Ishqbaaz FF:Night of The Wedding-Part 13 (Pg 50) Updated Aug 7th - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
I wonder if you're the type of writer who has conversations with your characters in your head or whether you basically slip into their heads and then just start writing.
Because you don't write like an observer.

Each of your characters thus far: Anika, Rudra and Soumya have such distinct and individual voices. Not just their voice, but their reactions and their view of the world and the other characters are so well written, it feels as though you as the writer either are their voices or know them well enough to capture their essences in what you write. As a reader, I feel fully immersed in their world and in their minds.

And the way the three chapters slot together, with these two being a flashback. I wonder now if there was more to Rudra's "childlike demands" and Soumya offering Anika food in chapter 1.

SO HAPPY that you're inspired AF for this story and I seriously cannot wait for the next chapter.

As for Soumya's realisations about Tia, there are so many things it could be. I look forward to seeing how you reveal the overarching story, but I also look forward to these almost... character essays... you're writing with each chapter. Fascinating glimpses into the minds of each of the characters of the show.

Edited by fallingpieces - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
awesome story! very well written, each character so far have been portrayed beautifully, keeping in line with their onscreen personality/characters. I loved the Anika, Soumya-Rudra part, can't wait for the others..hopefully, we'll get to read about the elders too pov ;)
And can't wait to read about the hallah and dhoom that this trio - Om-Rudra-Soumy would machao to stop the wedding!

Impatiently waiting for the next part.

Cheers
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
I am literally jumping around, trying to break through Somya's mind to learn about her plan!!
Oh God, it feels like this all is happening in front of my eyes and I want to punch that stupid SSO in the guts and hug Annika and cry with her, and kiss Somya for finally doing something to stop that Karma-Universe-Shivaay baby's bride-to-be from sitting in that mandap!

This is truly just too good, too real. Loved it!!!

Update the next part sooon!

-Sanu❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
wonderfully emotive, passionate, angsty and beautifully written.Look forward eagerly to the next installments.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Very intresting, looking forward to the next bit. Nice to see the story from their perspective
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
And this was another terrific piece. Loved it how you brilliantly shouldered the tale and moved it forward through Soumya's pov. It clicked right in and created a sense of bubbling curiosity that I find hard to suppress.
Will be waiting for the next part.
Niki
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
loved the last chapter. Eagerly anticipate the next thrilling chapter. Love Shivaay and his intensity!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Omg I'm loving it
Do update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Absolutely brilliant!! Am so happy you decided to turn this into a series from that OS!
Loved Rudra and Soumya's interaction and also Soumya's transformation in Rudra's eyes!! That was a beautiful touch!

Can't wait to read about what this duo will do on the night of the wedding!
Do update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Beautiful all three parts ...man the pain of shivIka... I just love angst RU ...and in dat category u excelled man...

uhh I would suggest u edit d title including shivIka / OBbros... dat way they'll know about whom dis is about... just a suggestion

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