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Posted: 4 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Meena_J

gur, daadi p ek funny writing perhaps lol & vihaan ki commentary too 😆

LOLL, this has to be the cutest request yet! Lemme see what I can think of. 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: raveena0605

Thank you for writing. It is so good, you have flair of perfectly describing emotions..😍😍 keep on writing...

You're most welcome! 🤗

And thank you for the request! :)

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Posted: 4 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: jisa

Hi Gur !!! It's me 🤣 with a request ☺️ hopefully will be okay with you ❤️

Riddhima has a sweet little mole on her collarbone and I wish you could write some mirchiwali OS where Vansh is frustrated with not being able to devour it but then one day a party, off shoulder dress of Riddhu, jealous Vansh and the control snaps and we get our mirchiwali scene in that so unused bed of theirs 😉😉😉😉😉

Hahaha, oyye hoyye, you've practically written out the OS yourself. 😆

Thode aur details daal lo aur tum bhi writer ban jaogi. 😉

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Posted: 4 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: asmaanixx

Hahaha, oyye hoyye, you've practically written out the OS yourself. 😆

Thode aur details daal lo aur tum bhi writer ban jaogi. 😉


I wish I could write adult stuff but I suck at it !!

It was just a brief idea that came to me while rewatching the episodes 🤣

I couldn't dare to ruin a plot with my sloppy writing.

So handed it over to the best in the field ❤️


P.S. I would love it if you write it in your own way ❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: jisa

I wish I could write adult stuff but I suck at it !!

It was just a brief idea that came to me while rewatching the episodes 🤣

I couldn't dare to ruin a plot with my sloppy writing.

So handed it over to the best in the field ❤️


P.S. I would love it if you write it in your own way ❤️❤️

Haha, you're too cute!

Which episodes were you watching btw? Maybe it'll help me to jog some ideas as well. :P

Itna formal hone ki zaroorat nahi hai. 😆 Tumne pucha, aur ho jayega.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: asmaanixx

Haha, you're too cute!

Which episodes were you watching btw? Maybe it'll help me to jog some ideas as well. :P

Itna formal hone ki zaroorat nahi hai. 😆 Tumne pucha, aur ho jayega.


Thank you so much Gur ❤️❤️❤️

You are love ❤️❤️❤️

That sargiwale raat, when Riddhima mimicked Vansh.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: jisa

Thank you so much Gur ❤️❤️❤️

You are love ❤️❤️❤️

That sargiwale raat, when Riddhima mimicked Vansh.

Omggg, I've been wanting to write something on that night for so long! Ab toh maaza aaye ga. 😎

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Posted: 4 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: asmaanixx

Omggg, I've been wanting to write something on that night for so long! Ab toh maaza aaye ga. 😎


Yeeessssssss !!!!!!

The greedy heart so felt that night could be explored much more.
Was bit sad when Vansh just slept .. Not even a cuddle . Haat bhi bachchi ne forward kiya

C'mon.. Here is your wife looking like a million dollar and willing... and Vansh -_-

Ab tumhi ho bharosa Gur !!!! ❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#59

Hey, I have been reading your one shots....

They are just amazing. Sweet, crisp, juicy, ro-man-tic and adorable!!

You write beautifully.

I also wanted to put forth a request!!

Can you write about that night when Riddhima got tipsy....

If she didn't drink and they just had fun time and then how things would have proceeded beyond that almost kiss.


Or about the same night how she would have requested vansh to sleep with her on bed!


Keep on writing. 💜💜💜

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Posted: 4 years ago
#60

Can you write something on after this track vansh realized that riddhima wasn't wrong and tries to win her back and she going far away we saw riddhima longing for vansh vansh ka dekhna hai🙏🙏

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