Flares of jealousy. Anshi/ Shivika OS (AN on page 6)

Kriti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

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Finally UnRes

Ohh my god

Shivaay 😆 , he's burning with Jealousy 🤣

It was soo Fun to Read that 😃

And Rudra n Omie are like , "Shivaay toh gaya , abb kaun bachaega usse Jealousy ke bimaari se"😆😆😆

The best Line said by Shivaay ," Jo cheez meri hai, vo mere pass aa jaati hai" 😉 hhehehe par Annika won't listen so easily 😆

Great one , Enjoyed Reading it.

Love Kriti:)

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soumya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Omg...i just came here since i had a five minute break and i see so many comments.

Man i love you all🤗

I didn't get time yet to read all the comments but i promise that as soon as i get free time I'll read and reply to each and every comment.

Thanks a lot again to all of you

Love you

Soumya.❤️

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soumya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: _Angel_love_
Lovely
OmRu r just awesome 😃😳
Jealous Shivaay 😆
Very well written 👏

Thanks a lot dear😃

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soumya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: cuteariya
Wow it was a treat to read jealousy shivay
Anika Bhi kam nahi she know how to answer
Awe omkara & rudra know what their brother feel for Anika
Poor Anika was so confused with sudden shivay possessiveness for her

Thanks a lot😊

Omru toh hai hi cute😳

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soumya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: VidyutKiDeewani
excellent and loved the ending specially.

Thank you so much😊

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soumya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna
Finally, finally kisi ko toh yaad aayi mere SVR ki! That was so good and much more. Kash show main bhi aisa ho jaye toh balle balle!!

Do you SVR? I mean abhi toh uski entry bhi nahi hui aur pehle hi booked😆

Haha...call me wierd but I don't want a jealousy track for Shivika in the show😆

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soumya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: iiROSii
Brilliant job
It was wonderful to read the role reversal...for once Shivaay could feel the pain that he makes Anika go through every time he accused her

I am really in love with ur writings...

Thanks a lot.

I think all my stories its anika who keeps blaming him😆

Omg...thanks...i am glad you love it.

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soumya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: omertaxborgata
this is too good i loved it

Thanks😊

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soumya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: dimpled.smile
Woww my fav writer is back with another wonderful story!!!!!! how can i not read and love it???
as usual its absolutely beautiful ... amazing yaar

Omg...thanks a lot...hahaha...😃

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soumya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-
Fantastic, as always, Soumya!
You have very smartly written a jealousy piece on AnShi without actually changing the dynamics in their relationship. The conversation at the end and Shivaay's final retort was just PERFECT!

Thanks a lot...

Yes yes that was the point. The dynamics between them were not supposed to change.

Haha my shivay is a killer no?😉

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