Riansh ts- Clean Slate Part 3- Page 2 complete

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Hey guys, again this is my imagination..ab forum itna soona lag raha hain..😔😔😔. Anyways it is on the SR episode, no stupid revenge track, he will be angry but he has decided to forgive her.



Riddhima was alright, she had her left shoulder covered in bandage, the bullet had grazed and the wound just looked too threatening, it was mainly due to the emotional stress of having Vansh back that she had gone into shock..


But, she was okay now and they were going home atleast that is what she thought till Vansh went to a different direction, baffled she asked

R- Vansh, yeh humare ghar ka rasta nahi hain..kahan ja rahe hain hum?

V- Well kya hain Dollar biwi, i want to spend some time with you. Itna mushkil se sab theek hua hain. Mujhe finally apni biwi ka pura attention chaiye..he winked and she blushed.


Even though Vansh was angry and jealous that Riddhima had loved that idiot Kabir, he was ready to forgive her because she had protected him again and again and frankly he was too madly in love with her to just let her go.


On the other hand, the guilt of betraying him was eating Riddhima, she wanted to tell him the truth, and this time she had decided she will tell him the truth, regardless of whether he wants to listen to her or not.


He stopped at a beautiful glass house where he had organized a lunch and stay over for them, she smiled seeing the setup and Vansh rubbed his neck sheepishly, he just kept one plate,


V- I was thinking of sharing the food.. he blushes a little and Riddhima pinches his cheek.

R- Aww, i so wish tum hamesha aise hi romantic raho. Woh gusse wala look tumpe bikul suit nahi karta.

V- But you look sexy when you are angry, Dollar biwi.

R- Kya Vansh, i hate that nickname..😒😒

V- But i love it.


They had lunch together, feeding each other and Riddhima almost hurriedly gulping the warm and delicious gulab jamuns..he took her hand and they danced for a while just to be close to each other.

R- Vansh, hume ghar jana chaiye. Dadi pareshaan ho rahi hogi.

V- Kya yaar Riddhima, ek waise hi hume koi quality time nahi milta thanks to our family. And abhi bhi tume Dadi ki jayada fikar.

R- Aare aise nahi hain..

V- Hum, kal wapas jayegaye..aaj raat i have a surprise for you..

R- Oh..


They kept talking about random things, after a while Vansh told Riddhima to go to the bathroom, he had a package for her there. All excited she went away and Vansh worked on decorating the place.


Riddhima was so happy, he had gifted a peach colored saree, and she draped it around her and went outside, everything was changed, rose petals everywhere and a bed in between them, and Vansh was standing in the corner with a rose in his hand.


He had changed into a black shirt and pant, which added more to his hotness and that smooth skin peeking made Riddhima shiver in anticipation,

V- You look beautiful.. you like this?

R- I love it.

V- (going down on his knees)- I wanna tell you something, mene kabhi nahi socha tha ki someone will make me fall in love again, but you are so different. Tum mujhe challenge karti ho to be a better person yet tum mujhe utna hi affection deti ho jo hamesha chahtha tha..

V- I love you so much...kya hum aaj se ek nayi shuruwat kar sakte hain?

R- (on her knees)- I love you too Vansh..tumne mujhe woh sab kuch diya hain jo i always wanted..but before we start afresh i really want to tell you the whole truth.

V- Riddhima..

R- No, don't stop me today..bahut mushkil se himmat mili hain..


She told him how she loved Kabir once, that she came to spy on him, how she fell in love with him, how Anubir tried to hurt her and the family..and how scared she was that she wouldn't be able to take care of the family.

R- I am so sorry Vansh..i tried to tell you so many times..but i always felt afraid that you would hate me..


Vansh knew half of the things but still he was furious and the jealousy came back tenfolds, he went away just to get a fresh breath of air and to calm himself down.


Riddhima was sad she knew this would before she could even think of following him, she felt a needle prick her arm and with that she fell unconscious and someone carried her away. Vansh came and searched everywhere but she was nowhere to be found,


V- RIDDHIMA....😡🥺🥺🥺


PS- Hey guys hope you like it..and where is Riddhima? And will Vansh find her in time? Please do comment..if you want to see something else in the story do comment..

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Fantastic

Update Soon

Really Interesting

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Interesting .

I always hated the revenge track. Didn’t watch much of that episodes. I just felt vansh could have took revenge as in scaring Riddhima when he was angry but bringing Ahaana and attacking her was a big no to me. Ruined vansh character completely.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Glass House make out and leaving her like a thrash adds disgust, again can't blame him as Riddhima's character always encourage belittling and disrespect

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Posted: 3 years ago
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It's such a mind blowing start 😍😍

Kickass and Awesome 😍😍

Maybe that person is kabir..

Vansh bashing and beating him and then mature scene 😂😂🙏🙏🙏

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Awesome start Raveena 😘😘😘

And haan. . mujhe bhi romantic scene chahiye....😅😅😅😅

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Part 2


So, i am taking the memory loss route. Please don't bash me..🤣🤣


A girl was running away from someone, she was huffing and falling again and again. Then she saw herself at the cliff and then a gunshot and falling, she woke up with a gasp, only to find her best friend frowning at her,

Se- Yaar, Shefali tu theek hain na? You were shouting in your sleep..

S- Pata nahi yaar..baar baar ek hi sapna aa raha hain..

Se- Aare chal woh sab chod..how was your date with that handsome hunk..

S- Oye..woh sirf mera hain Sejal..uska naam Aayansh hain.

Se- Ooo..koi juicy details bata na?

S- Aise kuch nahi hua hain..he just took me to a coffee date.


Suddenly, someone knocked at the door, it Aayansh he was holding a beautiful bouquet of red roses. She blushed seeing him he looked so handsome in denims and white shirt,

Aa- Good Morning Shefali. I thought ki mein tumhe hospital chod du aaj?

S- Oh so thoughtful of you..but..

Se- Aare but wut kuch nahi..you come inside Aayansh..and you go change nahi aaj phir late ho jayegi.

S- Oh..my god..i forgot aaj important meeting hain. She ran to the bathroom. Sejal looked on and laughed, but Aayansh was serious he looked at her and asked

Aa- Is she remembering anything?

Se- Sometimes, she has the dream of falling from the cliff.

Aa- Thank you for being there for her..

Se- No problem, she is my best friend after all.


Shefali had came all dressed in beautiful white and blue. She looked so beautiful, but Aayansh eyes narrowed when he saw the bullet wound mark on her shoulder. Shefali cleared her throat and he realized he had been staring at her,

S- We should go.

Aa- Ya sure.


Aayansh was driving a bit slow so that he can have maximum time with her, but they reached the hospital quickly, she got down and smiled and said thank you and left, he looked down when his phone rang,

An- Boss, Kabir ko hosh aa gaya hain.

Aa- Good, keep him conscious. Itni jaldi isse maut nahi milni chaiye.


He drove back to a godown, his guards were waiting outside patiently, Angre smiled seeing him happy the past few months have been scary, he had completely changed into a monster since that night,

An- Boss aap ghar kab wapas aaogaye?

Aa- I am not coming back Angre. I will send money to the family but i really don't care what happens to them..they are the reason for all that happened to her.

Aa- Wakey wakey Kabir. He zapped him with a cattle rod.

K- Ahhhh..

Aa- You know when you scream, i enjoy it a lot. Because of you me and my sweetheart had to suffer so much.

K- Riddhima kabhi tumhari ho nahi sakti. Woh sirf meri hain.

Aa- You crossed a line today. He picked up the cattle rod and put it on his tongue. Kabir scream in pain.

Aa- You will beg for your death..but i won't allow you to die. I promise that.


He looked at his watch, it was time Shefali to leave work, he went back to take her home he smiled seeing how she was waiting for him. He was a bit scared he was taking her back to the place where everything changed he only wished that she was strong enough to handle the shock.


Shefali was excited he had told her that they are going on a dinner date today, to tell the truth she liked him a lot, it felt like she knows him somehow. She didn't realise when they stopped, it was a beautiful glass house decorated with photos,

Aa- Go inside have a look..

S- O..okay..


The minute she stepped inside she was shocked so many pictures of her and Aayansh, but she doesn't even remember half the things..furious she turned around and shouted at him.

S- What is this disguise joke Aayansh..meri pictures tumhare saath kaise..

Aa- Kyunki my real name is Vansh Raisinghania. And you are my wife Riddhima Raisinghania.


Ps- Hey guys hope you like the twist..next chapter will have the flashback and Riddhima gaining her memory..please do comment..







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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: 07RB

Interesting .

I always hated the revenge track. Didn’t watch much of that episodes. I just felt vansh could have took revenge as in scaring Riddhima when he was angry but bringing Ahaana and attacking her was a big no to me. Ruined vansh character completely.

Same for me. It just destroyed their relation dynamics. Cannot get myself to watch those episodes ever.

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Really like the way the story took a turn. Did not expect memory loss. But it was nice to see Shefali and ayansh in play... Waiting for next chap.

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Part 3- Flashback


Hey guys, so i was thinking first ki Riddhima ko sab yaad aa jaya, but then i think they deserve a fresh start, so i have changed this a bit. I hope you agree with me.


After dumping his mother in jail, Kabir had went to the hospital to check on Riddhima. He didn't like that Vansh had been alive and playing with him the whole time. Riddhima was his and he will make sure of that. He had kept an eye on them and followed them to the glasshouse.


He was literally burning with anger when he saw them together. He had kept the sedative stolen from the hospital just for this purpose, when Vansh went away for a minute he quickly injected her. Afterwards Vansh was searching here and there for her.

V- (called Angre)- Angre, check whether that idiot Kabir is in the house or not.. after few minutes Angre called him again.

A- Boss, he is missing. But thankfully he had kept his phone with him, i am tracking him.

V- Give me an address, aaj uska khel khatam. Meri Riddhima ko haath kaise lagaya usne..


By the time Kabir had brought Riddhima to the abandoned house she had woken up and was struggling a lot. Kabir slapped her hard,

R- Let me go, Kabir.

K- Kyu Riddhima, Vansh ka pass jane ka maan kar raha hai . But i won't let you go..aaj uski wajah se i have lost everything my job, my Mom and you.

R- Yeh sab Vansh ki wajah se nahi. It is because of your own stupidity. And tumhari Mom ne phele kyun nahi bataya tumhare bare mein..i am sure Vansh would have accepted you.

K- Chup.. before he could say more Riddhima had hit him with a rod..and tried to run away.


She was running towards the forest area, she didn't care if she was lost but she wanted to be far away from him, unfortunately she reached the cliff end. She turned around seeing him standing with a gun pointing towards her.

K- Tum Vansh ki nahi ho sakti ho. I will kill you. Riddhima closed her eyes and remembered her percious memories with Vansh, she was startled to hear the gun go off.


But Vansh had saved her, he was fighting with Kabir both were good at hand to hand fighting. They were now fighting over the gun when it went off again and hit Riddhima in the stomach. By the time police too had arrived, Vansh looked on horrified as she slipped and fell off the cliff into the water.


V- RIDDHIMAAAAA... He tried to go after her but Angre stopped him.

An- Boss, please stop..

V- Let me go Angre..i have to save her..

An- Boss water current is too strong..woh..

V- SHUT UP. Agar woh mujhe nahi mili na i will burn this world .find her anyhow..


Present.


Shefali or Riddhima was on the verge of crying, she didn't knew that Aayansh loved him so much, she felt guilty of not remembering anything.

S- I am sorry.

Aa- For what?

S- For not remembering, for not being your Riddhima.

Aa- It does hurt that you don't remember me. But in a way it is good, we used to fight and spy on each other. This way i can make you fall in love with me again..

S- I think i already am.


He smriks and wagged his eyebrows a bit, then leaned down and kissed her. His aura, his warmth felt so familiar she just wanted to melt in his arms. He pulled her closer to her it had been such a long time since she had been near him.


Only he knows how he survived, there were times where he had been so desperate to end his miserable life without her, for the first time he saw how truly selfish his family is, no one bothered to ask about her, they actually looked relieved that she is gone from the house.

R- Ansh..

V- Hmm.

R- What about your family?

V- I don't live with them. And they never liked or respected you. So, it's better that i stay away from them.

R- Are you sure..

V- Yes.. all i want is you and our future babies...😏😏😏


She blushed but then they stood hugging each other. Vansh and Riddhima may not have had the happy ending, but Shefali and Aayansh vowed to have their happy ending, no more spying, no more toxic family just love and only love...


Ps- Hey guys this the last chapter, hope you guys like it..please comment guys..

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