~*ShivIka OS/2S/3S - Jaane Yeh Kya Hua?!*~ Part 1 Updated!

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The precap! O my mata!! I am so excited about it, role reversal yippee!! So here is something something I wrote on the basis of precap. But before that I want to tell you all something;

#1 I am gonna try to complete this asap, after I am done writing this first part I am gonna start writing the next one so that at least some things are covered before tonight's episode.

#2 I have this story planned so in case if some or many scenes turn out to be similar to those in the episode please don't ask me to change them then.

#3 And yeah the title was "Kuch Toh Hua Hai" before but now you can see it's changedšŸ˜‰

#4 Enjoy!


Phhir Se Naam Liya..šŸ˜†

For the first time in so many years, Shivaay Singh Oberoi was lying on his bed still in his kurta pajama, totally lost in thoughts of someone. It was past 9 o'clock he was supposed to be ready at sharp 7:30 A.M. but the thoughts of a girl holding a sandal in one hand and a glass full of water in the other were mocking him bad. "How dare she do this to me?" he muttered to himself as he squeezed the cushion in his hands as if he was throttling someone.

"Shivaay tu ready...O MY MATA!" Omkara was so shocked to see Shivaay still lying on his bed that he used his Choti Maa's catchphrase. And what was more surprising was that Shivaay didn't even notice that Omkara was there. Fhat the Wuck was happening!

"Mujhse bina pooche woh aise kaise chutti le sakti hai?" Shivaay kept on mumbling oblivious to Omkara's presence and the shocked state his brother was in.

"O aap chillaye...BHAIYA!!" Rudra cried on seeing Shivaay murdering the poor cushion while he was still lying on his bed wearing his night clothes. Really it's been so many years that Shivaay had followed his routine even if he was sick but what the hell has happened today that made Shivaay break his own rules and routine. And wasn't today Rakshabandhan? The day when Shivaay prepares breakfast for their dearest sister Priyanka? And what in the world he was thinking about so deeply.

"O yeh bhaiya ko kya ho gaya hai? BHAIYA!!" Rudra cried and jumped on the bed hugging Shivaay tight. His death grip made Shivaay come out of his thoughts and notice that something weird was happening. Why was Rudra hugging him as if his life depended on it? And why was he crying, had something happened? And Omkara? Why was he standing there like a statue and staring at him as if he was the 8th wonder of the world.

"Yeh ho kya raha hai?" Shivaay asked trying to loosen Rudra's grip on him.

"Yeh toh humme poochna chahiye Shivaay, ki aakhir yeh ho kya raha hai?" Omkara went towards Shivaay and placed his hand on Shivaay's forehead, "What are you doing?" Shivaay asked.

"Teri tabiyat theek hai na Shivaay? 9 baj gaye aurr tu ab tak ready nahi hua? Shivaay Singh Oberoi ne khud hi apne set kiye hue rule ko break kiya?" Omkara replied.

"Haan woh...WHAT!?" It was then Shivaay realized what Omkara was saying "Fhat the wuck!" he cursed as he checked the wall clock, the alarm clock on the side table and then his wrist watch. The same wrist watch on which Anika's chaand had gotten stuck. Anika.

Along the name came the memories related to her. He remembered the day she had followed him around so that she could get her chaand back and he, he was thinking about different reasons for which she was following him and of-course he just wanted to avoid her, after that hug.

And then another memory. That was all her fault! What was she doing at Tia's place? And how he could he not recognize that it was not Tia but Anika! That girl was messing up with his senses and was a bad news for him. "Jabse yeh ladki meri zindagi mein aayi hai, toofan hi aa gaya hai jaise. Anika!"

Rudra and Omkara frowned as they stared at Shivaay who was looking at his wrist watch so intently and was mumbling incoherent words, but one thing sounded so clear, the name, Anika. "Phhir se naam liya." Omkara and Rudra sang making Shivaay snap out of his thoughts.

Rudra looked at Omkara and Omkara gave him the same look, "Rudra kuch samajh aaya ki Shivaay ko kya hua hai?" Omkara went around and rested his arm on Shivaay's shouler. Rudra did the same and said, "Shivaay bhaiya ko Anika-mania ho gaya hai." Rudra teased.

"Aayyeee.." Shivaay pushed both of them away and walked towards his closet taking out his clothes, "Ek din bhi aise nahi ho sakta kit um uss ladki ka naam na lo?"

"Shivaay humne kab uska naam liya. Kabse tu hi badbadaye jaa raha hai." Omkara grinned.

"Anika Anika Anika Anika Anika..." Rudra sang and danced irritating Shivaay. "Shut up!" Shivaay yelled.

"Sach mein Shivaay, tujhe hua kya hai? Anika tujhe itna kyun affect kar rahi hai? What happened to "Mujhe koi farq nahi padta!"?" Omkara placedhis hand on Shivaay's shoulder while Rudra continued singing Anika's name but now in a mute mode.

"Aisa kuch nahi hai. I am just not happy with her lack of professionalism. Mujhse bina pooche usne aaj ki chutti le li, she's not coming at work today. Agar uski zaroorat hui toh?" Shivaay kept on explaining that how unprofessional Anika was but Omkara just looked at him smiling wide. Something was happening, something that was affecting Shivaay so much and Omkara was happy about it.

Shivaay himself wasn't realizing that more than anybody it was him who was saying "Anika" again and again, mentioning her, talking about her mostly complaining. "Woh apna kaam complete kar k gayi hai Shivaay. Aurr aaj k din humme uski zaroorat nahi hogi. Haan lekin main tere baare mein nahi keh sakte, shayad sab se zyada zaroorat tujhe hai uski." Omkara said softly.

Shivaay glared at his brother, how could he think that he, Shivaay Singh Oberoi needed Anika in his life. Damn that girl! "Whatever." Shivaay shrugged and went inside the washroom leaving behind a grinning Omkara and a confused Rudra.

"O? Kya hua?" Rudra asked to which Omkara replied, "Jisske saath yeh ho raha hai usse khud hi abhi kuch samajh nahi aa raha toh main tujhe kya samjhaun?"

Rudra gave Omkara a perplexed look as Omkara continued grinning widely knowing very well that what was happening to Shivaay. He just wished for his brother's happiness, Shivaay deserved every bit of it. For now nothing else mattered.


Brilliant! That was the word that came into his mind as he took account of his surroundings. Oberoi mansion was decked up in gorgeous fairy lights, beautiful flower decorations, etc. The set up was so wonderful and beautiful looking that Shivaay stood there for a few minutes admiring the ambience. Anika had really done an amazing job he was totally impressed by her work. Everything was perfect and according to Oberoi's tastes and preferences.

Anika had taken care everything and it was so efficiently done that he was finding it hard to find something wrong in all that. It was like looking for a needle in a dark room. "What?!" Shivaay muttered, what kind of metaphors was he using lately.

"Koi galati nahi ki hai usne. Everything is perfect." Omkara whispered.

"Huh?!" Shivaay was surprised at the sudden nature of Omkara's remark. Can he read minds?

"Ismein hairaan hone waali baat nahi hai. Tujhe dekhkar koi bhi kehde ki tujhe uska intezaar hai." Omkara pointed out.

"Listen main Anika ka intezaar nahi kar raha, okay! So stop.."

"Maine toh Anika ka naam liya hi nahi.." Omkara said interrupting Shivaay. "main toh Prinku ki baat kar raha thha, tujhe bhi toh Prinku ka intezaar hoga na after all aaj rakshabandhan aurr Prinku k liye special breakfast bhi toh banaya hai tunne."

Omkara's reply caused Shivaay to fumble, "Woh..main..."

Omkara bit the inside of his cheek to stop himself from laughing out loud as he watched Shivaay looking here and there, avoiding making an eye contact. Sometimes he was just too predictable. Soon they were joined by Rudra who was talking to someone on his cell phone. The brothers stood there waiting for their sister to come.


Priyanka was rolling her dupatta round and around her fingers as she thought whether or not to implement Anika's plan. "Somya do you think ki humme yeh karna chahiye?"

Somya chewed the last bit of her favourite burger, "Don't worry, everything will be fine. Aurr kal raat ko tumne Anika di k plan k liye haan kar diya thha na, so ab tension kyun le rahi ho?"

"Agar kuch gadbad ho gayi thho? Agar bhaiya ko gussa aa gaya tho?" Priyanka panicked.

Somya pulled the dupaatta out of her hands and pinned it on Priyanka's shoulder, "Sab theek hoga Priyanka, and really this is the best thing you know. Socho kitna maza aaye ga."

Priyanka smiled despite the nervousness that she was feeling, "Sure?"

"Yup! Now come on tumhare bhai wait kar rahe honge tumhara." Somya hooked her arm with Priyanka and both of them walked outside the room.


"So Shivaay, iss baar kya special plan kiya hai tumne Priyanka k liye?" Jhanvi asked. The whole Oberoi family was waiting for Priyanka to come.

Shivaay smiled, "Choti Maa, that's a surprise. It's Prinku's day so she will get to know about it first."

"Lo aa gayi Priyanka." Shakti said gesturing towards the staircase rom where Priyanka descended looking nothing less than an angel. The brothers went up and forward their hands towards her. Priyanka held Shivaay and Omkara's hands in hers while Rudra took Somya's place. The Oberoi siblings smiled at each other as they stepped down rest of the stairs.

"Chal Prinku jaldi se rakhi bandh de bhook k mare sabhi animals football khel rahe hain." Everybody laughed at Rudra's statement except Somya who just rolled her eyes at Mr. Dumb Oberoi.

"Nahi woh actually...rakhi bandhne se pehle...I want you all do something." Priyanka said nervously in her usual soft tenor.

"Batao na beta what do you want us to do?" Tej asked.

Priyanka gestured Somya who then brought out a small glass bowl from the bag she was carrying, "We are gonna play a game to make this day more special."

"Game? O my mata! Tolds me." Pinky clapped in glee which others smiled at her childlike nature.

"In chits mein sabhi family members k naam hai. Aap sab ek ek chit uthayenge aurr usmein jiska naam likha hoga aapko aaj saara din ussi ki tarah rehna hoga. Dressing sense, baat karne ka tareeka, sab kuch chit mein jiska naam hoga uski tarah rehna padega." Priyanka described the rle reversal game as Somya passed the bowl over to everyone.

"Arre wah Prinku! Yeh toh bada accha idea hai." Dadi commented.

"Dadi yeh idea mera nahi Anika ka hai."

Shivaay was picking up his chit when he heard Priyanka. Anika! That girl again!God lord, this was her idea! She suggested this! His good mood changed and the happiness was replaced by extreme frustration. Since the day she had entered his life everything had changed, he hadn't lived a single moment of peace since then. "Damn you Anika!"

"Phhir se naam liya.." Omkara and Rudra whispered teasing Shivaay who didn't realize that he had spoken that last bit a little louder. Glad that no one else noticed, Shivaay opened his chit as everybody else did.

"O my mata!"

"O teri!"

"Fhat the wuck!"

"Is this for real?!"

"Oh God!"

Dadi, Priyanka and Somya laughed seeing the shocked faces of Pinky, Rudra, Shivaay, Omkara and Jhanvi while Tej and Shakti just smiled.

Precap : Role reversal, Shivaay searches for a reason to ask Anika to come at Oberoi mansion.


I really hope that you enjoyed reading this. Hit the like button if you like and please comment.

Thank you
Aafreen😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Index & My other works






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Part 1 : Phhir Se Naam Liya...šŸ˜† - Page 1

Part 2 : Anika Yeh Tunne Kya Kiya...😲 - Coming Soon


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Posted: 9 years ago
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res for part 2...I hope it ends at this šŸ¤” but who knowsšŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update dear omg shivaay thinking abt anika precap is interesting poor shivaay missing anika alot
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Posted: 9 years ago
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HahahašŸ˜† hilarious update just luvd it and billu singh oberoi u have just gone crazy 4 Anita
Eagerly waiting for part 2
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great start!!! Haha Shivaay to giyo šŸ˜†
What excuse is he gonna use to get Anika to Oberoi Mansion šŸ˜†
Continue soon 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh my godd!! Aafreen...u nust nailed it!!!šŸ‘šŸ‘
Loved it...
Couldnt control myself frm laughing...šŸ˜†
"Phir se naam liya!!".nd the way Om was teasing Shivaay just sooo amazing... according to Shivaay, Om reads mindsšŸ˜†. Har baar Anika ka naam sunte hi he goes crazyyy...🤪
Finding a reason to call Anika home😳.
Shivaay ka aaj kal koi bharosa nahi...šŸ˜†
Loved this update...šŸ‘
U r simply a brilliant writer...hats off to u girl!šŸ‘šŸ¼
Pls update ASAP...
Thanks for the pm..
Love Sharmi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Brilliant šŸ‘
So funny...omru too cute
Precap sounds interesting
Please update sooon šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lol...poor shivaay...cant wait for d next part!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome year...too good update...I couldn't stop myself from smiling... lovely waiting for next part...

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