I wonder if you're the type of writer who has conversations with your characters in your head or whether you basically slip into their heads and then just start writing. Because you don't write like an observer.
Each of your characters thus far: Anika, Rudra and Soumya have such distinct and individual voices. Not just their voice, but their reactions and their view of the world and the other characters are so well written, it feels as though you as the writer either are their voices or know them well enough to capture their essences in what you write. As a reader, I feel fully immersed in their world and in their minds.
And the way the three chapters slot together, with these two being a flashback. I wonder now if there was more to Rudra's "childlike demands" and Soumya offering Anika food in chapter 1.
SO HAPPY that you're inspired AF for this story and I seriously cannot wait for the next chapter.
As for Soumya's realisations about Tia, there are so many things it could be. I look forward to seeing how you reveal the overarching story, but I also look forward to these almost... character essays... you're writing with each chapter. Fascinating glimpses into the minds of each of the characters of the show.
Edited by fallingpieces - 9 years ago