the tv series, I can actually picture them behaving/talking that way. It's your story and at the same time, it resonates well with the canon.

Needless to say (and I know I'm being repetitive) you are a marvelous writer. Just by reading your words, I can get in the head of the characters. They way you depict inner turmoil is amazing.

I'll be waiting anxiously for more of your work. Thank you so much for this!

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Neet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: ErisedWitch45
Sorry for the delay, Neet. I took my own sweet time to read it and I am glad I did.

This piece is beautiful. I like how the characters in your story portray everything thought expressions and actions with so few words. Like in the 3rd part when Om sees his family. So much is happening yet so little is said.

You have Om and Ishana's character down to a T but I enjoyed the way you have etched the others characters as well - especially Jahnvi. Given what I have seen in the tv series, I can actually picture them behaving/talking that way. It's your story and at the same time, it resonates well with the canon.

Needless to say (and I know I'm being repetitive) you are a marvelous writer. Just by reading your words, I can get in the head of the characters. They way you depict inner turmoil is amazing.

I'll be waiting anxiously for more of your work. Thank you so much for this!

Thank you for such a beautiful comment. It gives me great joy that you loved this work so much. I very much hope to write something new for this ship, so hopefully, you will enjoy those works as well. Thank you so much again. :D

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Neet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: _Ms.Funnybee_
Beautiful story.

Thank you so much :D

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Flame.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#128

Don't know why I have taken so much time in finding and reading this. Totally impressed by your style of writing and love how you have penned down all the characters.

Who wouldn't want to be loved the way your Omkara loves his Ishana? And a family like the Oberoi family that never gives up on their lost son ❤️

Amazingly amazing! I would love it if you write more on Ishkara. You understand these two so well that I'am sure whatever you write will turn out beautiful 🤗

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Neet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: Aahana-
Don't know why I have taken so much time in finding and reading this. Totally impressed by your style of writing and love how you have penned down all the characters.

Who wouldn't want to be loved the way your Omkara loves his Ishana? And a family like the Oberoi family that never gives up on their lost son ❤️
Amazingly amazing! I would love it if you write more on Ishkara. You understand these two so well that I'am sure whatever you write will turn out beautiful 🤗

Thank you so much for such an incredible comment. When I was given this idea for this story I had a very different idea myself, but when I kept writing I found my rhythm with these characters. And I am glad you like the way Omkara has this soft and subtle touch when it comes to loving Ishana, I really wanted to emphasize that. I do hope you read my future works.

Neet