ShivIka Pyaar ki Kahani - FF Chapter 8 Updated- Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago
awww how caring of Shivay...Hope they find Sahil soon...:-)

Well written...was waiting to read more...Continue Soon...:-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very small chapter
Poor Anika is in hell not knowing where is her brother
Even shivay was worried for sahil safety
Hope police with track sahil in time
Thank god shivay is with Anika to give her strength
Continue plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Here is Chapter 8, hope you guys like it! Let me know through your likes and comments.

Chapter 8

It's been about an hour since Shivaay talked to ACP Raj and still haven't heard anything about the kidnappers.

Anni: It has been over an hour and we still haven't heard anything from the police. I can't just sit around doing nothing, I feel like I'm not doing anything to find Sahil.

Shiv: It does take some time trace their location, we just need to wait Annika.

Anni: For how long? The more we wait, they could be harming Sahil.

Shivaay's phone rings. He sees the caller ID and tells Annika it's Raj.

Shiv: Raj yaar, how long did you make us wait. Did you get their location?

ACP: Shivaay what do I tell you, this guy is smarter than we think. This whole time the number was off and now they've turned it on and they tried calling a number. Raj reads the number to Shivaay. And they are trying to call again.

Shiv: Raj that's my landline number.

ACP: Seriously? Call someone from home now and tell them to keep talking to them for about 5 minutes so that we could trace their location.

Shiv: Okay, I'll call Om from Annika's phone... Annika call Om's cell now!

Annika calls Om and give the phone to Shivaay.

Over at the Oberoi Mansion

Om hears the landline and goes to answer it but hears his phone ringing too. Rudra comes and goes to the landline and tells Om to answer his phone. Om sees it's Annika and worries why she is calling and answers the call.

Om: Hello.. Annika..

Shiv: Om... it's Shivaay! Om is surprised to hear Shivaay's voice and smiles. Om listen to me; did you get a call on the landline right now?

Om: Haan, I was going to answer it but my phone rang so I answered my phone and Rudra went to answer to landline.

Shiv: Om go tell Rudra to talk to that person from a while and tell him to keep talking for about 5 minutes go.

Om: But Shivaay...

Shiv: I'll explain later just go tell Rudra before he cuts the call.

Om: Ek minute main ab jaata hoon.

Om runs to Rudra as he answers the call and tells him what to do. Rudra signals him that he's got this and talks to the person on the other line.

Om: Shivaay I told Rudra what to do, don't worry he'll get the job done.

Shivaay tells Raj that Rudra is talking to him. Raj tells Shivaay to continue until I tell you we have a location. Shivaay lets Om know what Raj said and he says okay.

Shivaay gives his phone to Annika so he could talk to Om.

Rudra talking to the kidnapper.

R: Arey bhai, who are you looking for?

K.N.: Can I talk to Mr. Oberoi ?

R: Which Oberoi?

K.N.: This is Oberoi residence right?

R: Yes, this is Oberoi residence but which Mr. Oberoi are you looking for? I am also a Mr. Oberoi

Om hears this and laughs, only Rudra can talk non sense like this.

K.N.: Well...

R: Kya hai bhai, you don't know who you want to talk to and you are wasting my time.

K.N.: do you know Sahil?

R: Sahil... Which Sahil? As he says this he winks to Om

Om shakes his head and talks to Shivaay who is still on the line.

Shiv: What's going on? Is everything okay?

Om: Relax Shivaay, you know once Rudra starts talking no one could stop him. But Shivaay what's going on? Why are you trying to trace this person and why did you call from Annika's phone?... Voh theek hai nah? Why is this person talking about Annika's brother Sahil?

Shiv: Om...Om... wait! I don't have the time to answer all these questions. All I can say is that I have to be here and solve this before I can do anything else.

Om: But Shivaay it's your sangaee today. You can't just not come here; your mom's been asking about you.

Shiv: Om you just have to trust me, without sorting out the problem here I can't come.

Annika rans and comes to Shivaay and tells him that Raj has located to place.

Shiv: Om we got it, let Rudra know that we got it and he could end the call now.

Om: Okay Shivaay, just take care.

Shivaay cuts the call and Om lets Rudra know and tells him to hang up the call.

Over at Annika's house

Raj lets both of them know that there are in some warehouse off the highway about 20 km north. It was kind of hard to get the location it seems like it's in a place where the network isn't as good. I'm sending my team out right now...

As Annika hears listens to this she gets her keys to her champa and heads for the door. Shivaay sees this and tells Raj I'll call you back and he runs after her.

Shiv: where do you think you're going?

Anni: where else... I need to go to Sahil now.

Shiv: didn't you hear Raj is sending his team to go and get Sahil. Nothing is going to happened to him.

Anni: nahi... I want to be with him! He's going to be really scared and I want to be there.

Annika is leaving and he holds her hand and says wait I'll take you. They both leave in his car. They the warehouse and look around to see its deserted. Annika has a weird feeling looking at the place and is getting more worried about Sahil. Shivaay see her being nervous he put his hand and assures her that everything this going to be okay.

Hope you guys liked it! I've got a lot of great ideas for the next few chapter, but don't get that much time to wrote because of school and stuff. But bare with me guys I'll try to update as soon as possible! :)

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Posted: 9 years ago
Grt update.
Hahaha Agent Rudy confusing the kidnappers.

Update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
it was short but it was nice 😊

Rudy was adorable though 😉 😊

Continue Soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
poor anika was hell scared for sahil 😭
loll rudra did awesome job makes those kidnaper bg so police could track their location 🤗
finally police found the location 👍🏼
anika was hurry to go get sahil
hope they will get sahil without any harm
continue plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
I hope sahil is fine😭
loved that shivaay dint let anika go there alone😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hmmm...so they found d hideout...good...rudra conversation was funny as usual...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Agent rudy is the best
nice update continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update
Agent 00 Rudy on the job 😆

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