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Posted: 9 years ago
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can't wait to know how aisha tame om,update soon.
Edited by jarir2010 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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when r u gonna update the next part?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I should update it by tomorrow eveningim lazy...so Jus need to sit down and pen the next part down...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Heyaa, back again with PART B...phewww this one took some time...But I finally finished it...Its longgg...so again bear with me please...and do read till the end...the end is worth it...
and let me know if I should continue...
so here goess...😊

Arranged love-BECAUSE I CARE (PART-B)

Aisha looked around the room and spoke to herself "you're a genius, you deserve a pat on your back." She had decorated their room with sweet smelling candles and draped beautiful tapestry all around the room. She decided to add the most important thing in Om's life as well, His love for Art. Shivaay had helped her hang various quotes and famous art works of Om's favourite artists like Picasso, Van Gogh, and da Vinci. She also added a few of Om's works that she loved. The room was lit up by pretty Christmas lights, they gave the room a cozy look and a romantic feel. But what Aisha was most excited about was the object which was covered by a cloth. A few days back Aisha had tried her hand at sculpting. She didn't know a thing about art but wanted to try it just for Om. It was nowhere near to the kind of sculptures Om created but she had put a lot of effort. And right now was the best time for her to show it to Om. Lastly, she wore a deep blue saree with a gold border, applied minimal makeup and added chunky earrings to it. This was the saree that Om liked. He had complimented her on it. Aisha wanted everything to be about Om tonight. She wanted him to feel loved.

"He will like all this right shivaay?" asked Aisha "Of course he will, it's all perfect, you really know to make people happy, and trust me when Om sees all this, there won't be a speck of anger left in him."

"Well that's the idea"

Shivaay exclaimed "Besides all this Aisha, the main part is that you confess your feelings, I hope you remember that"

"Don't worry, I remember it. I'm not going to back out today."

Shivaay's cell phone rang. He had told the security guard to inform him when Om reached the gate.

"Aisha, Om's here... get ready and don't worry everything will be good"

With that Shivaay left the room. Aisha was excited but at the same time, she was nervous. She hoped Om would like all this...She sat on her bed waiting for him to come in...

Meanwhile, Om had cooled down a little bit and he felt bad for being so rude to Aisha. "I should go and talk to her, after all, she was just looking out for me"

As Omkara was walking down the hallway, He heard a commotion from his parent's room. Om decided to ignore it since it wasn't something new. But then he heard his mom crying and thought he should go and check. Om was about to enter the room but stopped in his tracks. He heard his mom say "Tej you are a terrible husband, I accepted that but how could you treat your own Son like this!"

"Oh shut up Janvi, why don't you look at yourself? You're an alcoholic, you can barely stand up straight. What kind of mother are you?"

"You know Tej, it's because of you that our Son got into an addiction problem! If you would have tried to accept him as he is, all this would not have happened and if it wasn't for Shivaay, Om would never have come out of this. You just never understood him, He is a professional artist. You should be proud of him."

"Janvi you want me to be proud of the stupid decision our son took? He should be racing ahead in our business, not getting lost in his Art world. Look at Shivaay, look where he is right now"

Janvi was appalled of Tej. "See this is what I'm saying, because of our life, our son has lost faith in the institution of marriage. You're so heartless that you got Om married to Aisha for your business deal...But I have to say whatever circumstances you got them married, you found the right girl for him!"

"Your right Janvi, Omkara shouldn't believe in relationships and love! Because there is no such thing as a strong marriage!

Om could not bear to hear any more of their talks. He was shattered from the inside! It's been so long but still his parents fought on the same topic! "I was right, there is no such thing as perfect love and perfect marriage." Om was fuming with anger, mixed with pain. He wanted his pills. He didn't care about anything else right now. He cursed his life and felt like there was nothing left. Om started walking towards his room in his angry form.

Aisha was getting impatient, "why is Om taking so long"? At that very moment, Om stormed into his room. Aisha excitedly stood up and rushed to him.

"Om your finally here, I was waiting for you. I wanted to give you a surprise, I'm really sorry for all the things I said to you before. Look around the room, all this is just for you" Aisha had a huge smile on her face. She went to get the sculpture she had made for him.

Om noticed all the candles, quotes, paintings and sculptures and turned back to Aisha with a glare.

" I have to tell you something, but before that, I want to show you what I made for you," Said Aisha shyly.

She lifted the cover of the small table to reveal a small sculpture of a swan, But before Aisha could say anything further, Om picked up the swan and smashed it into a million pieces, with that Aisha's heart also broke into pieces.

He was furious. He seethed at Aisha "Who do you think of yourself? Why did you do all this? What did you think you can impress me with all these decorations...?

Om went around the room and tore all the quotes and paintings from the walls. He pulled the Christmas lights down with force and started to smash all of his work as well. The candles were blown out and except for the light coming from the windows, the whole room was engulfed in darkness.

Aisha looked around the room in shock. She was heartbroken and big fat drops of tears were falling down her cheeks. She had never seen Om being this violent.

Om barked at Aisha "my life is a mess! There is no such thing as a happy family in this world, these are all lies and your one of the idiots who believes in them. Nothing lasts forever!! All this means nothing. Om had a wild look on his face. Asif someone had just snatched something precious from him.

Aisha took a step back in fear. She was never afraid of Om, but today she was scared to death. Soon her pain turned to anger. She resisted the urge to slap Om hard on his face. She was mad at him for ruining everything.

"I'm going, Om!! You can do what you want!"

Aisha stormed out of Oberoi mansion into the pouring rain.

Shivaay saw the doors to Om's room open and filled with darkness. He went into the room and switched on the lights. It looked like a hurricane had hit the room and destroyed everything. All the preparations that Aisha and he had done were completely destroyed. Shivaay saw Om sitting at the edge of the bed, shivering.

"What the hell happened here? Om you did all this, didn't you?

Shivaay knelt down next to Om and said "What happened to you, are you ok? And where's Aisha?

Om started mumbling some incoherent words about his parents fighting and about relationships not lasting, there's no point in all this.

Shivaay immediately understood what had happened to his younger brother. Om was in a state of shock.

He got a glass of water and started saying "Om listen to me very carefully, I know what you're thinking, but please ignore what your parents said. Because of them you're ruining your shot at happiness"

By that time Om had calmed down a little bit. "You don't get it shivaay I don't want to ruin Aisha's life by giving her false hopes."

"Do you have any idea how much you hurt her today? She was going to confess her love for you today, she had done all this just for you, and you broke her heart"

Hearing this Omkara stood up abruptly. "Wait, what? Was she going to confess? Oh god, what have I done, I removed all my anger on her? I hurt the one person I can't see in pain"

"Yes exactly and today if you don't set things right Om, then you're going to become like your father in the real sense, now go and get Aisha back, it's raining heavily as well and who knows what she might end up doing."

Those words were enough to make Om run out to find her.

Aisha was walking aimlessly in the heavy rain, she felt like she had nothing left to live for. How could things get so bad? That was not her Om. It was someone else. Aisha wasn't paying attention to the cars passing by and suddenly bright head lights coming towards her blurred her vision...Om who was frantically searching for her was suddenly struck with the fear of losing his wife forever because of his stupid mistake. Just then he saw Aisha in the middle of the road and a car that was about to hit her.

Omkara ran as fast as he could and yanked Aisha out of the way. "Are you out of your bloody mind? You could have died!"

Aisha had a blank expression but instantly regained her senses "Why did you save me? You should have just let me die in peace! It's not like you care about me. I don't matter to you Omkara! I'm just a burden to you...I'm sorry that I ever thought I meant something to you but I don't! Aisha was crying hard but her tears were camouflaged by the rain.

He pulled her towards Him and said "I'm an idiot, but let me tell you this, you have no idea what you mean me. You're the light of my life! I have started living since you came into my life, your mine...Aisha I Love You and I always will!!

She looked up at Om, she was stunned and couldn't believe her ears. Did he really just say all that? When she glanced at his eyes she realised that her Om was back.

Om placed his arms around Aisha's waist and pulled her towards him. He rested his forehead on hers and moved her wet strands of her hair out of her face. Aisha was frozen, her breathing quickened. Although it was raining and the atmosphere was cold, all she could feel among them was warmth. His breath felt warm on her face compared to the freezing rain crashing down on them. At that moment Om's lips met hers. Time stood still for them. Everything else around them disappeared. It was just them and the rain. Aisha was tingling all over, she ran her hand through his long hair. Om didn't feel like this was for the first time, it was something very natural to him.

Finally, they broke their kiss and Aisha put her arms around his waist and hugged him. "you're my salvation, I'm never going to let you go" thought Om


soo how was it??😃 let me know...and ideas are welcome😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sherlocked246

Hi! thank you soo much...im glad you liked it! there is a second part to this...which i still have to write! will put it up soon... 😊




Edited by heartbroken1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely chapter dear

Loved the last part sooi much

Please continue soonish

Cant wait to read more

Thanks

Ps. Youre a great writer
Edited by heartbroken1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
aww... thats so romantic.. rain wala romance.. haaye...
thank God that Shivaay came and adjusted some senses in Om..
i loved it..
continue sooonish.
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
This was just wow. Please continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey all!! thank you sooo much! hope it was gud enough 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Finally they're together ❤️
Thanks for this Amazing update :')

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