Bitter Soul - Omkara's FF [Part 3 - Page 8]

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Debalina Dey

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Its absolutely lovely. Please do continue soon.

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Amber

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

I loved the update and I love the way you are developing Om and Shivi. She seems to be holding on her own and is failing at the same miserably. Om on the other hand knows the crux of her trouble and now is out there to work on the same. Great chapeter.

Okay now let me tell you, you are spooking me! I love blue and books. How is it that yo are nailing every goddamn detail of me? You are not a cyborg, are you??

PTSD. smart move, eh!

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Abhiya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Great episode I am loving the character development between Om and Shivani... waiting for the next update.

Shivu 🤗 we are very much alike I too love blue and books and am very possessive about my books than my clothes. I don't want anyone to touch them.I am all ready to give my favourite clothes but not books 😆

We have so much in common like mythology,history,blue,books and lastly Omkara 🤣

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: abhiya_12
Great episode I am loving the character development between Om and Shivani... waiting for the next update.

Shivu 🤗 we are very much alike I too love blue and books and am very possessive about my books than my clothes. I don't want anyone to touch them.I am all ready to give my favourite clothes but not books 😆

We have so much in common like mythology,history,blue,books and lastly Omkara 🤣

I am ready with a bazooka if someone as much as scratches my book!😆

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Debalina Dey

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Loved it. Shivani's character is a well etched one. Waiting eagerly for the next chapter. Update soonish.

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26javey

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Just read this and I love your style and thw way you're developing the story. Eagerly looking forward to the upcoming chapters. If you don't mind, can you please pm me whenever you update?