IshKara SS: Mould My Love For You |Chp 5(Last part) Pg14| *COMPLETED*

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Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

When are you updating the next chapter??

Waiting for it with baited breath..

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844858

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Posted: 9 years ago

#102

So, I know I am incredibly late. And I'm so sorry. I just had no motivation to write the past week.

But-BUT, I finally wrote it.😎

So, this was my first SS, and I never thought I could ever have the patience or the ability to write anything longer than an OS, so I'm kinda proud of myself for being able to finish this.

I know, it's a stupid, basic story, but well, you've got to start somewhere. And I'm feeling weirdly emotional now that it's over😆

I don't feel like ending it yet, but I also know, that I'll probably ruin it if I try to continue this.

So, I've decided that I could maybe write an epilogue on it, only if you guys want one. So, let me know if you guys do.

Also, I'd like to give out a HUGE thanks to everyone who read the story, appreciated it and commented. You guys made my day with your sweet comments😃

Okay, before I present the next part, here's a (bad) Shayaari

Even though, this is the last part

Even though this is the last part

I hope it brings happiness in your heart. (I'm sorry😛. Blame Rudr🤣)

Before you guys hit me with your 'chamelis', scroll down for the next part😉

Edited by -Panda- - 9 years ago

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844858

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Posted: 9 years ago

#103

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Posted: 9 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: Autumn_Hue
When are you updating the next chapter??
Waiting for it with baited breath..

Updated😉

Edited by -Panda- - 9 years ago

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pj1519

@pj1519

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#105

OH MY GOD THIS WAS SOOO WELL WRITTEN AND BEAUTIFUL AND PERFECT
U ARE SO TALENTED

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teju

@...tejaswi...

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#106

lila

oh god i read this part 3 times

that anticipation

that urge to kiss😆

that intensity😃

waaah waaah

simply no words to say about this part

i really loved this part ❤️

oh god this was the last chapter

*** sobs***😭

looking forward for more of your writings sweeetheart

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Shreya

@Wandering_mind

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Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Hie there:)

When I had read the previous parts , I had predicted this story to end on a heavier note.But man did you surprise me?! ..What a lovely end!!

The beginning part was HOT! The passion igniting every passing second between the two strangers ( MORE than strangers ) could be felt deeply. The desire to get close was so strong but written so beautifully that one could feel the connection that was so much more profound than just lust or infactuation. I loved the bold Ishana ,who took the first step breaking every little ounce of control Omkaara had. The kiss , undoubtedly was raw and passionate, yet held a softer emotion where for once both of them had forgotten all their miseries ,losing themselves into each other ,healing each other a bit.

The ending couldn't have gotten better. Both of them instead of beating about the bush ,came out clean and clear about their feelings was something I really liked, credits to you for writing it so well, with a touch of shyness and humor at the same time.

Dhokle ki kasam?! Phir toh sculpture pakka pura hoga...ya phir shayad nahi !😳😳...Lets leave it to them to decide that :P

Beautiful piece! Would love to read more on Ishkaara from you :)

Love,

Shreya

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kennashreign

@kennashreign

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#108

Awesome. So much passion! I loved it! ❤️

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vidya29

@vidya29

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Posted: 9 years ago

#109

Eeeppp!!!!!!

I loved it.It was passionate,cute and adorable all at the right places.The story is not simple,it's cute,funny and exciting.Stop berating yourself,you are a wonderful writer.

Now,I'll write a review for the previous one and this later.I have a brunch to attend and won't do justice to your pieces if I write while running around trying to get ready.

Dhokle ki kasam!

I loved this one panda!

Take care.