ShivIka Pyaar ki Kahani - FF Chapter 8 Updated

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Hi guys,

This is Sashniha but Sashi is fine. So I'm just loving this show an ShivIka. This is the first time I've attempted an FF so please if you like it let me know, and if I could improve in any way let me know! I ignore if there's any error in my hindi.

This story will be continuing from the original story but only until the pool sequence.

Annika isn't sent to jail & Shivaay isn't hospitalized.

Chapter 1

Midnight at Oberoi Mansion

Shivaay in his room, trying to fall asleep but all he was doing was replay all the incidents he had with Annika up in till the point where they were both in the pool together so close that nothing can go past them.

He opened his eyes shocked. Why am I thinking about her so much? Why her being in pain affected me so much? And after seeing her like that I don't even know what came over me that I Shivaay Singh Oberoi apologizes to her.

Ughhh!!!!! What is happening to me? Om was right when I believe in having enemies is a relation and a relation should be from an equal status why does this Annika affect me so much. Who is she to me...?

She is nothing to me!! But voh ek ladki hai and I shouldn't have treated her like how I did! Isaliye main sorry bola. That's it! And not for any other reason.

Same Time - Annika's House

Finally she put Sahil to sleep and went to her room to get some rest too, but she couldn't! Since the pool incident is still so fresh in here mind and every time she closes her eyes, she sees his face.

Uggh I can't believe I looked so weak and scared in front of him.

Chalo at least with one thing I'm happy with! Shivaay Singh Oberoi said sorry to me like really. I still can't believe he went to that extent to make me say sorry and went I was about to say it. He apologized.

From when I first saw him, now itna bura nahin hai!

Annika what are you saying? How many times has he insulted you and now just because he apologized for something he did wrong he's not a nice guy. He is the same Shivaay Singh Oberoi rude, arrogant, and thinks money, power aur naam is everything. This guy will never change.

And she is finally able to sleep!

Morning at the Oberoi's

Rudra in deep thought while having breakfast on how Shivaay could get out of this engagement with lady baba.

Omkara comes and ask tum kahaan kho gae ho?

R: Bhai I was thinking of way to get Shivaay bhai's engagement canceled or at least postpone. Because mujhe paata hai Bhai iss rishta saa khush nahi hai.

Om: I know Rudra, but what can we do? You know how Shivaay is, there's no point in talking to him. He doesn't believe love.

R: I don't believe that bhaiya! I know he doesn't believe in it right now because he hasn't fallen in love yet. And this prove that Lady Baba isn't made for him.

Om: I understand what you're saying I also believe Tia isn't for Shivaay but he's decided and as his brothers we should respect his decisions.

R: But I can't accept Tia as my bhabi. More than Tia I like Annika didi. She is so nice and caring. Yeah she talks a lot but it's nice and she also looks 10 times better with bhai then that Tia. Look at this picture.

Rudra hands his phone to Om and shows a picture of Shivaay and Annika in the pool together so close.

Om: Rudra where did you get this from?

R: Last night when the power was out and we went looking for bhaiya since he didn't come back for such a long time. I went by his room and saw them and I clicked this photo! Then you called out for bhai and he let Annika didi go.

R: Bhai do you know why Annika didi & bhai were together?

Om: No I don't! I just saw Annika leaving his room and getting her key from Priyanka. But Shivaay was definitely disturbed because when I went to talk to him about her and there's something about her that affects him he just got mad and told me to not over think this and to just get some rest since it's been a long day.

R: Bhai I'm telling you there is some sort of spark there between bhaiya and Annika didi. But bhaiya doesn't see it. We have to make him realize it.

Om: Even I also wanted a girl like Annika for Shivaay, who is fearless and could give it back to him when he is wrong.

R: So I have decided that Annika didi meri bhabi hai.

Om: Rudra tum bhi na. We don't even know if they feel that way about each other you decided she's going to be your bhabi. First we need to find out if the two of them have a chance and if we can see them both together.

Om: For that we need time and tomorrow is the engagement. Rudra we can't decide in one day if they are perfect for each other and make realize it.

R: No we can't, but we have to think of something.

So that's it for the first chapter hope you guys liked reading it. Do you think the engagement will not take place? Stay tuned to find out J

And please guys let me know what you think because this is the first time I've written a FF and I would like to know how if you're liking it or how I could improve. If you have any ideas or thoughts for this story please do let me know I'll to take it under consideration.

Index Page
Chapter 2
Chapter 3

Chapter 4

Chapter 5

Chapter 6

Chapter 7

Chapter 8



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great start.
Looking forward to reading more. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Captainswan1

Great start.

Looking forward to reading more. :)

Aww thanks :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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jhakkas start.
please start jaldi jaldi.
next update jaldi likh dalo..
i cant wait to read the next update.
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Originally posted by: VidyutKiDeewani

jhakkas start.
please start jaldi jaldi.
next update jaldi likh dalo..
i cant wait to read the next update.

Aww thats sweet, and I'm currently working on the next chapter :) So stay tuned !
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Great start! ⭐️ very well written 👏 & can't wait to read more... 😊
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great start
nice update dear
pls continue soon ...
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Great start...waiting for the next update...pls pm me also
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Originally posted by: ..KpopIsLife..

Great start! ⭐️ very well written 👏 & can't wait to read more... 😊

Thank you! Working on the next chapter it will be up soon! :)
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Beautiful start ...waiting for the next chapter ...update asap

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