Shivika SS : Turning Point ( ch 12 page 20) 24 sep - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update
Loved how Shivaay thought Anika marriage 😆
Wonder who the lady is Tia or Roop ??
Anika working with Shivaay...gonna be fun to watch
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful update
Damn dadi is not less
She makes plan and strikes it on Shivaay
Hahaha proposal for Anika
Shivaay shocked and thought it's a marriage proposal for her
Loved the way he reacted
But then Dadi sword it's job for her as she gets bored
So it was OM Rudra plan and made dadi also part of it
Haha nahi main shaadi kar raha hu Abhi aur nahi Anika aww Shivaay baby orders everyone around
Doesn't want Anika to get married to someone else can't even think about it
and Om Rudra making plans to make them confess
So Shivaay now offers her to take care of his office related work but aww Anika doesn't know how to use laptop
Haha at the end shiv was so cute him murmuring that how she calls him Shivaay in sleep but billu in front of all
He asks Anika to help him in his office work
But Anika says she doesn't know how to use lappy
and also shows some nakhra haha
OM and Rudra asking what would be her salary and aww Shivay love the way he says whatever she wants
Haha Rudra asking him why not offer it to him and Shivaay asking him to complete his studies first
Aww the conditions Anika outs to work with Shivaay is just super and funny
Loved it
So then he asks Bela to take off as he will be staying at home awww wants to take care of his jaan
then love how OM offers to shows her his art studio and how Shivaay also gets ready scolding Rudra when he offers to help her that he can't handle her as he almost dropped her the other day
They care concern he is showing for her is just aiming to watch for
Brilliantly u have showed he is becoming possessive for her as well btw
and awww the way he carried her in his arms but then when he puts her down and about to go away awww love how Anika with the HAQ stops him and asks to join them
Humm so mystery starts
wonder who wants to kill Anika now
I guess it's gayatri or bua of Shivaay wants to kiss her as she came in between to save Shivaay
and now targeting Ishana
Wonder if she will fall that low to get money and try to kill her
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
we completely understand...update as an when you find time...In Sha Allah your mum will b fine...soon...She is blessed to have a caring daughter like you :-)

Update was awesome especially OmRu Dadi...while tackling Shivay...;-)

Waiting for the twist...who wants to kill anika...i am guessing it must be Tia...but you never know ;-)

Takecare of yourself n your mum
:-)
Edited by wafa.M - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Angel13

Wonderful update
Damn dadi is not less
She makes plan and strikes it on Shivaay
Hahaha proposal for Anika
Shivaay shocked and thought it's a marriage proposal for her
Loved the way he reacted
But then Dadi sword it's job for her as she gets bored
So it was OM Rudra plan and made dadi also part of it
Haha nahi main shaadi kar raha hu Abhi aur nahi Anika aww Shivaay baby orders everyone around
Doesn't want Anika to get married to someone else can't even think about it
and Om Rudra making plans to make them confess
So Shivaay now offers her to take care of his office related work but aww Anika doesn't know how to use laptop
Haha at the end shiv was so cute him murmuring that how she calls him Shivaay in sleep but billu in front of all
He asks Anika to help him in his office work
But Anika says she doesn't know how to use lappy
and also shows some nakhra haha
OM and Rudra asking what would be her salary and aww Shivay love the way he says whatever she wants
Haha Rudra asking him why not offer it to him and Shivaay asking him to complete his studies first
Aww the conditions Anika outs to work with Shivaay is just super and funny
Loved it
So then he asks Bela to take off as he will be staying at home awww wants to take care of his jaan
then love how OM offers to shows her his art studio and how Shivaay also gets ready scolding Rudra when he offers to help her that he can't handle her as he almost dropped her the other day
They care concern he is showing for her is just aiming to watch for
Brilliantly u have showed he is becoming possessive for her as well btw
and awww the way he carried her in his arms but then when he puts her down and about to go away awww love how Anika with the HAQ stops him and asks to join them
Humm so mystery starts
wonder who wants to kill Anika now
I guess it's gayatri or bua of Shivaay wants to kiss her as she came in between to save Shivaay
and now targeting Ishana
Wonder if she will fall that low to get money and try to kill her
Continue soon

thanks for your comments
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Posted: 9 years ago
Dear, this was a marvellous update!
Om, Rudra, Priyanka and Dadi are ShivIka shippers as well😉
The part where they said that Anika has got a job, with someone else as one of my favourites because of Shivaay's reaction😆- he gets so jealous if anyone else even goes near his Anika😳
Anika's conditions are exactly what I would want when I start to work😆
OmRu are just so cute asking her about the salary and why she hid Shivaay's phone😳
Haye my billu ji picked up Anika himself because Rudra almost dropped her the other day❤️ And he was going to stay at home as well
Om is such a lovely person, wanting to show Anika his art studio👍🏼
Now a twist has come in to the tale...Who wants to kill Anika? Will Ishana agree? All these questions are in my had and I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Don't worry dear, I can understand. My grandma had brain haemorrhage and needed a lot of attention as well🤗
Update when you have time😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update please do continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb story, u write amazingly. Please continue, hoe your mother recovers soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey it's quite time ... Since u last updated I am waiting it was going good please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi readers sorry for delay , i told you guys my mom is sick , when ever i get time i types ,last week i had tough time with her so i could not update , hope you all understand
here comes the update , do comment as it push me to write


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"Ankia do SSO se bolo na radio on kara " Sahil said loudly , Rudra at once pull out his arm to on the radio ,Shivaay placed his hand on the radio ,

"stop it " he said and look at Anika in rare view mirror their eyes met , she started looking out of the window to avoid his continues gaze on her face

" i can use my cell " he switched on the radio on his cell " angel love ka show aa raha ho ga " he became excited

Somya voice echo in car " aaj ka hamara topic hai what is the signs that you are in love ?" Rudra whistle " wow at right time i switch on the radio " he said in excitement

Tu safar mera

Hai tu hi meri manzil

Tere bina guzara

Ae dil hai mushkil

" what rubbish you listen Rudra ?" Shivaay said angrily

" bhai aap ko kabhi pyar nahi huwa na iss liya yeh topic aap ka liya rubbish " he said

" when suddenly you have fear of losing that someone ?" Somya said , unintentionally Shivaay and Anika look at each other

Mujhe aazmaati hai teri kami

Meri har kami ko hai tu laazmi

Junoon hai mera

Banoon main tere qaabil

Tere bina guzaara

Ae Dil Hai Mushkil
" please Rudra band karo mera sar mein daard ho raha hai " Anika acted

"Anika Di aap kab se bhai kai tarah ho gai hain " Rudra said

"nahi huwi mein Shivaay kai tarah " she said irritatingly

Yeh rooh bhi meri

Yeh jism bhi mera

Utna mera nahi

Jitna hua tera

" aaahhha Di aap na bhai ka naam liya " Rudra said and placed his hand on his mouth

Everyone look at her " hain liya tu kya huwa " she said angrily

" Anika di aap bikul bhai kai tarah baat baat per ghusa karna lagai hain " Rudra said

" second change in your behavior , when you start acting like the person " Somya said , Anika grab Rudra cell and switched it off

"Anika Di band kyun kiya " Rudra said helplessly as she passed his cell to Shivaay

" love is all rubbish , kuch nahi hota "Anika said

" Rudra stop irritating her " Shivaay said angrily

" i was only listening show aap dono tou katna laga muhje ko " he said angrily


Shivaay parked the car in the parking area of studio " Om ka studio dekhna hai ?" he asked everyone , they all quickly step down , this time Anika avoided him and took Priyanka's help ,After roaming around for few minutes she became lethargy she asked Priyanka to let her sit for a while, She was sitting alone in room , when she saw Shivaay walking in , he was on phone but his gaze was on her , to avoid his presence she picked up clay and placed it on the wheel " mein bhi Kuch banati hoon"

She tried to move her bandage hands over clay " Kuch nahi ho sakta , na mein without help walk kar sakti hoon na Kuch aur " she became irritated and murmur


He walked and sat next to her " kya Kar raha hain aap yahan " she asked him


" I will call you later " he cut the call and roll his sleeves


Placed new clay dough on the wheel


Much ko Kuch nahi banana


She said irritate when he grab her hands in his


He without looking at her focus on the wheel and their hands which were covered with clay and moving up and down


He moved closed dip their hands in bowl of water

she felt his breath next to her face, he was sitting next to her his arm was warp around her , placed his hands on her's " please aap jai na" she said as his breath kissed her cheek and gave her goosebumps ,she look at their hands which were covered with clay

" dekha aap jai , abhi Rudra aa jai ga aur ajeeb ajeeb questions start karda ga " she whispered feeling him next to her

" why you are afraid of his questions? jab hamara darmiyaan kuch nahi hai , we are not in love" he said and stare at her and smirks ,his beard caress her face , she moved her face aside " aap ki daarhi " he smiled at her "Kya " he intentionally moved closed to her , she quickly moved away

" aap ko ho kya gaya hain kuch dino se " she whispered he with eyes ask her to look at their hands

" Shivaay yeh tou ase bangaya " she said in excitement ,their hands were moving up and down together ,Om stand still stunned looking at them , he could not belive his eyes

At Ishaana place

Ishaana walked in her home and locked the door

What happened why are you sweating? Her dad asked her

She ran and hug him tight " huwa Kya hai

He caress her back and asked her

" that lady asked me to kill Anika " she murmur and hug him tightly again

" who ? " he himself panic and asked her

Dad we are thieves but we can't murder anyone she made baby face and asked him

What you are saying muhje ko kuch samajhe nahi aa raha hai " he asked her and made her sit ,.in detail Ishaana told him everything

While thinking "it is not must you murder her " his eyes shines and he smirks, he pull her close to him and whispered in her ear , she in shock look at him " aik teer se do shikar " he winked at her

" i do the robbery and the blame goes on Anika " she blinked her eyes and said

" Oberoi's will sure kick her out of their home " he smiled " Anika's chapter will be closed for ever " he said and raised his hand for a high five


At Studio

Om ran out to call Rudra, he was playing with Priyanka and Sahil "Rudra come with me , you will not believe what i have just seen " he pull him along with him

" bhai you are leaving in middle of game , i and Sahil won the match " Priyanka said

"no no we will continue from here " Rudra shouted

" no bhai you walked away , this is cheating " she said " now you will give us treat " she said and smiled at Sahil

" Kya huwa hai Om " Rudra asked him

" Shivaay and Anika Di are making a pottery " Om said in excitement

" i dont believe you " he said " i was winning now because of you i lost the game " he said making angry face


In room few minutes back

Both look at the vase and at their hands which were entwined " see together we made it " he whispered in her ears , his lips brush her earlobe , she felt an current run in her body , she tried to free herself but he this time pull her back while warping his arm around her waist "stop taking tensions and don't be depressed , your illness is for time being you will be completely fine " he said huskily , she narrowed her eyes and look at him find his intense gaze on her face " i can't bear your helplessness , mujhe ko kuch hota hai, do you get that ? i am always there to help you" she became confused and quickly lower her eyelids and rested her head next to his shoulder for a minute or so they sat like that" dont change yourself Anika i love the way you are " he huskily whispered , she opened her eyes and look at him in shock " aap na kya bola " she asked him , he pecked on her cheek " kuch nahi " he left her shocked , he moved close to her she pushed him aside to stop him , he lost his balance and his hand accidentally touch the wet vase , it with in second break into pieces

" yeh kya kiya aap na , toor diya " she look at the pieces of broken vase

" mein na tora ? you pushed me " he said as he find her trying to fix it

" hain aap na tora , aap se kabhi koi kam thek se nahi ho sakta hai " she picked up the broken pieces in hands

" you pushed me " he again said

" tou mein aur kiya karti , aap " she paused as find his glance on her , his eyes darken with desire , he tried to take clay from her hands " please nahi aap muhje ko chor da " she hesitantly pull her hands away


Om and Rudra look at each other

" yeh dekhna ka liya you pull me to here " he asked him

" trust me they were making together" he said and look at them who were fighting

" Anika di and Bhai can never become friends Om " Rudra said as saw them throwing clay at each other " they can't find water here so throwing clay" Rudra said

Om quickly walked in room " please stop it guys , abhi tou paint huwa hai " he stand between Shivaay and Anika

" Om your brother started it " she said angrily and picked up clay in her hands

" stop telling lies Anika " he moved Om and held her both wrists ," now tell who started " he frown and asked her Anika in anger cupped his face

"ab maza aai ga aap ko Mr Shivaay Singh Oberoi " she irriatedly said ,He warps his arms around her waist and pull her to him , she bangs next to his chest" ab mein batoon " he husky asked her " agar zara se bhi lagaya na tou mein abhi sub ko bata doon gai aap na kya kiya hai " she threatens him "really Anika " he smirk and brush his cheek next to her's

" go ahead tell them what i did ?" he smirks again at her ,his eyes shines at her ,she couldn't see in his eyes , she at once look away and wipes her face with his shoulder , both didn't notice anyone around them



OM , Rudra ,Priyanka and Sahil stand still with their mouth open " aap na tou bola tha studio ko clean rekhna hain Anika Di and Sso na tou sab dirty kardiya " Sahil pull Om hand's and said

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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome. ..
loved it..
cont soon..and if you can so do pm me...praying your mom get well soon...
take care of her

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