Drunken shots. Anshi Ishkara Rumya OSs (Anshi/Shivika uploaded)

soumya

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: muskaan2298
You are amazing, amaing and just amazing.each shot was so perfect and beautifully written. I loved it SOOO much and you did justice to all three pairs. All the shorts were just amazing and wonderful and I loved reading them! Seriously great work! Can't wait to see more from you :)

Hahaha...thank you so much dear...

I shall keep writing thanks

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soumya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: OlicityQueen
anshi part is awesome

Thank you 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Cookieg
Wow..lovely update
You write sooo well...love it
I loved the way you portrayed Anshi...together but still a long way to go
Waiting for your new story 😉

Thanks a lot 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: -Sarcy-
I'm not much of an IshKara fan, but I loved the way you wrote their piece. I don't know much about Ishana because she's still oscillating in terms of her character in the show, but you kept Omkara intact. I especially loved the dialogue at the end where he said that though he was someone who played with colours, she was the one who thought him the difference between black and grey. :)

Thanks a lot... yeah I don't understand is ishana's character but I do love Om so i focused more on him.

And that quote...haha...i just wrote it randomly but now that i read it it really does sound good

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-
As to AnShi - I love anything that you dish out on them. I'm in love with your AnShi series that you're currently writing. 😉

Despite the theme being passion, it was very well balanced. Nothing overtly dramatic that would mess up their characters. Though I expected some drunken confessions from Anika here but instead Shivaay turned out to be drunk and also aware of it. 😆 It was a treat to see a protective Shivaay. And that little rain scene at the end was beautiful. So unlike Shivaay to be enjoying the simple pleasures of life like that but I guess it can be attributed to his drunkenness at the moment. So now that both have realised that they love each other, I can't wait to read the next installment in the series to see where this goes.

Haha...I think it is more of it is more if anshi magic that is working.

Haha...I didn't want the girl to always be drunk. And Shivay being Shivay knows everything 😆

Btw...thanks a lot.😃