Drunken shots. Anshi Ishkara Rumya OSs (Anshi/Shivika uploaded) - Page 17

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Angels...

I have just read all three again and...I love them!

All three were beautiful in their own way!You are a gifted writer!
I can't wait to read your next OS.
Thanks for the pm🤗

Thanks a lot angel.
Welcome too.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sunshinesamuef

Nice. This OS series was fantastic. Please do write more. You are awesome.

Thank you...i shall write as soon as I get new ideas.
Thanks a lot again 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kamalapushpa

Loved Anshis os❤️😃

I loved the scene where shivaay is standing with his head turned up in the rain and anika stands in front of him close😳

Thanks a lot...
Haha...yeah I could write that because he was drunk😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: summerchild

The AnShi OS was brilliantly written! Supreme job!

Thanks a lot😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjum.

Sigh! Romance in the rain? What more could a girl ask for!

I love how both are hesitant, questioning, unsure of how they themselves feel and how their partner feels about them. It's perfect for your series. I don't expect them to say I Love You just yet! Great progression of the story!
And thanks for the PM as usual 🤗

Lol...thanks a lot honey. Yes... Anika's insecurity was needed here.
Your welcome 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: NYCForever

i loved shivika OS, can you please continue that 😉

Thanks a lot
Its continuation is the way I love you.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Bunny_Bear

Hello dear.

Evn though this is not much about a drunken Shivaay, it still had passion sweetie, bcoz for me the pool scene is the best scene till date. It oozed intensity and passion. Loved it. You are an awesome writer and I hope you keep writing such wonderful OSs to keep up the GM alive.
"GM" Yahaan good mood Hain. After all we all are really inncoent.

Fab sweetie.

Bunny...thanks yaar
I know. Even i love the pool scene.
Your GM made me really think of Gutter mind😆
So innocent 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

It was ahmazingg! I want to see Anika's importance in Shivaay's life just like this! But u can't end it here! Plz continue! I know it's supposed to be an OS but still?

Thanks.
Yes...it's continued in my next OS the way I love you.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Felicity1234

All stories were just awesome... You managed to portray each relationships n their flaws n love with brilliance!👏

Thanks a lot...😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: twerping

Wow! That third story was super intense! I loved the fact that you imagined the two in such a different stage of their relationship and yet showed that they still have so much ground left to cover till they can 'become one'. Protective Shivay was brilliant! And I loved the fact that he drinks to steel himself before facing Anika's wrath over the tender.

Also, I love the way in which Anika shows that she now cares so much about Shivay and his reputation.. A ride on Champa with a drunk Shivay, however romantic it may sound would not be sensible and so she doesn't go down that path. I loved her insecurity mixed in with that courage and passion. It was brilliant and the only disappointment is that the series ended with this one. I hope you do others like this..with a common theme.

Thanks a lot dear... haha... like I said no one gets my stories like you do. love you🤗

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