one is not half of two;two are halves of one--Shivaay-Omkara os

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Pamalo

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
awesome os..👏

Thank you 😊

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Niki

@luvzindagi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

This is the cutest OS I have read on the sibling bond

It was perfect, it had emotions, feelings, and love between the brothers... I loved every bit of it. Especially the last peaceful sleeping part of Om and Shivaay... It was just too adorable

Keep writing

You are awesome 👏

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mistofshadows

@mistofshadows

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Goodness...how did I miss this? It is such a fantastic piece of work. I felt weak-kneed reading Om's helplessness and understanding of Shivaay's pain when he was taking drugs. Such a beautiful depiction of the scene. Loved it.
Thanks for writing this.

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forever.young

@forever.young

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

That's so beautiful.

Please write more on OBbros.

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Mehreen Bushra

@_PanCake_

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Amazing os dear

ShivKara ❤️ Love them

And do write more, would love to read.

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Sanavi

@Sanavi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Nice.
The bond between these brothers is so grt.
U hv described Omkar's turmoil perfectly.

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Pamalo

@Pamalo

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: luvzindagi
This is the cutest OS I have read on the sibling bond
It was perfect, it had emotions, feelings, and love between the brothers... I loved every bit of it. Especially the last peaceful sleeping part of Om and Shivaay... It was just too adorable
Keep writing
You are awesome👏

Thank you so much 😊 the last part is my favourite too. The best part of the Os 😉

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Pamalo

@Pamalo

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: mistofshadows
Goodness...how did I miss this? It is such a fantastic piece of work. I felt weak-kneed reading Om's helplessness and understanding of Shivaay's pain when he was taking drugs. Such a beautiful depiction of the scene. Loved it.
Thanks for writing this.

Thanks alot. I tried to show the other side I.e him realising that along with him his family also suffered.