Flares of jealousy. Anshi/ Shivika OS (AN on page 6)

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Asad08
Waah kya likha hai!!!! Loved it
Thanks for the pm

Thanks a lot and welcome 😊

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soumya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: pickachu
Mindblowing <3
Loved it

Thanks a lot😊

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: OlicityQueen
this is so awesome loved it

Thank you so much😊

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ISensedYou

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

👏brilliant one

OmRu were at their best in teasing Shivaay

Anika bechari she doesnt know what she has evoked inside Shivaay now😆

When i read that its shivaay who is going to be jealous i expected him to kiss anika out of his frustration☺️

Its ok...can we get anika getting jealous and then both of them giving chumma please please please...🤗

Loved this one too much❤️

Can we get a part two?😆

Edited by kamalapushpa - 9 years ago

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Nimm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Considering you wrote this in an hour, I'm baffled at how much you managed to cover!

It's a brilliant idea and love the fact that where there's Shivaay and Anika, there's normally tweedledee and tweedledum not far behind!

I'm really impressed.

Hope to read more of your stuff soon.

Nimm :)

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: kamalapushpa
👏brilliant one
OmRu were at their best in teasing Shivaay
Anika bechari she doesnt know what she has evoked inside Shivaay now😆
When i read that its shivaay who is going to be jealous i expected him to kiss anika out of his frustration☺️
Its ok...can we get anika getting jealous and then both of them giving chumma please please please...🤗
Loved this one too much❤️
Can we get a part two?😆

Omg...thanks a lot.

Haha...kissing and all is fine but i don't know...i don't think kissing someone out of jealousy is right i mean it doesn't appeal to me.

I'll however try to fulfill your wish and write a Anika jealousy piece.

When i do write it I'll pm you 😊

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Snoopysez
Considering you wrote this in an hour, I'm baffled at how much you managed to cover!
It's a brilliant idea and love the fact that where there's Shivaay and Anika, there's normally tweedledee and tweedledum not far behind!
I'm really impressed.

Hope to read more of your stuff soon.

Nimm :)
xx

Thanks a lot Nimm.

I have a series going on. If you are interested you can check my index for it.

Thanks a lot again😊

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Niki

@luvzindagi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Hey Soumya

I just logged in and found you have written another OS and I just couldn't help read it as soon as I saw it... Sorry I can't comment too long now

But I have just one thing to say, two things actually

It was AMAZING

and I LOVED IT 😳

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: luvzindagi
Hey Soumya
I just logged in and found you have written another OS and I just couldn't help read it as soon as I saw it... Sorry I can't comment too long now
But I have just one thing to say, two things actually
It was AMAZING
and I LOVED IT 😳

Thanks a lot dear..

No problem...haha...your short comment is also filled with emotion and love😊