ShivIka OS-Just like that(AN on pg4)

lourel24

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Brilliant. Keep writing more and more.

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chorabali

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Woww this is amazing yaar ! you writeso beautifully!! plz do write more!!!!
and wht is ur name? Shaz here 😃

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SRKian

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Felicity1234
it was lovely, i especially loved that it was from the point of view of Shivaay completely😳
sorry was unable to help you earlier in the AT, but i'm happy finally you got it😉

hey khushi😊np man i got it so chillax😛

gald that u liked it😃ah well m a shiv luver😉😳 so my mind only works from his point of view😆😆

n sry couldn't comnt earlier u knw hw being a newbie sucks

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SRKian

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: SanyaEterna
That was so sweet and beautiful!
Two things I liked in particular-

1. Shivaay learning latest romantic tracks for Anika😳

2. Not preparing food for himself deliberately because he knew she hadn't eaten either❤️

i can totally shiv being extra romantic once he falls for Anika😳

i so desperately want to see a dance sequence betn them

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SRKian

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

Oh yess how can I forget KVB?? He'll definitely look great as SVR, so will Gurmeet, as I've already suggested days back lol in a post. QH ke sab log yahin a jaye😆

i just luved GC and KV as Maan n Aahil respectively😳😳

i don't mind to see them all bt just wish none of the character should have fate as like Aahil😭😭

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SRKian

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Posted: 9 years ago

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