AnShi 3S: Shubharambh (ch4-pg6) *complete* - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start
Wonder what is coming next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was too Intense and emotional..l.but that was amazing👏...loved it.
~Maha~
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was too Intense and emotional..l.but that was amazing...loved it.
~Maha~
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was emotional and well written
Plz update next soonish⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ati sundar balike...
Jaldi se update krde...
Raha nhi jaa rha ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb! Update soon! Btw, what's your name😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

Superb! Update soon! Btw, what's your name😆


i am Anika..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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good start
waiting for progress
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ch2.

Shivaay wanted the rains to wash away his pains and sorrows so that he comes out painless and sorrowless but it seems that even God doesnt want to hear his plea.

He curled himself up and cried. Finally,he cried his heart out.It was hard to distinguish between this emotional Shivaay and the ruthless Shivaay whom the whole country knows.

Some moments later,he felt someone over there,protecting him from the rain. He looked at her who had a sad expression etched on the face.

She pulled Shivaay and forcefully took him inside. She made him sit down and passed him a towel to wipe his hair dry because he will catch cold.He stared at her but nodded in a No. He asked her to do it for him. She had no option and unwillingly wiped his hair dry. Later on,she opened his shirt and asked him to change. This time he listened to her and went to the washroom to change while she went to kitchen to make some coffee for him and her.

She came inside with two cups of coffee to see that Shivaay is standing leaning against the window observing the moonlight. She came near him and forwarded his coffee mug and turned to leave when Shivaay hugged her tightly from back and started crying.

''Mat jao na,please,Annika.''

Silence prevailed in between them. Cool air breezed in their room making the atmosphere more romantic. Annika felt hot tears wetting her shoulders.

''Mujhe chhorke mat jao Annika.. Main mar jaunga tumhare baghair.'' Shivaay replied in tears.

''Mujhe chhoriye please. Mujhe dard horaha hai.'' Annika replied.

Annika forcefully took herself out of Shivaay's embrace and was about to go when Shivaay slumped down and hugged her from her waist. She couldnt leave.

''Mujhe jo saza dena chahto ho,dedo mujhe par mujhe chhorke mat jao.. Jee nahi paunga tumhare bina.. Main maanta hu ki maine tumhare upar bohut zulm kiye hai,tumse tumhara sabkuch cheen liya thha,tumhe zabardasti shaadi ki tumhe sabak sikhane keliye but jab mujhe sab sacchai pata chali,tab mujhe bohut pachtava hua. Phir,maine phirse Saahil ki custody case re open karwaya aur finally,Saahil ki custody mil gayi.. Kehte hai ki sabko zindagi mein dusra mauka zarur milta hai apne galtiyo ko sudharne keliye.. Mujhe woh dusra mauka chahiye apni galti sudhaarne keliye.. Please Annika.. Ek aur baat... Main tumse be intehaa pyaar karne laga hu,Annika. Kabse pata nahi par hai yeh sach hai ki main tumse bohut pyaar karne laga hu. Yeh dekho toh..'' Shivaay said in tears and opened his shirt to show the tattoo he made on his skin.. He tattoed Annika's name over his heart. Tears fell from her eyes. She was shocked. She grazed her hands over the place of the tattoo..

''Bohut dard hua hoga na aapko..kyun kiya aapne aisa.kyun??'' She started crying and hitting him and finally he pulled her in his strong,protective and warm embrace.

She cried her heart out and hugged him tightly. She broke the hug and placed her lips on his cold lips and poured out her heart and love in that kiss. Shivaay also responded and poured his heart out.

As the broke their kiss,Annika blushed away and was about to go but Shivaay pulled her back and nuzzled her nape.

Suddenly,Shivaay's room flung open with Omkara and Rudra entering and were shocked to see Shivaay and Annika in a comprising position.

Annika saw this and she herself was shocked to see them. Shivaay saw their expressions and asked them through their eyes to believe him and wait for an explanation..

Precap: Shivaay's explanation and a grand wedding of Shivaay and Annika.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing diii
Wow
Ab kya bolu
Shivaye emotional, and crying
The break down of the Mr shivaye sing oberoi
The ruthless businessman
So vulnerable condition
His emotions were so welly described
And then the anshi part was superb
Anika care for him yet not ready to accept it
And then shivaye's confession simple yet full of emotions
Was like bang on
Wow love the anshi moment
And rudra & om at last
Can't wait to see the bromance
And anshi grand marriage
Update soon dii

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