Ishq - EK Pratha (IKRS SS) chapter 11 updated on page 11 - Page 9

Originally posted by: ~DaZZ|ing~

Not at all, Avani! In fact, I'm eagerly waiting for you to introduce a lip lock in your story.😉

wow Dazz my thoughts are stuck at liplock now 😳
Can't move any further in the story 😆

Originally posted by: Meenakshi-rg

What a refreshing change your story is . Our show fell prey to the trp game and the focus shiftted to household tussles rather than the whole

le society taboo theme. you are going in the right direction avani .

And these moments of closeness between them amidst all the turmoil makes it all the more romantic. Its more alluring than any physical closeness portrayed can ever be.

loving it ...keep going !!!!!!

Thanks Meenu 🤗

Ishq-Ek Pratha Chapter 11

Viplav and Dhani were looking at scattered belongings and shattered glasses of window panes utterly shocked and unable to believe at what they were looking at.

He had spent so much time and energy and all were destroyed . He stood there for a while coming to terms with what has happened and who could have done it. He checked around to see carefully the destruction . It did not appear to be from some random crowd with the way things were shattered and lying . There would have been chaos in the neighberhood. This seemed to be done secretively.

Viplav was already guessing its his Dadaji who had done such a heinous thing. If someone had asked him the proof he had no answer but his mind somehow was hinting at his family.

His blood boiled thinking of his Dadaji. Or is he wrong?

More he thought of it more determined he became.

"Dhani, lets go "

"Where?"

"Just come with me "He held her hand and strode towards the door when he heard

"Vakil Babu wait. We are not going anywhere " Dhani told him firmly

He turned back questioningly

"Where do you want to go. Whats on your mind. You seem to be very angry and this is not the right mind to do anything Vakil Babu" Dhani pleaded

"Then what am i supposed to do? Sit here and cry?" Viplav shouted back at her

"Vakil babu please calm down.What are you going to do. Please for me" Dhani pulled his arm and begged.

He didn't make it easy for her to calm him down. He was adamant to head out but she knew he had to calm down and think through before he regretted any action done in haste. She very well knew sometimes his anger knew no bounds and might cause a big problem later.

Somehow she managed to calm him a little.

"My Dadaji Dhani. Its my own Dadaji who has done this.

The Great Mahant Dasharath Tripathi. I don't have the proof but i know its him!! "Viplav cried loudly and sat down on the floor defeated.

Dhani sat next to him and said firmly "Vakil babu whoever did this you will give them back. I know you will. But this is not the time "

Saying this she immediately got up .

Viplav was surprised seeing her striding here and there . He realised what she is upto.

What did he expect!!. Its Dhani!! who has gone through such situations more than once and every time she and her Ashram family managed to come out of it. This was their way of fighting back!!

He leaped over things and held her arms

"You need not do this Dhani. Will call someone tomorrow to clear things. I have roof to sleep and its more than enough for now. I had thought of bringing you to a small but nonetheless a sweet home but "He sighed

"Its still a sweet home Vakil babu.You wait.It will be same like before.Lets do it right now. I cannot return to Ashram leaving my home in this state "she smiled.

Looking at her working hastily here and there to clean the things off he couldn't help but be just mesmerised of her again.

Together and with the help of Ashram ladies who reached there as soon as they could after Dhani informed them, it didn't take much time to set things right . There were house window panes and doors to be repaired Viplav could manage with it.

It was very late when ladies could return to Ashram. Dhani was all reluctant of her Vakil babu sleeping in that house. What if they attacked him this time !! But where would he go. Staying at Ashram would create yet another controversy and they already had enough on their plate to bother . She shouldn't be caring about controversy right now . It's his safety !!

"Vakil Babu stay here tonight" she begged

"Dhani i will be fine . Now you go and sleep. You must be tired. Nothing to worry " He held her shoulder and was about to leave

Viplav was in low spirits and was occupied in his thoughts all this while . Dhani couldnt stand it anymore seeing him in such a state

"You are fighting everyday for me and all i can do is watch you struggle "

Viplav realising that his downcast state will worry her more held her face filled with tears "Hey what are you saying ! Don't you dare say that. How should i convince you that what's happening is not because of you . I am not fighting for you. We are fighting for us. And when it comes to my family i came out of such a big illusion because of you . And now " He snapped his finger in front of her face "if you give me a big pleasant smile i can forget everything and sleep peacefully. So... he looked at her longingly .

A slight smile crept on Dhanis face . Viplav looked either side and behind to make sure no one is around and before Dhani could understand the reason Viplav placed a kiss on her forehead quickly.

Dhani was shocked first and her face turned crimson. Viplav held her shoulder and smiled playfully seeing Dhani blusing hard . He said good bye to her and strode off.

He returned home . He could not wait to go and talk to his so called Dadaji. With passing minutes his suspicion was getting stronger . But he had promised Dhani he wouldn't go anywhere that night .

Next morning without much delay he was in Ayodhya Nivas calling out his Dadaji to speak to him.

After he had left this house he had not set foot there.

He had been in contact with his Dadi and his sister. But had managed to completely avoid his mother and Dadaji who had tried incessantly go get in touch with him and talk to him.

Seeing the house caretaker coming out he calked out to him and send the message to his Dadaji.

Hearing his grandson has come Mahant Tripathi was ecstatic and ran out with open arms for his grandson.

Viplav on seeing his Dadaji could not control his anger anymore. Before his Dadaji could take him in his arms he shot back .

" No need of this fake love. I very well know what you are now . I had no idea you could go any length to destroy my dreams ." Viplav shouted on top of his lungs

By then his family had gathered outside surprised.

"What are you talking about now baba his mother tried to cajole him while Viplav stood there staring at Dadaji who was standing there as if nothing had happened .

"Its between me and him. You stay away. No not actually. I know you both are in this together."He glared at his mother

"What are you accusing about? Since you have met that despicable widow everyone seems to be a villain to you "she retorted

"Now don't you dare bring Dhani into this. I have had enough. I know that my house was destroyed by you"

Dadaji still stood still without any reaction which made Viplav blood boil with anger.

"Tell me is it not you "

"Viplav my child do you really think i could do something like that. You will never understand how i felt when you had your own house. I was so proud and here you are accusing me "Mahant spoke seemed to be deeply moved.

For a second even Viplav was affected but realising that this is the same person who played with his emotions and lied to him all along and tried to kill Dhani

"Please stop this drama i know its you "

"My child baba i had told you that society will not allow you to live peacefully here. I was trying to protect and still trying my best. You will now realise why i was lying. Its for your own good. Once you wanted to do post graduation from US and settle there and here you are now taking petty cases in Benaras . Why don't you understand that its not your destiny to be here. Its not just you even Dhani and Ashram is in danger. If you decide to leave Benaras i can take care of Ashrams safety and their livelihood . Please think practically . You have seen how it is here."he said slowly pressing each word holding Viplavs shoulder

A smile with contempt crept on Viplavs face.

"Are you done . Let me tell you one last time . I am not going anywhere. And with your filthy money ABSOLUTELY NOT . Leave Dhani and me alone . I know that you are behind this . I don't have a proof but i can very well find out . This is enough . Let me tell you i have all the documents about your shady dealings. So if anything happens to Dhani or me or to anyone i am involved with in future i will make it public and rest assured i will make sure you are dethroned from this so called title "god you pretend to be . So you better be away from me and my life."

He could see panic in his mothers eyes but his Dadajis eyes was steady.

"My son i know you will not . Yes we have done some things which we are not proud of but this is necessary to be in such a position in this society . You will soon understand and come back to us for sure and this door is wide open for you always .

"I don't have anything to say .You better be out of my way"Viplav strode off

While he was driving back home his thoughts divulged with a call he got. One more person was turning out to be his headache. He had to soon come out with a way to deal with that person.

When he reached his new house with people to repair he found Dhani waiting there alone.

"What are you doing here alone. I told you not to tread alone anywhere"Viplav came running to her

"I called you but you didn't pick up the call. So .."Dhani complained

Viplav smiled "You never listen to me. Do you"

Here they were resilient to all the adversities to have a life together!!

"I don't have anything to say . Bravo, bravo👏 you rock

Originally posted by: zajedno

"I don't have anything to say . Bravo, bravo👏you rock

Thanks Zaj 🤗

Magnificently written, Avani! 👏 Viplav's intuitive mind is working hard rebuffing him from falling prey to his grandfather's deception. A resilient Dhani attempting to logically mollify Viplav was the highlight of this chapter. She allowed him the time he desperately needed to plan his next move before meeting the lion in his dungeon. VIplav's confrontation with the Mahant was all that I had imagined and more. Does Dashrath Tripathi's immorality know no bounds? 😡 VIplav's warning wasn't enough to shake his grandfather's confidence, but in due time he will make an impact with his words and his actions in this fight against evil. The kiss was extra sweet, Avani! It made me miss watching Viplav on my screen more than I could express in words. I don't know when we'll get to see him don a Hindi television character again. 😭 You're making leaps and bounds with this story. I truly hope you won't abandon the beautiful concept you've conceptualized thus far. 😳

My comment has been unreserved, Avani. 😃

Originally posted by: ~DaZZ|ing~

Magnificently written, Avani! 👏 Viplav's intuitive mind is working hard rebuffing him from falling prey to his grandfather's deception. A resilient Dhani attempting to logically mollify Viplav was the highlight of this chapter. She allowed him the time he desperately needed to plan his next move before meeting the lion in his dungeon. VIplav's confrontation with the Mahant was all that I had imagined and more. Does Dashrath Tripathi's immorality know no bounds?😡 VIplav's warning wasn't enough to shake his grandfather's confidence, but in due time he will make an impact with his words and his actions in this fight against evil. The kiss was extra sweet, Avani! It made me miss watching Viplav on my screen more than I could express in words. I don't know when we'll get to see him don a Hindi television character again.😭 You're making leaps and bounds with this story. I truly hope you won't abandon the beautiful concept you've conceptualized thus far.😳

Thank you Dazz 😳 🤗
Yes miss watching them onscreen 😭 I so wanted Viplav and Mahants friction with Tripuraris meddling in between to destroy the whole family and how ViDha would manage that They has such a good base to the story I so wish Indian tv industry was like pak industry
Will try my best to continue the story till it's logical end 😳