Bitter Soul - Omkara's FF [Part 3 - Page 8]

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mistofshadows

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

God...I loved it.

It is a fantastic start and the way you portrayed the bothers and Shivani's pov towards Om was awesome.

The way she finds him mysterious adds to the feel of an intense romance.

Loved it👏

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crushcrushed

@crushcrushed

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Oh my god this is so beautiful 👏 loved it. Beautiful described. Please can you tell when are you uploading next part? I am curious 😳

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

@Meself

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

So everyone is digging Om and Shivani! see I knew I am that good!🤣

@Frozen-Storm girl you are spooking me now!

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nissi or jesi

@Jess_Ru

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

why u named it shivani ..." goes to a corner and cries"

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

@Meself

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Messi2
why u named it shivani ..." goes to a corner and cries"

Because Om and Shivani sells! Oh Nimmi di needs to be here!🤣

And Jessi don't cry..you'll get someone soon-ish!

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Nor

@vena.cava.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

OMG you are so so talented!! Please continue writing, I am eagerly looking forward to more!

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WhiteNoise

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

That was soo damn cool...I just spotted this FF and as soon as I saw Om I just rushed to read it...
Man this is amazing...
Om❤️
Vani's cute antics with on...Shiv is her bhai and rudra buddy...
I really liked their characterization...
Cont soon..
And pm me if possible