AnShi SS 'Pyaar Ka Pehla Ehsas' Part 6 page 33 [1/1] pm's la - Page 13

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: chandanagimsy

Hey how are your exams going on..waiting for your updates.. Missing your story alot


Thanks a lot😛 n exams are going tough...I am going mad
Edited by asyaarshilover - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover



Wow...lovely name
Anika⭐️at last after so long tmhara name pata chal gaya


hmm.. [>:D:<]
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Posted: 9 years ago

On the way
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Hie everyone, I know I am pretty late and I am very sorry for that...I have been really very busy due to my exams and they are still going on..I have one this monday and last one on next monday...15th of this month and InnShaaAllah after 15th I will be regular again... *finger crossed* so here is the next update...hope you guyz will like it😳


Part 4

Shivaay paced in his room restlessly, whatever happened a few minutes before played in his mind, and also that smile on her lips when he turned to look at her secretly one last time before leaving , a smile formed on his lips remembering her smile, 'this girl...' he mumbled shaking his head slightly and then decided to get fresh asap so that he can go downstairs again

'Anika di...I was thinking ke sirf paalak paneer se kia hoga, kuch or bhe banata hain na' rudra said as anika was finally done 'some other day please rudra' 'no ways di, mjhe aj hi kuch khana hai' he said pouting and she smiled 'fine what will you have?' 'Halwa' 'halwa?' 'Han suji ka halwa please cook it for me' 'ohoo bus suji ka halwa, ye to mere baen hath (left hand) ka kam hai, it's so easy or tum mere hath ka halwa kha lo bus ek bar, you will never like suji ka halwa by anyone else' she said praising herself in her usual way 'wow is that so' he asked getting excited 'aur nahe to kia..' 'then get started...I can't wait to eat it' 'bus abhi ban jae ga, you just tell where I can find all the ingredients' 'sure...' and with that they got busy in making the halwa and rudra ordered some of the servants to make puri's

Half hour later rudra along with anika set the table with palak paneer and suji ka halwa with puri's and that's when shivaay came downstairs changing in a white kurta pajama...anika too looked at him that same moment and their eyes met, he could see the happiness in her eyes as she was enjoying what she was doing, a small smile made it's way on his lips surprising her like always and that's when rudra who was calling out for her tapped her back 'uhhh Han' she answered turning to rudra who himself was enjoying their silent romance

''Hmm this smell so good' dadi said and anika passed a wide smile to her 'shukriya dadi ' she thanked her 'dadi I Will leave now' she announced and the smile on shivaay's face wiped away, everyone noticed it but before they could say something janvi came to her 'aese kaisa, you made it all with so much effort and love so you too should have lunch with us' she said 'but...how can I..I mean aunty ji ' she hesitated and janvi shook her head understanding what she was trying to say 'I can understand what you are thinking but trust me no one here now thinks about you that way and we will surely like it if you will sit and have food with us' anika sighed thinking about the last time she came here 'mam honestly, this is awkward also, I am just an ordinary girl not even of your status...I can't' anika just didn't knew how to argue...she knew that for the first time she is saying all this about her may be because of the first incident happened in this house

'I know the first time you came here things were quite different and also the behaviour of few us, and yesterday the situation was different but today everything and everyone are the way they should be ' janvi told her with a smile, shivaay wanted to jump in and just stop her but he knew If he would interfere then she will surely leave even if she wanted the opposite 'anika didi, ab ruk bi jao na I am so hungry, bua ji didn't let me eat properly in morning' sahil said running his hand on his stomach pouting all the while, jhanvi chuckled followed by anika 'theek hai mam' she said 'you can call me aunty...I don't mind ' 'sure aunty'

Shivaay who still was standing by the stairs watching anika with everyone seating for lunch looked away as om came and stood by him 'what happened?' Om asked 'to whom?' Shivaay asked back 'of course to you?' 'Mujhe kia hoga' 'shivaay, that middle class batameez girl is standing in our house and all asked her to have lunch too but you aren't saying anything...' 'come on it's just a lunch...no big deal' 'it's big deal shivaay, I am surprised that you allowed her in...I remember that day when you said she is nothing but a batameez complicated and middle class girl so what happened now..mai to kehta hun dhaka mar kar nikal ise bahar' 'om...' 'whay om yaar...ohkay you can't do it? No problem I can do it for you, I can do anything for you' om said faking anger and made his way to anika when shivaay held him stopping him 'let it be yaar om, wo itni bhe buri nahe hai' he said looking everywhere but him, om smiled 'say that again...' 'come on I just said it and that's enough...now come let's have lunch' saying so shivaay escaped while rudra came to om 'O, you always say that I do so much over acting, but you know what you were competing with me today, so much nautanki ' he said with a serious expression on which om slapped him lightly and they started laughing 'come let's have lunch'

They all sat around the table with anika first helping sahil to seat properly and then sat beside him opposite shivaay, dadi who ate the food first couldn't help but appreciate anika on making such delicious dish, everyone else too appreciated her 'wow di it's amazing, haina bhaiyaa' rudra said turning to shivaay who was having his food silently enjoying it to the core, but as he looked up when rudra called her he found all the eyes on him, especially her's who was impatiently waiting for his reply 'umm yeah nice...good' he said giving her a small nod diverting his attention back to his food avoiding any eye contact with anyone

Anika too looked down smiling lightly while everyone else on the table showed thumbs up to each other, janvi shook her head, she knew since morning that they all are upto something and now she is sure about it

'Oh my mata...I am so tired' pinky said making her way inside the house with her driver following her with lots of shopping bags in his hands 'choti maa, come let's have lunch' om offered 'of course of course, I am hungry' she agreed happily coming to them but stopped finding anika there 'oh my mata what is this lower class girl doing here? ' she asked shocked placing her hand on her chest 'pinky, she is also having lunch with us' dadi said 'in fact didi herself made lunch for us' rudra added and she grimaced 'have you all gone mad? And you girl get up, get up and leave from my house' she shouted , anika stood up hurriedly

'Pinky why are you behaving like this...it's just a lunch' janvi said 'oh shut up jhetani ji, I just can't tolerate her presence in my house, and you are still here you middle class girl , chalo jao yhan se' anika looked away as her eyes moistened and she helped sahil get down, everyone felt bad for her but knew they won't be able to convince pinky 'sorry aunty' anika apologized and held sahil hand to leave 'sorry ki aese ki taise, don't you dare ever come back in my house' she added signaling her the way out 'enough' shivaay shouted shocking pinky and surprising others 'shivaay' 'mom don't you think you are over reacting, she is just having lunch with us, and just to increase your knowledge, anika didn't came here herself, dadi called her and everyone else requested her to stay for lunch' he said 'but shivaay beta...' 'mom please, let it be and anika you sit back and have your food...' he almost ordered, pinky threw daggers in her way before leaving to her room

'No It's okay Mr.Oberoi, it's better I leave' she said 'anika, bhaiyaa ne kaha na, come on sit and relax' priyanka insisted and she nodded..

'Hello everyone' tia greeted making everyone look up at her , rudra smirked, others were confused and anika clueless 'tia..what is she doing here?' Om whispered to rudra noticing his expressions 'ohh tia come in...' rudra welcomed her 'hey rudra' tia said with a smile, shivaay frowned 'rudra what's going on?' Shivaay asked going towards them, anika too got up along with shivaay and others 'shivaay baby I am so sorry' tia apologized holding his hand, anika looked away feeling awkward

'Han bhaiya forgive bhabhi please' rudra said making a puppy face 'bhabhi? ' shivaay and om repeated shocked 'yes bhaiyaa, I know you are angry with her because she misbehave with me, but I know how much you like her islie maina inhe maaf kia ...ap bhe kardo' rudra said and shivaay massaged his forehead, om glared at rudra who in response winked back showing his usual cute smile

'Tia, may be you forgot what I told you...I clearly told you that it's over, the girl who can't respect and love my brothers just like I do can never be my life partner...' shivaay said removing her hand from his, tia hurriedly cupped his cheek 'shivaay baby, I was angry and upset otherwise I wouldn't had reacted that way, rudra is like my brother too, please forgive me, I am sorry' shivaay looked away and his eyes landed on anika who too was looking somewhere else and not at them...

'Baby, please' tia said again and he sighed 'dadi...I will take my leave now...' anika started turning to dadi who nodded kind of understanding the situation and nodded back at her she hurriedly helped sahil and picking up her hang bag from the table started walking towards the exit

Shivaay's followed her through his eyes until she was out of his sight...he sighed, he was disappointed as he didn't wanted this, this all was totally unexpected, at first finding the same girl from whom's thought he was running away at his home and when he enjoyed watching the way she mixed up with his family, tia showed up ruining the moment and her mode...he could see the hurt and disappointment in her eyes and didn't liked it at all

At last he removed tia's hand from him this time firmly 'tia I don't like repeating my decisions at all and this is my final decision ' he said straightaway making his way outside after her, leaving a highly disappointed tia and his overjoyed family behind

No proof read honestly so ignore my mistakes please also do leave back your reviews, angry with late update? You can scold me too😳 and yeah one more request, I have made a new vm on AnShi, do watch it if time permits⭐️


My AnShi vm *mile ho tum humko*

Thanks in advance... will wait for your reviews and aorry for late update (may be boring also😕)

-aroo












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Posted: 9 years ago
This is amazing loved it...yaar uss pinky ko na..but wow rudra awesome jealousy on its way...and shivaay supported anika so cute...all the best for exams...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Woohoo Tia is OUT and Shivaay stood up for Anika! Yay!
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update. loved it a lot..
pinky ki toh.. arrrggghhh...
shivaay stood for Annika..
annika made food for everyone..
shivaay should admit tht he is in love with Annika..
continue sooonish..
all the best for exams
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved the part!
Shivaay is melting!
Pinky 😡!
Continue soonnn
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update...
Loved it. Shivaay Anika silent romance was simply brilliant..😳
Continue sooon...nd thnx for the pm..
Love Sharmi
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Posted: 9 years ago
Rudra is such a powerful character...he looks like a goofball but has good perspective on what is happening loved the way he interfered and try to play cupid. Good writing! Enjoyed it...

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