Drunken shots. Anshi Ishkara Rumya OSs (Anshi/Shivika uploaded)

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PenguinBaby

@PenguinBaby

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Posted: 9 years ago

#151

It was ahmazingg! I want to see Anika's importance in Shivaay's life just like this! But u can't end it here! Plz continue! I know it's supposed to be an OS but still?

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Felicity_Khushi

@Felicity_Khushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#152

All stories were just awesome... You managed to portray each relationships n their flaws n love with brilliance!👏

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twerping

@twerping

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Posted: 9 years ago

#153

Wow! That third story was super intense! I loved the fact that you imagined the two in such a different stage of their relationship and yet showed that they still have so much ground left to cover till they can 'become one'. Protective Shivay was brilliant! And I loved the fact that he drinks to steel himself before facing Anika's wrath over the tender.

Also, I love the way in which Anika shows that she now cares so much about Shivay and his reputation.. A ride on Champa with a drunk Shivay, however romantic it may sound would not be sensible and so she doesn't go down that path. I loved her insecurity mixed in with that courage and passion. It was brilliant and the only disappointment is that the series ended with this one. I hope you do others like this..with a common theme.

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Muskaan

@muskaan2298

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Posted: 9 years ago

#154

You are amazing, amaing and just amazing.each shot was so perfect and beautifully written. I loved it SOOO much and you did justice to all three pairs. All the shorts were just amazing and wonderful and I loved reading them! Seriously great work! Can't wait to see more from you :)

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Cookieg

@Cookieg

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Posted: 9 years ago

#155

Wow..lovely update
You write sooo well...love it
I loved the way you portrayed Anshi...together but still a long way to go
Waiting for your new story 😉

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Sarcy

@Sarcy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#156

I'm not much of an IshKara fan, but I loved the way you wrote their piece. I don't know much about Ishana because she's still oscillating in terms of her character in the show, but you kept Omkara intact. I especially loved the dialogue at the end where he said that though he was someone who played with colours, she was the one who thought him the difference between black and grey. :)

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Sarcy

@Sarcy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#157

As to AnShi - I love anything that you dish out on them. I'm in love with your AnShi series that you're currently writing. 😉

Despite the theme being passion, it was very well balanced. Nothing overtly dramatic that would mess up their characters. Though I expected some drunken confessions from Anika here but instead Shivaay turned out to be drunk and also aware of it. 😆 It was a treat to see a protective Shivaay. And that little rain scene at the end was beautiful. So unlike Shivaay to be enjoying the simple pleasures of life like that but I guess it can be attributed to his drunkenness at the moment. So now that both have realised that they love each other, I can't wait to read the next installment in the series to see where this goes.